Out of nowhere, the Princess sends a group of ponies to Ponyville preceded by a hasty note explaining that they have an important message for them. What could this message be, and why hasn't the Princess come herself?
NOTE: The prologue is only semi-related to the plot. It's a method I use to explain a large amount of complicated background so that it doesn't bog down the plot.
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Huh, well over 250 words per minute reading speed, and that's if you clicked it right when it got posted. Impressive, I'll give you that!
I wonder if there's any way to find out exactly who .5'd you. It wasn't worth it, that's for sure. Maybe a 4/5, but I only skimmed a bit.
I'll give it a 5/5 to try to balance everything out, but my starry things hate me at the moment, so...
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Meh, I've got bigger fish to fry than a single troll. If my story's good enough, it'll stand on it's own and overcome the .5. If not, then maybe it's deserved. Either way, rate however you feel is appropriate. I'm not one to beg for 5 stars just because some nub decided he'd take his own time to do something so petty. Thanks for the vote of confidence, and please read the whole thing through! Check out my other stuff if you're bored too =P
(Hey, I said I wouldn't beg for 5s. Seeking views is a whole different story
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Read it, like it, tracking it.