Haha, threesomes... Anywho! Great chapter, and I love the Master in it. The Doctor, too, is hilarious, and I can't wait to see Twilight and him go for a romp in the hay. Wow, that was embarrassing of me to say Can't wait for another chapter!
Well, the resolution of the story is bound to be as interesting as the rest of it (and just as hilarious) mostly because even if the heat gets fixed, everypony is already pregnant. Actually figuring out just who the foal's fathers are is bound to be interesting.
On that note, it'd be a right pity if only Twilight (and probably Applejack, although I'm doubting it from the last part of this chapter) end up without a foal of their own after all this. (hint hint )
265809 Wouldn't that be Celestia dammit? 265920 Yes... It does indeed, Though I believe if it does come to that I think a rating change would be in order.
As the story grows longer and longer their situation just keeps getting harder and harder, and the whole thing seems like it will just explode all over all of them.
Oh no, this is going to be longer than expected which mean more chapters? OH whatever will I do? Oh that's right continue to laugh my ass off from this brilliant work of going-to-hell-fic. Keep up the awesome work.
266357 needs more fire and flames -plays guitar riff- HAHA I don't get to make Dragon force jokes very often. Love how you have the Doctor Master stuff going on. Now let see. last we saw the Shadow Bolts they where getting yelled at by Luna, so I think they might actually be there to help every pony out. That or help Pinkie gang (YAY) Braeburn.
When this is all event is over, I want to read some hangover chapters. XD good morning! -various grumbling- hmm should I tell them this is an annual event or let them find out on their own?
...unless you TRY to lose it on a daily basis and fail. I suppose I could understand the frsutration then, but seriously, I don't see the issue. If you know where to go and who to see (Generally it's assumed that Berry Punch if you're a pony or Lyra if you're a Human in a dirty Equestria would be able to help you with that) anypony can lose their virginity with relative ease. In today's society, it seems to me that it's harder to STAY a virgin than it is to lose it.
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Woot first comment!
Great chapter! When Rarity said the "Forbidden Statement" my reaction was Goddammit.
Looking forward to the next!
Poor Twilight...
.......Plan B has been selected... Lol and what is doing Luna... she is in the bed chambers doing what?...Actually dont awnser that....
Pure win on so many levels.
Haha, threesomes... Anywho! Great chapter, and I love the Master in it. The Doctor, too, is hilarious, and I can't wait to see Twilight and him go for a romp in the hay. Wow, that was embarrassing of me to say Can't wait for another chapter!
welll....
that was interesting
HUZZAH! Action packed chapter and some more of that good old sexual tension!
Trixie is so kinky :)
And do you mean longer in actual length or time-wise between chapters?
Geez. No one told Rarity rule #1 of adventuring? Never tempt fate in any way, shape, or form? Because fate loves to prove us wrong on an hourly basis.
Lol Its true. They always object to the virgin one.
Of course it wasn't a threesome with Braeburn.
It was a foursome.
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I think that sums up Plan B nicely.
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Hahahaha yes!
Soooo.... Twilight tastes like grapes? not very surprising
I like grapes
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*sniff MMM ahhhh i love the smell of pony hell in the morning
Well, the resolution of the story is bound to be as interesting as the rest of it (and just as hilarious) mostly because even if the heat gets fixed, everypony is already pregnant. Actually figuring out just who the foal's fathers are is bound to be interesting.
On that note, it'd be a right pity if only Twilight (and probably Applejack, although I'm doubting it from the last part of this chapter) end up without a foal of their own after all this. (hint hint )
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Wouldn't that be Celestia dammit?
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Yes... It does indeed, Though I believe if it does come to that I think a rating change would be in order.
The doctor he is so...doctory
This story is just hysterical.
is pony hell a bad place?
The Doctor is like: THIS IS GOING TO HELL TO FAST !!!!
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Well... you'll be in good company. Or bad company.
A lot of bad company, actually.
...
Yes, it's a very bad place.
HOLY SHIT! Twilight is a living nuclear reactor!
Twilight the Nuclear Mare? I can dig that.
As the story grows longer and longer their situation just keeps getting harder and harder, and the whole thing seems like it will just explode all over all of them.
This story is filled like a submarine.
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fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/012/d/d/art_thou_mad_twilight_fim_by_leodude74-d4m5z1a.jpg i think this happend when trixe called her a virgin
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Not enough fire and rage.
Oh no, this is going to be longer than expected which mean more chapters? OH whatever will I do? Oh that's right continue to laugh my ass off from this brilliant work of going-to-hell-fic. Keep up the awesome work.
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Considering the fic this is, that image is both oddly appropriate...and hilariously disturbing
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That...might not be the best word to use here
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I think it was more like her going all elements glowy.
Why can't I stop laughing?!
The best part will be when Celestia magics away all the evidence, and memories and this happens all over again next year.
Celestia uses it as her one and only chance to get laid every year.
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needs more fire and flames -plays guitar riff- HAHA I don't get to make Dragon force jokes very often.
Love how you have the Doctor Master stuff going on.
Now let see. last we saw the Shadow Bolts they where getting yelled at by Luna, so I think they might actually be there to help every pony out. That or help Pinkie gang (YAY) Braeburn.
When this is all event is over, I want to read some hangover chapters. XD
good morning!
-various grumbling-
hmm should I tell them this is an annual event or let them find out on their own?
265819 You do mean what is Luna doing right? Not what is doing Luna (or who)?
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What, 'submarine'? I don't see any problem with that.
She who makes a mighty door often neglects to do the same to the walls around it. :P
I'm looking forward to Zecora's return.
Wait a minute, what does Twilight mean she's not a virgin? She told the Doctor to deflower her only a few chapters back.
To much comedy
Heres to hoping the first plan fails ! *Sip.wav*
Must. Stop. Laughing!
What's wrong with being a virgin?
...unless you TRY to lose it on a daily basis and fail. I suppose I could understand the frsutration then, but seriously, I don't see the issue. If you know where to go and who to see (Generally it's assumed that Berry Punch if you're a pony or Lyra if you're a Human in a dirty Equestria would be able to help you with that) anypony can lose their virginity with relative ease. In today's society, it seems to me that it's harder to STAY a virgin than it is to lose it.
265920 it does indeed
of course twi is a virgin shes had a sheltered life after all
266822 Don't you people read the author's notes? You really should.
.......Rarity why did you say that?
When Pinkie has to correct you, you KNOW you done fucked up....
266221 Well I certainly wouldn't wanna end up in any good company!
Props if you get it.
Well, at least the updates can't come faster than I can read them.
*pause*
...damnit it didn't work.
Bwahahahaha!!!!
This series bring so many lulz!!!
...Need air!!!