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Dark Side of the Rainboom


Princess Luna has run out of milk for her breakfast, but that's nothing a quick trip to the grocery store couldn't fix, right? Everything is not as it appears to be, as Luna soon finds out. Who are these ponies? Why do they behave so oddly? Why can't she just eat a simple breakfast? This story explores traits central to every pony's being.

Cover image by Raikoh-illust: http://raikoh-illust.deviantart.com/art/Princess-Luna-264629770

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A/N: I wrote this because... well because I felt like it. This is a story I actually put a lot of thought (relatively speaking) into. I'm really proud of it, so I care not if no one else likes it. I figure though that if just one other person liked the story out of ten thousand, then it was worth it. Yes it starts out kind of comedic, but I decided to keep the sudden tonal shift. Anyway, the reason I write this comment is for those who don't like it. I would really appreciate it if you told me what exactly you don't like. That way, next time, I can try to do better. Thanks everyone.

this is getting a bit surrealistic...at the same time, in a political sense, correct

i'll just say to being neither agreeing or disagreeing

meaning I like it

2475882 Glad someone did. Well, as my previous comment stated, as long as one person likes it, that's all that matters. Thanks.

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