Just...I can't take it any more. It's too screwed up.
Oh yeah, and the "all female officers shall be required to wear tiny miniskirts" reference was hilarious. Now if only I could figure out where the hell that came from.
I can't decide which I like more - 'Why Didn't Ah Stay At The Farm?' or this. I must say I've been laughing equally through both - this just has more laughs due to more chapters. Nevertheless, I think it's awesome.
okay, i think i heard two references there. one from fluttershy whispering "again" and i think that's from watchmen. And also the miniskirt one (which i highly aprrove of, and has given you a much higher standing in my personal opinion) which i believe is from fullmetal alchemist?
That FMA reference made my day thatnks for that. Anywho, been really enjoy in the story so far. I won't lie this story has some pretty suggestive humor which is a nice change. Looking forward to more especially for that "Sonic Sexboom". I know I'm horriable.
same thing happened to me. I was so releived that I wasn't gonna have that empty feeling when I read an unfinished fan fic, but it seems that i'm still gonna have to wait But I gotta say, THIS IS FUNNY!!!!
Everyone thinks she is on an unstoppable rampage just because no one (well, almost no one ) could say no to her. While she is really far too nice to force anyone who doesn't want to be with her.
As amusing as it is on the surface, the implications are . . . disturbing. Some of them are fine, such as Braeburn, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash because they worked out their feelings semi-rationally. Fluttershy is particularly disturbing though because her conquests are quasi-rape (or at least they seem that way after the second pony).
Overall the others are somewhat disturbing as well because it gives the impression that they are little better than beasts and are ruled (or at least easily overruled) by their instincts.
I could sit here listing out what I found the funniest in this whole story. But then I'd basically be retyping the whole fic inside this comment box.
So suffice to say this is one of the best fics I've read. The Doctor and Twilight, Luna and Pipsqueak, Dash and the ridiculous shit she's getting up to with her own small air force (that make FMA references, no less)...it's all perfect.
Last chapter, Celestia won all of bronydom by making a pleading filly face. Then Luna did the same in this chapter. Lord knows I would not hesitate to heed such a forward call. xD
fuck, I hardly understand what's going on... all this heat and shit... felt like jacking off, but thought it really weird, and quite frankly disgusting So........ Fluttershy is the meanest bitch when comes to fucking right??? Help, I am so lost
You wrote ponies in heat? I hate ponies in heat. But I like your writing... Well from the description it seems it only the elements that suffer, not the entire species, so I guess I can make an exception... Though I still dislike the concept in general...
Alright, first off, I normally avoid clop fics out of principle, so I was very hesitant to reading this.....BUT I'M SOOOO GLAD I DID!!!!!! The jokes are spot on, quite well written, and it's not overly focused on the sex part. Take all the stars, and I can't wait to read more, totally tracked!!!
It's "oh know the T-Virus was released" then me and three others have to escape. After several hours of traveling and searching we finally created an escape plan and a cure. However nobody ever seems I be ready for the Tyrant, so as alway I have to use my vial of the anti virus to fire the dawn breaker.
Which in turn means I have to be left behind and get nuked EVERY,DAMN,TIME
Nope, it's the whole species... It's very conflicting to have one of my favorite authors and such an amusing story yet absolute loathing for the premise.
Estrus, AppleDash, wingboners.
Those are the 3 things, in descending order, I hate the most in "normal" fanfiction.
And I was just done processing the first 2 pages...
I just commented on the last chapter a few minuets ago that I wanted more of this and here it is! ARE YOU A MAGIC GENIE?!?
Big Mac - Killing the buzz like a bawss
Lol at the Luna roleplaying.
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I hear it's very nice in Pony Hell this time of year.
It's got it's OWN TVTropes page? OMG!
......OH MAI!!!!
This is certainly the funniest sexual comedy since "Noises Off!" Well done sir! Well done!
This fic is made of pure gold and win.
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What? Link or it is a lie.
YAY
Oh man.. Like a mo fuggin Bawss indeed.
Keep it up, Great giggles are to be had.
Just...I can't take it any more. It's too screwed up.
Oh yeah, and the "all female officers shall be required to wear tiny miniskirts" reference was hilarious. Now if only I could figure out where the hell that came from.
Well, there is still more to come until he has actually posted everything he already has finished up *whistles*
I can't decide which I like more - 'Why Didn't Ah Stay At The Farm?' or this.
I must say I've been laughing equally through both - this just has more laughs due to more chapters.
Nevertheless, I think it's awesome.
- Midnight Specter
This is the kind of fanfic your parents warned you about, kiddies.
I wish I wasn't laughing this hard, but there you go.
LIKE. A. PONY. BAWSS!
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Here it is. Just found it.
IT FINALLY GOT ON FIMFICTION
-faaaavs-
tracking.most definitly tracking.
okay, i think i heard two references there. one from fluttershy whispering "again" and i think that's from watchmen. And also the miniskirt one (which i highly aprrove of, and has given you a much higher standing in my personal opinion) which i believe is from fullmetal alchemist?
That FMA reference made my day thatnks for that. Anywho, been really enjoy in the story so far. I won't lie this story has some pretty suggestive humor which is a nice change. Looking forward to more especially for that "Sonic Sexboom". I know I'm horriable.
Well, back to being an unproductive noob
fluttershy is a force of nature, and rainbow dash is apparently as awesome and inventive regardless of what she's doing...
yes,this pleases me.*strokes a fluffy cat* but come on!I want to Applejack/Sorian and I want it NOW!!!!!!!!
same thing happened to me. I was so releived that I wasn't gonna have that empty feeling when I read an unfinished fan fic, but it seems that i'm still gonna have to wait But I gotta say, THIS IS FUNNY!!!!
Give Spike a break, damn it.
Trollestia...ha... I can not stop laughing!
Mm-hmm...wait...
1. FMA reference? Mustang wasn't just a random name???
2. Big Mac KO'ing Fluttershy's heat-induced sex-rage?
3. Pipsqueak and Luna playing Pirate?!?
.........I think I brained my find. Can lost someone it for me?
Lol, Fluttershy was great.
Everyone thinks she is on an unstoppable rampage just because no one (well, almost no one ) could say no to her. While she is really far too nice to force anyone who doesn't want to be with her.
As amusing as it is on the surface, the implications are . . . disturbing. Some of them are fine, such as Braeburn, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash because they worked out their feelings semi-rationally.
Fluttershy is particularly disturbing though because her conquests are quasi-rape (or at least they seem that way after the second pony).
Overall the others are somewhat disturbing as well because it gives the impression that they are little better than beasts and are ruled (or at least easily overruled) by their instincts.
God damn, I'm enjoying this way more than I should be.
Splendid work.
I could sit here listing out what I found the funniest in this whole story. But then I'd basically be retyping the whole fic inside this comment box.
So suffice to say this is one of the best fics I've read. The Doctor and Twilight, Luna and Pipsqueak, Dash and the ridiculous shit she's getting up to with her own small air force (that make FMA references, no less)...it's all perfect.
Last chapter, Celestia won all of bronydom by making a pleading filly face. Then Luna did the same in this chapter. Lord knows I would not hesitate to heed such a forward call. xD
188391 we're all going to hell for this. let's try to fun on the way there!
I read the first chapter
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Zero took a deep breath. "She was wondering if any of us had ever done it while breaking the sound barrier... And if it was even possible."
All three stallions were silent for a few moments. Mustang spoke first.
"I think I'm in love."
"You're not the only one, soldier," Galland chuckled. "Well Zero... I don't know for sure, but I'm willing to find out."
i lol'd so haaaaard
Bigmac = Fluttershy you are dealing with the swag bawsslike master you stand no chance
fuck, I hardly understand what's going on...
all this heat and shit...
felt like jacking off, but thought it really weird, and quite frankly disgusting
So........ Fluttershy is the meanest bitch when comes to fucking right???
Help, I am so lost
I remember reading this on fanfiction.net soooooo long ago. Surprised it is up here now.
Anyways I found this incredibly funny and can't wait for more!
the moment when your sister tries to mimic you in sex..................know that feel bro
is this whole story different from the fanfiction.net version?
was that a watchmen reference? cuz if it was, you just made my 5 star list
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I <3 you so much for this!
Please keep up the Epicness my good sir.
You wrote ponies in heat? I hate ponies in heat. But I like your writing...
Well from the description it seems it only the elements that suffer, not the entire species, so I guess I can make an exception... Though I still dislike the concept in general...
SO happy to see this here. I've been following it on FanFiction, but you just made things that much easier for me.
Alright, first off, I normally avoid clop fics out of principle, so I was very hesitant to reading this.....BUT I'M SOOOO GLAD I DID!!!!!! The jokes are spot on, quite well written, and it's not overly focused on the sex part. Take all the stars, and I can't wait to read more, totally tracked!!!
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EVERY,SINGLE,DAY
It's "oh know the T-Virus was released" then me and three others have to escape. After several hours of traveling and searching we finally created an escape plan and a cure. However nobody ever seems I be ready for the Tyrant, so as alway I have to use my vial of the anti virus to fire the dawn breaker.
Which in turn means I have to be left behind and get nuked
EVERY,DAMN,TIME
You are still speeding up my ride to pony hell sir...I'm enjoying every bit.
188652 I quote Firewall:
"I think I am going to hell for this. I think I am okay with this."
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it's Colonel Mustang from Full Metal Alchemist
Nope, it's the whole species...
It's very conflicting to have one of my favorite authors and such an amusing story yet absolute loathing for the premise.
Estrus, AppleDash, wingboners.
Those are the 3 things, in descending order, I hate the most in "normal" fanfiction.
I read it and loved every moment of it. A ticket to Pony Hell, please. I guess I really do belong there...
P.S. Big Mac is a BAWSS.
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