Twilight and her friends need a vacation, so Celestia suggests her private island as she's not using it, This is the story as seen by Twilight of about thirty six hours on this island. There's no plot (of any kind) and no real direction; they're just getting some well deserved relaxation. (This was a February Write off submission)
Other then a few grammar and flow issues, which most people ~especially myself~ make, my only criticism is that it you should use some extra spaces between the paragraphs. This would make it easier to read and flow a bit better.
awesome
Best story EVER!