The first of six stories in my Corruption is Magic series.
After Bonbon mysteriously goes missing, Lyra sets out to find her. Her search leads her to Carousel Boutique, where she ends up sticking her nose where it doesn't belong. She stumbles upon Bonbon tied up in Rarity's closet, and becomes next in line to be turned into one of Rarity's dress manneqiuns. However, Rarity's normal routine is interrupted when she gets an unexpected visitor.
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Chapters (7)
Is there going to be any gore and what not in this?
2705522 Yes, there will be moderate gore in later chapters.
guess its going to be explained why there all phyco assholes?
2771989 Twilight, yes
. Rarity, not really 
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................and of course neither celestia, luna the dream walker, or anytone else is gonna notice rarity is gone............. flawed narrativ is often a failed narrative.
3747044 It's not that no one would notice that she went missing, but with proper disposal of the body, no one would know what happened. And the only ones who would know what Rarity and Twilight had been doing would either be dead, or would owe Twilight big.
3747244 that only works in a realm without magic and dreamwalkers. Luna would easily notice the loss of pony dreamers and would be able to figure out the fate of rarity and so many innoccent ponies through these dreams. Sweetie belle will ahve nightmares about this. hell twilight would ahve had nightmares during this time.
also i do not think transmogrification would have killed those ponies to begin with. i mean a bird can be turned into half orange and half bird and sitll function and i am pretty sure that twlight's parents had no ill effects from becoming plants fully. basically it would be like discord turnign to stone. they would be alive so long as someone did not take a sledgehammer to them and break them. they would be trapped in an unmoving ngihtmare but alive.
............. why didn't twilight simply send a message to celestia? if she learned rarity was murdering ponies and tiwligth was in danger, she would have teleported right into the boutique and rarity would ahve to deal with a veyr pissed regent of sun and day.
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you seem to have forgot a detail about sending a message... Spike was TRAPPED. Twilight doesn't have D-mail installed in her and upon mailing the letter the conventional way, it would have taken a few days (as I don't believe there's priority mail in Equestria due to D-mail) where Twilight would have potentially busted herself by seeming to have a weight off her chest. But dream-walking and the complete erasure of ponies from the minds of other ponies IS an efficient argument.
3747591 ............ how do you rease the memory of everyone in a damn town at once? even discord had to take things pesonal touch, literally, with ponies.
and all she would need to do is get a letter right to spike, him breathe fire, and seconds later we have Celestia pissed out of her mind.
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first of all... let's get rid of the Spike argument, she didn't know Spike was in the basement until after killing Rarity and had she tried looking for him at night, Rarity would have probably terminated their contract. Anyways, Twi seemed too traumatized to go to Carousel Boutique other than when she was called there. As for memory erasure... you know Cinnamon Buns? no. No one seemed to remember her so my guess is Twilight knows a Field-type Forget spell but it takes some time to finish burning and erase all memories.
I also had time to think up a theory as to why being turned into Plaster killed the ponies (from suffocation). Your argument was that a bird turned into an orange could still breathe well.... the episode showed it as a single-shot spell of the Transmogrification category. Now plaster.... To me it seemed more like a CHANNELING spell of the SEALING category which would definitely block he Pony's airway. Now your argument also had Discord stuck in stone which was another sealing spell... but who said that Discord needs to breathe? Checkmate
3749810 considering the frog that was chagned was alive and functioning HOURS after the transformation, i am pretty sure ti was alive.
also twilight parents were turned into potted plants. potted plants do not respirate the same way animals do. and they survived.
more than likely any transformation done by magic can be reversed, though with varying amounts of success. being transformed into a living, inanimate object, rather than mixed with something else like futtrshy did, probably would mean you are dormant and can be changed back.
also even if twilight had such a memory spell it would not work. people would find triggers all over the place and begin to remember. wheather them wondering why this house was vacant, or even havning pictures of the missing ponies. so that part of the plot does not work.
and as said, Luna. not only would that memory field unlikely affect canterlot, but would likely not affect an alicorn. and luna would notice that there are ponies disappearing. and with rarity's disapperance, she will investigate. and she will learn.
and you can't suffocate when you are turned into somethign else. by that logic tiwlight should have been dead as dead by the cockatrice. unless a unicorn can hold breath for hours.
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but that's just it, what you are referencing are TRANSFORMATION spells and sure, I had forgot the Cockatrice.... but there's a possible reason for it. That this particular stone-turning is another transformation magic, I read another fic yesterday where the Cockatrice stare works by petrifying every little magic particle in the subject's body, this could explain body conservation. And anyways.... even if the Plaster was indeed a transformation.... it ONLY transformed the skin, the organs weren't transformed as well thus meaning they still had the same requirements to keep working as if it was a normal pony.
I imagine an alternate ending: Sweetie telling Cheerilee about this, or sneaking off to the police.
I love it
'Nother alternate: Twilight doesn't kill Rarity, but brings her to all mighty Tia, justice is served, yadda yadda yadda
u had to kill lyra didn't u?!
Didn't u?!