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OpalGlass


I'm a Canadian pegasister who aims to dream big...and hopefully get into a good college in the near future. I tend to use the term 'lol' a lot.

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Suddenly, somehow, this situation became personal.

Sombra is back after being banished by Celestia and Luna over a millennia ago. The Doctor knows that Princess Celestia wants Twilight to find a way to protect the Crystal Empire, but he's afraid that she might not be able to. King Sombra has grown strong during his exile, and the Doctor doesn't know if he's now immune to the affects of the Crystal Heart or not.

Only time will tell.

Because if it fails, he will be the only thing will be standing between the tyrant and the Crystal Empire if it does.

(Note: This takes place during The Crystal Empire Part 1 and Part 2. Not word for word. I'm kinda rewriting it in order for it to run smoother in a story format, but it will follow the plot of the two episodes before getting considerably darker, and will contain some dialog from the episodes.)

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i love how the story is and how you did King Sombra's back story and The Doctor's back story and how they are connected. Also i like how King Sombra is not a evil to be evil pony but a good pony that got involved in dark magic and made him evil. In the end the story flows well and has a lot of good development of all the ponies and i'm looking ahead to see how this story goes. Good luck :raritywink:

Oh but the DOCTOR is never afraid. Maybe scared sometimes but never ever afraid.m(Not counting the episode HIDE):pinkiehappy: Moar is requested.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Dis wuz pretty good. Waiting for more.

You've earned my favor. Hope that you update soon. I'm really enjoying this story.

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