Not that I'm not enjoying the fic, but considering the world ending disaster is "Destruction By Snu-Snu", wouldn't Captain Jack Harkness have been a better choice than the Doctor.
OK so Dash's little whipping session was handled well enough to let me stop being defensive about it. Also other than the comedy going strong, I'm overjoyed to see the actual shipping being worked in. Twilight x Doctor, AJ x Soarin', and Pinkie x Braeburn I'm sort of indifferent to emotionally but they are characterized and written quite well. And I do prefer them to every single other M/F ship for those 3 I've read. Fluttershy x Mac I have to echo 'Shy's sentiments. For the sweet Rarity x Spike from last chapter (that I unfortunately glossed over due to my Rainbow related freakout) you get a solid gold diamond encrusted cookie
Now I only wonder if Dash will have any "normal" shipping in this story.
I also wonder what if any side effects the Elements will have once activated. I'm assuming it could be anything from something the entire population of Equestria rolls over and has a nap after enjoying , or the population increasing by 50% in 7 months.
"he pressed on and trusted in his luck that he’d fine the way out" - "Slowly, he hooves began trailing down his powerful chest to" - "why where you trying to catch me with a crudely constructed rope snare?" -
Fluttershy is best pony in heat. It's not rape if she asks you to do it and then apologizes after! Fimfiction also needs to add a blushing Fluttershy emoticon for this story.
im not gona claim to be the first but... damn>.<
any how great chapter again!!!
Braeburn can't catch a break.
To quote Mustang, who managed to summarise how I feel about this in 9 words:
"This is turning me on and that scares me!"
RUNNING!
I have no idea how we got here that fast.
So how much longer until we get to the end of the line? Pony Hell should be coming in view very, very soon...
so delightful. me gusta
The Lols Has been Doubled
I'm on a high-way to pony hell. Great
What a fantastic chapter! I lost it at the Fluttershy and Big Macintosh conversation,
winning
Hey Luna! Look at me! I'm on my way to the Pony Hell! *Guitar solo*
"For nookie"! Ha, that was funny
FIRST!!!
This story never ceases to amaze, its absolute hilarious to read
I can't wait for the next chapter
oh god....the humor...i cant stop laughing at the ending part of big mac and fluttershys section
226867 well at least your in good company.
YEEHAW!!!
This keeps getting better and better...
My thoughts about this chapter and probably this fanfic.
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It's unholy how good this fic is.
You, sir, are a devious, devious devil.
"highway to hell" was playing when i read this... its a sign!!!!
To quote Fluttershy
“... yay.”
This never ceases to make me laugh.
".,.and that scares me!"
A world destroying orgy? Caused by horny ponies?
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" And when you said practice you meant sex, right?"
"Eeyup"
"...yay."
Made me
We're all riding that express train to hell. Then again I hear riding a bomb down is a 20% cooler way to get to hell
Well, uh, gosh. Is it wrong that I kinda liked Luna's very small cameo in this chapter?
So glad to see this updated. Getting a huge kick out of this story. Favorite part of this chapter would be Fluttershy by far!
"By practice you meant sex, right?"
"Eeyup."
"...yay."
OMFGROFLOL
Freaking love this fic. Just have to get used to the temperature difference. Also, 107 readers?!?!?!?
DAYUM.
so guys... any DJ here im planning a party in pony hell
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my thought
As soon as Fluttershy went I completely lost it!
This fic keeps getting 20% cooler with every chapter!
an awesome story with funny adult humor you sir are
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Ooh... poor Braeburn! Better get those Elements STAT. And I see the imagine spots from Progress are spreading.
And... surprisingly deep conversation between Big Mac and Fluttershy there, too. I liked that one.
I'm literally driving a train filled with angry Grizzly bears and clones of Vin Diesel in a blood rage into the very pits of hell when i read this
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
Running and Rutting: How the world ended
Another hilarious chapter. Keep um coming!
Also:
D'awww at SoarinApple and FlutterMac :D
this is what i did when fluttershy went
Eh could be worse...The world could be getting destroyed in way where NOpony gets laid....
Not that I'm not enjoying the fic, but considering the world ending disaster is "Destruction By Snu-Snu", wouldn't Captain Jack Harkness have been a better choice than the Doctor.
228053 The difference is Jack wouldn't be able to control himself. He make plan B plan A!
227300 Did you just make a Dr. Strangelove reference?
OK so Dash's little whipping session was handled well enough to let me stop being defensive about it.
Also other than the comedy going strong, I'm overjoyed to see the actual shipping being worked in.
Twilight x Doctor, AJ x Soarin', and Pinkie x Braeburn I'm sort of indifferent to emotionally but they are characterized and written quite well. And I do prefer them to every single other M/F ship for those 3 I've read.
Fluttershy x Mac I have to echo 'Shy's sentiments.
For the sweet Rarity x Spike from last chapter (that I unfortunately glossed over due to my Rainbow related freakout) you get a solid gold diamond encrusted cookie
Now I only wonder if Dash will have any "normal" shipping in this story.
I also wonder what if any side effects the Elements will have once activated. I'm assuming it could be anything from something the entire population of Equestria rolls over and has a nap after enjoying , or the population increasing by 50% in 7 months.
(Oh and hey, new rating system, cool!)
226894 You have failed to be first. Enjoy the story and try again next chapter.
“This is turning me on and that scares me!”
pretty much sums it up.
"he pressed on and trusted in his luck that he’d fine the way out" -
"Slowly, he hooves began trailing down his powerful chest to" -
"why where you trying to catch me with a crudely constructed rope snare?" -
Update more often, damn you.
This story is amazing.
Fluttershy is best pony in heat. It's not rape if she asks you to do it and then apologizes after!
Fimfiction also needs to add a blushing Fluttershy emoticon for this story.
Tack on one more.
"Express elevator to hell.
Going down!"
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Pinkipies summery of the story so far
To summarize: YES