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But then suddenly, i didn't read the rest.
Ahahahahaha! Funniest tragedy story ever.
I can't quite tell if this was intentional or not. But who the hell cares? Cracked me up.
WaitwaitwaitWAAAAAAAAIT! The unicorns attacked cloudsdale, yet rainbow dash didn't even ask twilight sparkle or rarity if they helped... That's idiotic. Oh, and scootaloo in heaven
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POOR RAINBOW DASH!!!
I demand a Comedy tag.
189453 o.o I can't find what's funny
... uh... eh... *sigh*
Favorited anyway.
What is this i don't even.....................
sorry, the plot is a bit messed up.
189463
And do you think they would say "Oh yeah rainbow dash we also helped destroying your hometown" OF COURSE THEY WOULD LIE OR THEY WERE NEVER EVEN PERT OF THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was a shadowbolt on nightmare night. Lol.
Poor Scootaloo. Lucky they replaced her!
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It was one of the most incoherent stories I've ever read. Were you, ah, writing under an influence?
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Story's shit but I love the cute pic of dash
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Well, we all won't find the same things funny. Which is okay, since in the end, I was the one who got a great laugh out of this thing.
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"Scootaloo's dead. But don't grieve! We're replaced her with a sexchanged copy!"
"Gummy's dead! But he's just a pet I threw parties for and grieving just sucks and isn't healthy. So SMILE! Your loved ones are dead!"
Like I said guys, this was done in 2 nights and I was quite tired.
Also, please do explain where the comedy in this is. I would really love to fix it for future fanfics.
189739 I don't drink, I am 15. I'm also pretty sure I mentioned how tired I was when writing this. Not to mention it's my first fan fiction ever. Please provide constructive criticism or don't leave a comment. Kthxbai.
189463 I wouldn't say that's idiotic. Any other person would assume that she helped in the fight to banish the Everfree Ponies.
189866 Not sure if good comment or destructive comment...
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Well, I am glad that you stay away from mind altering substances. Your story still feels disjointed and directionless, like a mind under a good dose of cannabis, though.
Because, seriously, what the hell happens? Heart attack? A whacky conspiracy story? Genocide?
I hope you are going to write again, but maybe you will consider creating a basic outline of the story before writing it?
190184 It wasn't bad at all! I loved it!
SOME!!
190140 and THAT WAS TRULY AWE
190184 Well I guess my mind was producing its own "alcohol" at the time, because as I've said, I was very tired at the time I wrote this.
I gave this 5 stars because it made me laugh.
The first half was good. Had good potential.
But it seems you rushed it AND struggle with endings.
Don't write while so tired?
This fanfiction inspired my name at least
This was VERY SAD and hard to read but I did it and it is well written but scootaloos passed in this one and that is enough that I hate it but I still think its good