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Shotoman


What to say, what to say? Well I live in Utah, and I like Ponies, and Doctor Who, and Doctor Who combined with Ponies.

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This story is a sequel to A Storm of Chaos: A Doctor Whooves Adventure


Isn't that always the way? The Doctor has finally gotten used to the idea of taking a little break from Cyberponies, genocidal madponies, gods of chaos, and the other assorted craziness that is his life, and his future self and companions just crash his place.

Literally.

Well, that can only mean one thing, can't it? Time to dive right back into that wibbly wobbly ball of timey wimey stuff. But can the Doctor deal with another one of himself for any length of time?

No. Probably not.

Thanks to sgamer82 for the creative input.
Going with an old favorite placeholder image for my cover.

Chapters (17)
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Comments ( 139 )

huh...The Snowman and A Town Called Mercy? Nice.

Oh, the Ponds! This should be a fun ride indeed, :twilightsmile:

Excellent! it's been soo long since I read anything on this site, to be honest. It's a pretty good inspiration for my own Doctor Whooves story. Fantastic :twilightsheepish:

I love this so far. I think I'll see how it plays out. I especially liked the usage of some Series 7 episodes and stuff. :pinkiehappy:

Yes! its great to see another good Doctor whooves story. I've been watching the hell out of the episodes lately. xD

He could almost hear his hearts breaking.

He's not the only one. That was perfect. :pinkiesad2:

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay:

THE FEELS!!!!!!!!

Shotoman writing more Doctor Whooves?

INSTA-FAVE.

May I suggest this for your cover image? It's not necessarily better than the one you have now, but more options are always good. Remember to ask for permission before use.

Triple-Doctor? Including the Fourth? Oh bugger.

It's not the first time I've met myself, and it likely won't be the last.

Shouldn't that be 'obviously'?

Wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff aside, of course, :moustache:

I think I've told you this before, but I very much enjoy how you write Derpy as a Doctor companion. There's a sort of 'in her element' competence to it that I enjoy.

Would you like a jelly filly?

Ripple: at least it isn't like the time we did it in our own tardis.

So much yes. Loving the fic so far, can't wait for more.

I am suddenly uncomfortably reminded of what happened to Rose...

Ten, Eleven, AND FOUR!
Holy--

Somehow I don't think the escalation is done.

I also assume they won't tell Four and Romana about the war, but you could surprise me.

Sombra's Dr. Simeon? Alright.

The ending... :rainbowlaugh:
This is getting really good. Keep it up! :pinkiesmile:

12th doctor I assume

Oh, goody. Watch the newcomer ask if he's having a midlife crisis.......

3787156 No, he says that he sees why he will travel with her in the future. I think it's either the 2nd (Patrick Troughton) or the 8th (Paul McGann).

I feel like I had better start planning to read a chapter with infinite Doctors in it.

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well there is a swimming pool in the library

I can't tell if this is the 8th Doctor or the War Doctor - I suppose we'll find out soon enough! I'm now also desperately curious as to how the Doctor and Derpy separated.

Did I see a "The Ten Doctors" reference in there? Love that comic.

3787599 They are in Eleven's TARDIS, and he asked why there was a pool in the library. If he was Twelve, he would have remembered.

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"The Ten Doctors?" I have no idea of which you speak. No idea at all... All my lines are completely original :scootangel:

3789913 no he wouldn't.

After the doctors regenerate they usually have temporary memory loss

I'm just gonna go on record and say, I'm not using Twelve in this story. At all. We've only seen him on screen a grand total of, like, a minute, and the only time during that minute that wasn't in the middle of regen trauma, he was just a pair of eyes. There's just not enough context to really base his character on just yet.

Since it wasn't supposed to be a mystery anyway, I'm just gonna reveal right now that the new arrival is Eight.

Oh my yes, this is going to be amazing. The Doctors all really feel unique, like themselves, but still being "The Doctor." So great job on that. And of course Derpy is best companion ever. Can't wait to see the rest of them ge into things, and how you're going to balance having that many ponies in one story, but it's going to be epic.

Also, thanks for clarifying, I kind of thought it might be two but, that didn't quite feel right, but yeah knowing it's either, I do see it.

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I'm reminded of Donna.

NOO, DEERPYY!!!

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Makes sense.
I mean, he does make good a Doctor Simeon.

Wohoo! Eight has arrived!!
Please have Charley or Lucie as Eight's companion, please have Charley or Lucie as Eight's companion, please have Charley or Lucie as Eight's companion, please have Charley or Lucie as Eight's companion!!!!!!

Sorry, but I love Lucie. Charley's cool as well.

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Riiight... And Pinkie Pie is a Space version of a Time Lord -a Space Lady, if you were- and fought in the Time War.

(Actually, that's my headcanon. So you're original in my book.)

Since Eight, Four, and Ten appeared, and the others are on their way, does that mean War will appear? (War is the War Doctor. I'm just calling him War, because War Doctor is a bit long to type.)
He's a cool Doctor, and I think we need more of him.
Be especially interesting to see the reactions of One through Eight to learning that they'll regenerate into THAT, as well as War's reaction to Nine.



Speaking of which, are you using the novels or the canonical Big Finish as Eight's backstory?

You wrote the 11th Doctor perfectly. :rainbowkiss:

I have an idea!
You could have post-Name-of-the-Doctor!Eleven appear with Clara!
Maybe he could yell at pre-ATM!Eleven about being irresponsible and reckless, and starts sobbing upon seeing Amy and Rory. I can definitely see him doing that.
Granted, Post-ATM!Eleven is still a child in personality; however, he's notably more mature, making plans and calling in backup.

Also is it just me, or is Eleven a mix of the Seventh and Second Doctors? I mean, he has Two's fashion sense and childish personality, while also possessing a bit of a Chessmaster streak in him, as seen in The Wedding of River Song and at certain point all throughout Season Seven, most notably in the latter half.

An external force that can affect the TARDIS? Never a good sign.

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I'll say, remember what happened last time? We got an exploding TARDIS and tons of cracks all over the place. Lets just hope its someone like Celestia, who just needs to contact the Doctor.

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At least the cracks ultimately led to the Doctor getting a new Regeneration Cycle...

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I wonder if he gave Celestia a Time-Space Telegraph like he did for The Brigadier...

Eleven shrugged. "I just want to go on record as saying prep time never really seems to help us at all, and we're probably just going to resort to just doing a thing somewhere down the line, but since we still don't know what's going to happen we might as well make use of time, so I'm in."

So true, so awesome, and, just plain great line that sums up how The Doctor ALWAYS solves things.

Batman can defeat any foe given adequate prep time.

The Doctor, can save the entirety of reality from any threat, using a 'plan' he just cobbled together five seconds ago and is adjusting on the fly.

Crystal heart getting corrupted, not good.

Only four Doctors? Awww not bad but, why not all?

Nine getting pulled somewhere, even though we know this time it isn't Sexy bringing him to meet the rest. Very VERY not good.

Well, the plot thickens, can't wait to se where we're going with this.

I'm enjoying this. Have you ever read The Ten Doctors?

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Yeah. I've totally read the Ten Doctors. This will be a smaller scale story than that one, naturally, but there will be some influences. I've already made a brief reference to it earlier when Four first showed up and using their numbers as names rather than continually writing the Eleventh Doctor or something probably came from there.

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