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MaxKodan


Just a pony lovin' guy

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Some dreamers are just better at it than others.


Entry to the May Pairings Contest 2020.

Image originally by Esuka.

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Also, big thanks to Aragon for editing help!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Great job! The fact that it has my favorite pony and my favorite character from the movie was already a selling point, but the story itself is very well done.

5/5

The right kind of dumb and goofy, but with an amazing amount of heart. I love it. Here, have fitting music.

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!


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Was there any other way to write a fic with these two?

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Probably not, no. Yo ho!

I loved this, and some weighty topics mixed in the excellent action. Which was some pretty spectacular swordplay by the way. And I particularly loved the reveal of what Celeano's nightmare actually was. Really, this was a good tale from beginning to end. My only thought is it needs a better description: I almost didn't read it, and that would have been a shame.

This take on Celeano reminds me of my favorite takes on the Beavers from Narnia fanfiction. The ones that point out that it's a hundred year winter... and they've got marmalade. They've got a sewing machine. The Beavers are collaborators, because that's what you have to be to survive in Jadis's Narnia. And, just like Mr Tummus, when the chips are down they still side against the tyrant without even needing to be asked.

And seeing his old self die was really moving, especially for that view on fear. It really is trying to protect you, and it may just be taking it too far. I've had conversations with my anxieties that went like that.


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That's some great music.

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I agonized over the description for ages and still I'm not really happy with it. But it's better than it used to be. Who knows? I may change it later, but it's a bit late for that now =P.

I'm glad you enjoyed, though! Fight scenes are pretty new to me, and even with all the help and editing it feels good to know that it came out understandable and smooth enough.

Edit: Screw it, I'm changing the description anyway.

Damn that was fun to read. It was a really nice touch how you were able to tie her inner conflict to a physical manifestation of herself.

What an absolute beast of a story, the pacing for the action was perfect, deeply drenched in character and drama.

“I kept them safe,” she said. Her voice cracked and warbled with an emotion that hadn’t been present before. “Didn’t I do the right thing?”

“Yeah,” Celaeno said, sliding the dagger into its sheath and releasing Luna’s sword back to her control. “Your job’s done, now.”

I never thought that the story would delve here and so deep so fast.
An impeccable story drenched in action and drama, with a very powerful message delivered by the end. I will remember it in the future

I loved it! Thank you for writing this Captain Calaeno would be proud

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