This story is a sequel to Timeswirl
When Derpy decides to drop in to visit home, she discovers that she's been gone for longer than she intended, and another young mare expresses interest in joining the TARDIS crew. At the same time, something is very wrong with the mayor of Ponyville as he seeks re-election, as well as other ponies throughout the town. It's up to the Doctor and his two companions to find out!
Wow. A story published complete with 11k words.
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Yeah, I usually write my stuff completely before posting it instead of doing it bit by bit.
2834367 On the one hand, that stops annoying abandonment. On the other, it gets rid of suspense.
Not bad, but it felt like a prologue of something bigger. As it is, the ending felt a bit rushed to me.
MAN i am excited!
i somehow knew that all of the subtle "bad wolf" cameos, for lack of a better word, were going to be something big. can't wait to see what he does.
Aren't ponies suppose to say everypony?