Dreyden D. Durtschi a human teen, is trapped in a alter net world that has been forced apon him. In his time he needs to learn to accept this new world and learn how it works.
Dreyden D. Durtschi a human teen, is trapped in a alter net world that has been forced apon him. In his time he needs to learn to accept this new world and learn how it works.
First sentence of the intro, and you have already lost a potential reader.
How could a book hit Pinkie? Her Pinkie Sense should have allowed her to dodge it with no issue.