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Perceptive Key


Writing and ponies are the only things that have ever really inspired me other than any Disney film. All I have to say is: "If one door closes, look for a window to jump through..."

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This story is a sequel to The Whooves Collection Episode One: In the Other's Place


It is mandatory that you read the First Episode or else you will be left confused at some points.

Twilight and the Doctor end up in Ponyville, 1026 C.E. during Nightmare Night, but the playful scares soon turns serious as ponies are mysteriously found burned, scarred, and colorless. The only clues are sightings of a cloaked figure roaming the streets that night... and it would be hard to find a real monster during the festivities.


Episode Written by: Perceptive Key
Cover art is my own, but will be elaborated upon and improved.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 16 )

The idea for a watch is great! But the Doctor in the show likes to taste the air and things around him to find the year or how old something is.
Time Lord senses and all that.

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Thanks for the critique, and for pointing that out, but counter-point if I may: the Doctor usually wears a watch and tells you the year and everything else based on it- wait...
My mistake, that was Eccleston, and Matt Smith (at times). Not David Tennant. My mistake.:twilightblush:

One thing I noticed: future!Twilight made a reference to hands - "it didn't leave empty handed". Not really important I guess, but I thought I'd point it out.

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It may just be a mistake.
Or is it? :trixieshiftright:
Hmmmm...

o.O MORE NUMBERS MASON!!!!

"At last!" the creature boomed, "I shall unleash all of HELL!"

ALL of it! lol

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Hate: HOW DARE THEE MOCK ME??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!:flutterrage:
PercepKey: Calm down, buddy. I'm sure he was only joking.:twilightsheepish:
Hate: *grumbles* I'll be in the time stream...:twilightangry2:

I am very intrigued in finding out the secrets behind this figure and his master. :moustache: This is a very good way to start an episode. I look forward to seeing where this goes! :pinkiehappy:

Also, the watch is a pretty interesting concept.

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Thanks for the review! Glad to see that you're catching up on this series! :twilightsmile:

This is getting good! I really like the dialogue shared between the Doctor and the two Twilights! :twilightsmile:

i think i will start hunting down this hybrid's master. hey doctor. i'll race you tosee who gets to him first!

damn, the doctor beat me. i just got back from looking for it in the oort cloud. kudos doc, may your hunts be successful.

the next one has the vashta narada? time to listen to "count the shadows" by chameleon circuit.

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