Heh. For a minute there I thought Rarity was just going to blindly tap Blueblood's flank.
But then we'd have to tag this story with a 'Tragic' tag. I have no doubt that when everything is eventually fixed, if Rarity did that, she'd murder Blueblood, then hang herself. @@;
Heh. Is it very wrong of me to be more annoyed with Whooves than with the Prince?
Anywhoo, I'm sort of surprised he hasn't been swarmed by now. Judging from Rarity's glowing description of him- at a time when she had nothing to go by but his family and his looks- he appears to be a rather handsome specimen. Which is something many writers seem to ignore, and I can only blame personal disdain for his personality (which is far from perfect). If we can infer Fluttershy is beautiful because she had a meteoric modeling career, and Rarity because she can wrap stallions around her nonexistent pinkie, what does that tell us about the colt who made Rarity swoon?
And I can't think of anypony left to pair him up with, either. Perhaps I am missing the obvious? I take it he's going to accompany them to the castle?
Also, while I don't persoanlly think heat exists, it's a funny idea. I was just wondering: Wouldn't that make couples exceedingly rare? I mean, if every mare just jumped the nearest stallion every time they went into heat, it would all be a giant collective of half-siblings. Of course, if they pair up with whoever they end up with, then couples could erupt, but it does not seem like that would work for 'Shy or RD...
Every time I watch an episode or read some other fanfic, THIS FANFIC pops into my mind and starts making me laugh and completely think about everything in a strange light when I see an episode I half expect everyone to start talking nasty.
I'm going to pony hell ain't I?
On a lighter note ya'll should read cupcakes or sweet apple massacre or watch the cupcakes animation on youtube, that'll kill your wingboner and/or dirty thoughts.
I was leery when I first heard of this story but after seeing who the author was I caved. This was fucking awesome and strangely enough everyone feels completely in character, which is weird considering what's going on. But hey, ponies be crazy.
I am OVERWHELMINGLY conflicted about this fic. Its funny, its well written, its engaging, the characters are in fantastic form, I absolutely adore every action Twilight has performed and every line of her and the Doctor's dialogue. Other than Doc Whooves being a little to much like the actual Doctor Who (I didn't exactly like how he actually was a time traveling pony with a TARDIS, seemed a little out of context), every character has been silly and fun. I was in hysterics during some scenes. Oh dear lord when Rainbow got rewarded... the sound barrier thing. That was unbearable. The imagery is just so descriptive and all the dialogue is believable and well written and everyone is as in character as I can imagine given the... situation. And the bit with Twi putting her head between Pinkie and the Doctor while tied up is just so unbelievably SILLY! I love it! Even the pairings are great! AJ is making me laugh every time she speaks.
...and then I remember it's freaking ponies from my favorite cartoon and I get reaaaalllly creeped out and slightly disturbed. Like I said, conflicted. And I still can't wait for an update. Maybe its the impeccable writing and engaging comedic premise that has me hooked, but damn if I ever let on to anyone that I read this.
Why you have to write Twilight so adorable and likable?!
So they will be in heat until they either get pregnant or use the Elements? OK, Twilight and Applejack I understand because they haven't gotten any yet. (Well Twilight had fun with the SS but if impregnation is the drive that can only help so much.) But how the hell are Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie and Dash not knocked up by now? They've been going at it for hours! For that matter, it seems the others can control their normal heats quite well, but Fluttershy is a succubus! How does she not have a house full of foals at this point? I mean the one benefit of estrus ponies is that you can basically have safe sex for all but 1 week out of the year. Apparently Fluttershy is the only one who can't control herself during that week, but since that's the case how is she not a mother?
191320 May involve why everypony screamed to "HIDE THE STALLIONS!" when they heard Fluttershy was in heat. She can't get pregnant if there are no stallions... that aren't behind four locks and eighteen barricades. Each.
Either that or Fluttershy overdoses on birth control anytime her heat is coming up.
While Fluttershy in heat is terrifying, she only had one "rampage", and she had the foresight to take a contraception potion the week before. That's why she doesn't have a house full of foals. After that, she usually stayed in her cottage during her heat, none the worse for wear. Occassionally she gets out but she always takes her contraceptive and Big Mac can shut her down.
Isn't this heat magically generated. It may not coincide with the 'biological' process that would allow conception. The cast said that it was happening a bit before their normal time, so they might have to wait for the normal period before conception can occur, which might well mean a week+ of non-stop sexxing.
Yeah I think you said that in Progress she preferred the smaller form... Luna vs Space chapters I think... Just wasn't sure which she was using. S1 form is cuter but S2 is way better for comedy.
SPLENDID! I love this story. It is full of shipping, but no detailed sex scenes. very, very, nice. SPLENDID! JOIN ME IN MY CONQUEST TO SAY SPLENDID MORE OFTEN! SPLENDID!
191099 XD NICE... That commercial is now 50% cooler! XD
GET THERE FASTER! HER FUTURE HUBBY IS IN THAT CITY!!!!!! UPDATE FASTER!
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
p.s. Don't you just LOVE how you're getting out like 2 or 3 chapters a day, and there are still those saying for you to update faster? Maybe it's just me, but... XD ROFLMAO. I find it HILARIOUS how impatient some ponies are! XD
I'm just happy that this finally made it over from fanfiction net. Now I can follow all of my favorite pony related fics at the same location. How wonderfully convenient.
DAMN! YOU UPDATE FAST AS HELL!!!
Not complaining thought!
yay update
Funny story
I gigglesnorted in a rather embarrassing fashion. Poor (Lucky?) Big Mac!
Another great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
Heh. For a minute there I thought Rarity was just going to blindly tap Blueblood's flank.
But then we'd have to tag this story with a 'Tragic' tag. I have no doubt that when everything is eventually fixed, if Rarity did that, she'd murder Blueblood, then hang herself. @@;
Heh. Is it very wrong of me to be more annoyed with Whooves than with the Prince?
Anywhoo, I'm sort of surprised he hasn't been swarmed by now. Judging from Rarity's glowing description of him- at a time when she had nothing to go by but his family and his looks- he appears to be a rather handsome specimen. Which is something many writers seem to ignore, and I can only blame personal disdain for his personality (which is far from perfect). If we can infer Fluttershy is beautiful because she had a meteoric modeling career, and Rarity because she can wrap stallions around her nonexistent pinkie, what does that tell us about the colt who made Rarity swoon?
And I can't think of anypony left to pair him up with, either. Perhaps I am missing the obvious? I take it he's going to accompany them to the castle?
Magical, Colorful, Mountable fun, WITH RAINBOW!
Fun to play with, and to eat!
.....Stallions not included.
This is very strange.
But very funny. But strange. In a funny way.
Also, while I don't persoanlly think heat exists, it's a funny idea. I was just wondering: Wouldn't that make couples exceedingly rare? I mean, if every mare just jumped the nearest stallion every time they went into heat, it would all be a giant collective of half-siblings. Of course, if they pair up with whoever they end up with, then couples could erupt, but it does not seem like that would work for 'Shy or RD...
And what am I doing analyzing this?
Keep it up.
NEED MOAR CHAPTERS NOW. (Yeah I wanna hear more about my mom :)) Just Ignore Applespectrum she doesn't know what she wants
Sunovanutcracker on a BLUEBERRY MUFFIN.
Every time I watch an episode or read some other fanfic, THIS FANFIC pops into my mind and starts making me laugh and completely think about everything in a strange light when I see an episode I half expect everyone to start talking nasty.
I'm going to pony hell ain't I?
On a lighter note ya'll should read cupcakes or sweet apple massacre or watch the cupcakes animation on youtube, that'll kill your wingboner and/or dirty thoughts.
Just a suggestion
Still going strong I see. LOL. Erotic reign of terror. TERROR!!
Fluttershy was doing something, between his legs. His eyes were crossed...
I'm a freaking pervert now. NEED MOAR!
I was leery when I first heard of this story but after seeing who the author was I caved. This was fucking awesome and strangely enough everyone feels completely in character, which is weird considering what's going on. But hey, ponies be crazy.
191147
Some people would get dirtier thoughts from that kind of thing
I am OVERWHELMINGLY conflicted about this fic. Its funny, its well written, its engaging, the characters are in fantastic form, I absolutely adore every action Twilight has performed and every line of her and the Doctor's dialogue. Other than Doc Whooves being a little to much like the actual Doctor Who (I didn't exactly like how he actually was a time traveling pony with a TARDIS, seemed a little out of context), every character has been silly and fun. I was in hysterics during some scenes. Oh dear lord when Rainbow got rewarded... the sound barrier thing. That was unbearable. The imagery is just so descriptive and all the dialogue is believable and well written and everyone is as in character as I can imagine given the... situation. And the bit with Twi putting her head between Pinkie and the Doctor while tied up is just so unbelievably SILLY! I love it! Even the pairings are great! AJ is making me laugh every time she speaks.
...and then I remember it's freaking ponies from my favorite cartoon and I get reaaaalllly creeped out and slightly disturbed. Like I said, conflicted. And I still can't wait for an update. Maybe its the impeccable writing and engaging comedic premise that has me hooked, but damn if I ever let on to anyone that I read this.
Why you have to write Twilight so adorable and likable?!
also: poor Spike.
To those that are suprised at the update speed and those that want more:
a) There is still more
b) He hasn´t posted it yet
c) When he reaches that point update speed should drop dramatically.
d) Deal with it.
191103
/clears throat
Well, Mrs. Cakes had a unicorn and a pegasus. While both parents are earth ponies.
And we've seen very very few actual couples yet, so... You might be on to something.
So they will be in heat until they either get pregnant or use the Elements?
OK, Twilight and Applejack I understand because they haven't gotten any yet. (Well Twilight had fun with the SS but if impregnation is the drive that can only help so much.)
But how the hell are Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie and Dash not knocked up by now? They've been going at it for hours!
For that matter, it seems the others can control their normal heats quite well, but Fluttershy is a succubus! How does she not have a house full of foals at this point?
I mean the one benefit of estrus ponies is that you can basically have safe sex for all but 1 week out of the year.
Apparently Fluttershy is the only one who can't control herself during that week, but since that's the case how is she not a mother?
It's so delightfully ribald! Ooh! Such tawdry naughtiness! I'm all aquiver!
191320
May involve why everypony screamed to "HIDE THE STALLIONS!" when they heard Fluttershy was in heat. She can't get pregnant if there are no stallions... that aren't behind four locks and eighteen barricades. Each.
Either that or Fluttershy overdoses on birth control anytime her heat is coming up.
All right, in answer to everypony's questions:
While Fluttershy in heat is terrifying, she only had one "rampage", and she had the foresight to take a contraception potion the week before. That's why she doesn't have a house full of foals. After that, she usually stayed in her cottage during her heat, none the worse for wear. Occassionally she gets out but she always takes her contraceptive and Big Mac can shut her down.
i am happy to join you all in pony hell
I. WANT. MORE. loving it so far. I VOTE FOR MORE SPEEDY UPDATES. WHOS WITH ME?!
Right... Well... That was... strange... Not sure what I expected... May or may not have been SOMETHING along those lines... but... you know... Ponies.
SO! Anyway, After reading through all 8 chapters (Consequently staying up to 2:20 at night I might add) I can safety say...
You're going to pony hell.
But, it kept me up till 2:20, so it was certainly bloody good!
And some parts had me in hysterics! (At 2:20 at night)
Still, Hell... Now...
Actually... Finish the story first.
Then hell....
Damn.......You are funny....Keep it up!
191008
That's because quite a bit of it was already written and up on another site, but it was removed due to complaints.
191412
Ah. Very good.
One more question so I can picture things properly.
Wen Luna was playing with Pipsqueak was she in her S1 form or S2 form?
Isn't this heat magically generated. It may not coincide with the 'biological' process that would allow conception. The cast said that it was happening a bit before their normal time, so they might have to wait for the normal period before conception can occur, which might well mean a week+ of non-stop sexxing.
191469
Season 2 Form, thought she can switch between them.
191480
Yeah I think you said that in Progress she preferred the smaller form... Luna vs Space chapters I think...
Just wasn't sure which she was using.
S1 form is cuter but S2 is way better for comedy.
Equestrian pony population increase, pronto?!
191262But but but, it's the Doctor, how can you not like the Doctor
Inside the Castle....
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Please keep up the awesome work my good sir.
SPLENDID!
I love this story. It is full of shipping, but no detailed sex scenes. very, very, nice.
SPLENDID!
JOIN ME IN MY CONQUEST TO SAY SPLENDID MORE OFTEN!
SPLENDID!
191480 Soo... are the mane gonna have foals? Because that would be cool.
Laughing my head off right now. It's gotten so absolutely random and crazy.
191099 XD NICE... That commercial is now 50% cooler! XD
GET THERE FASTER! HER FUTURE HUBBY IS IN THAT CITY!!!!!! UPDATE FASTER!
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
p.s. Don't you just LOVE how you're getting out like 2 or 3 chapters a day, and there are still those saying for you to update faster? Maybe it's just me, but... XD ROFLMAO. I find it HILARIOUS how impatient some ponies are! XD
Take ALL the stallions!
191445: Aight then
Towards the end there Guile's theme popped into my head. Wonder why.
One is never enough:
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I wonder how Derpy would be in this tale~
191147I loled at sweet apple massacer
191575
THAT PICTURE. I didn't feel like sleeping tonight anyway
AND THE EUPHEMISMS CONTINUE!
-DELTA-
I'm just happy that this finally made it over from fanfiction net. Now I can follow all of my favorite pony related fics at the same location. How wonderfully convenient.
Also this is awesome. That is all.
191008 I second that!
Taking care of Dinky, and eating muffins. Or maybe beating up Heavy for taking and eating her muffin.
NOOOOOOOOO!
I've run out of chapters to read!
you update as fast as if you had a manticore chasin ya not that im complainin but its just somewhat rare to see that keep em comin
This is great also:
“OF COURSE!” Pinkie Pie shouted dramatically, looked back over her shoulder.
That line made my freaking day!