As expected, this was funny. Insert dozens of other fail-safe praise here. I realy enjoy this, it's teh adult humor I like most about this. When Spike said "I don't think I could've kept blowing it" I had to stop reading, and grab a pillow off of my bed so I could laugh without bothering the whole house. You sir, are a terrific writer. You have no equal when it comes to humor fics. None at all.
1: Twilight might be Spike's sister figure and authority figure, but Celestia is actually his mother figure since it is word of god that she raised him while he and twilight were too young. 2: Landing on his tail should not have hurt Spike. He uses the damn thing as a jackhammer. 3: They just locked Spike iin the TARDIS with Luna. You are a terrible person.
296837 1: Well, Spike's had a long day. 2: He landed on it at a funny angle. 3: Don't worry, she's unconscious. She won't wake up until the heat is exhausted.
ooo funny as fuck man funny as fuck. but poor spike only one to not get laid poor poor spike make it up to the guy in the epilogue in some way plaese. anyways still funny as bucken hell
296880 Didn't you notice though? It isn't over...yet They still have plenty of rutting to do in the epilogue of course, unless the epilogue just deals with all the relationships that stem out of this massive rutting session. That sounds pretty good too.
I knew Twilight was planning something when she became accepting of the Doctor's plan back when they were heading for Canterlot. I'm glad I called it right.
I hope the epilogue answers one question I have that hasn't quite been answered yet. Namely, does a magical heat make them fertile or no? If so, then there's going to be one helluva population boom in... I'd say 9 months. (I know horses/ponies generally have an 11 month gestation period, but they're more like humans in the show so I'd assume something closer to that. Either that or we can assume they have lifespans like horses and so will die that much sooner, so I'd prefer to take the more human-esque route.)
"It's not that kind of story!" Oh Pinkie Pie, that line made me crack up.
Twilight you genius, you had it all planned out from the start. Well played Twilight, well played. Or should I call her Twilust. Also wasn't Spike locked in the Tardis with Luna. Looks like things are about to get... Lunanaughty. YEEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!.
...Don't worry, I'll be right alongside you in Pony Hell, you for corrupting MLP (and especially for what you did to poor Fluttershy), me for what I'm about to do to Twilight.
...Think they'll have marshmallows for us to roast over the fire that will torture us for eternity?
Most. Awesome. MLP. Fic. EVER. Finish this quickly, because the suspence is killing me.
Oh come on! Spike isn't even gonna be able to get in on any of the action? Totally unfair, he's done more over the course of this story than anypony else. I think he's EARNED himself a pony ride or two.
Well, equestria's going to have a major population growth...
BTW, found an error you made: "Miss Twilight and mah sister would probably kill their gentlemen if either of ‘em so much as looked at her for too long.” It should be gentlecolt.
First! Real comment later.
Haha Naughty Science
Thinks of the poor colts and fillies that are going to be affected, or are they................. nevermind they are hopefully to young
Great chapter by the way
I predict so many babies.
Oh Twilight. I love it when you're brilliant.
Bam! Nation wide fuck fest!
Twilight you clever bastard
As expected, this was funny. Insert dozens of other fail-safe praise here. I realy enjoy this, it's teh adult humor I like most about this. When Spike said "I don't think I could've kept blowing it" I had to stop reading, and grab a pillow off of my bed so I could laugh without bothering the whole house. You sir, are a terrific writer. You have no equal when it comes to humor fics. None at all.
YAY ALMOST DONE! Wait...Damn. Almost done
Well, its been a good run chaps. And now, twilight shall get it on like never before.
So, for the rest of the day and/or possibly week, nothing much gets done but everypony's happy?
I think I can live with that.
lol hilarious twist. and a good story to boot.
Well, thank goodness. I was almost worried there was going to be all of this buildup and no release.
Heh. Buildup and release. I'm funny.
damn, this story has gotten way to entertaining, I must be twisted somewhere deep in my mind to enjoy this kind of stuff.
Oh well its good reads
*upon realization*
Pony on the left: Oh, no...
Pony on the right: Oh, no...
Me: What? Oh, son of a...
You're too late this time, Doctor! Bwahahahaha!!!!
Darn, no appropriate Twilight emoticons... Play me off, Johnny!
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I really hope, wish and wait to see a story longer than this one and aboutt as funny from you... I am dying from laughter.
Lol spike . I somewhat hope that the ending changed the rating of the story :3
Big Macintosh is munching on carpet? Hubba hubba hubba
I absolutely lost my shit at the cock blocking the goddess of the night sky part.
lol... well played mr/mrs
"You would cock block the princess of the night sky?!"
Pardon me, I'm just gonna collapse in a laughing pile over here. Feel free to poke with sticks.
put it up
NNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
1: Twilight might be Spike's sister figure and authority figure, but Celestia is actually his mother figure since it is word of god that she raised him while he and twilight were too young.
2: Landing on his tail should not have hurt Spike. He uses the damn thing as a jackhammer.
3: They just locked Spike iin the TARDIS with Luna. You are a terrible person.
Things are about to get sticky.
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1: Well, Spike's had a long day.
2: He landed on it at a funny angle.
3: Don't worry, she's unconscious. She won't wake up until the heat is exhausted.
Twilight you motherfucker.
Great chapter by the way, made me laugh about 4-5 times. Can't wait for the epilogue.
Cheers,
jangledorf
ooo funny as fuck man funny as fuck. but poor spike only one to not get laid poor poor spike make it up to the guy in the epilogue in some way plaese. anyways still funny as bucken hell
Not sure if if I should be happy that they solved their problem, or sad cuz it's over.
296880 Didn't you notice though? It isn't over...yet
They still have plenty of rutting to do in the epilogue of course, unless the epilogue just deals with all the relationships that stem out of this massive rutting session. That sounds pretty good too.
HOLY FUCKING SHIT LOL
in the last they were all like well lets do this
Cant wait for the epilogue
296794 Well she won't be cock blocked for very long.... she was in the Tardis and Spike was trown inside
Laughs have been had, and fucks where not given.
And then hilarity ensued, and ensued, and ensued.
I knew Twilight was planning something when she became accepting of the Doctor's plan back when they were heading for Canterlot. I'm glad I called it right.
I hope the epilogue answers one question I have that hasn't quite been answered yet. Namely, does a magical heat make them fertile or no? If so, then there's going to be one helluva population boom in... I'd say 9 months. (I know horses/ponies generally have an 11 month gestation period, but they're more like humans in the show so I'd assume something closer to that. Either that or we can assume they have lifespans like horses and so will die that much sooner, so I'd prefer to take the more human-esque route.)
"It's not that kind of story!" Oh Pinkie Pie, that line made me crack up.
My sides, they hurt from all the laughter .
Twilight you genius, you had it all planned out from the start. Well played Twilight, well played. Or should I call her Twilust. Also wasn't Spike locked in the Tardis with Luna. Looks like things are about to get... Lunanaughty. YEEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!.
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Seems legit.
...Don't worry, I'll be right alongside you in Pony Hell, you for corrupting MLP (and especially for what you did to poor Fluttershy), me for what I'm about to do to Twilight.
...Think they'll have marshmallows for us to roast over the fire that will torture us for eternity?
Most. Awesome. MLP. Fic. EVER. Finish this quickly, because the suspence is killing me.
Wow some pony actually out smarted the doctor
...Why am I seeing an influx of mature followup fics coming within the next week?
Can't wait until the epilogue!
296880 just enjoy the afterglow
Oh dear. I have to wonder where Zecora is now. After all, she made it to the edge of the forest.
Oh no...what if this also hits Zebrica? or the ENTIRE WORLD?!
And than they had sex. And all was well.
Oh come on! Spike isn't even gonna be able to get in on any of the action? Totally unfair, he's done more over the course of this story than anypony else. I think he's EARNED himself a pony ride or two.
Well, equestria's going to have a major population growth...
BTW, found an error you made: "Miss Twilight and mah sister would probably kill their gentlemen if either of ‘em so much as looked at her for too long.” It should be gentlecolt.
296897 Thank Celestia, I thought I was the only one thinking that. Give the little sumbitch a break, willya?
kudos man, that chapter was awesome.
Okay seriously, raise your hand if you saw that coming...
And then they all had sex. Oh such sex they had...
My body is ready for the implications because I know that's all we're getting.
another great chapter
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this at the end there
any way good show old chap