I InnerWisdom have found a new element of harmony. I call it the element of Knowledge. I must go on an adventure to find this element and to make sure my friends and my student find their Inner Peace.
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Right, the story in itself isn't too bad (for fanfiction standards), it's actually a pretty neat concept, but you need to do some work and not rush it so fast, but that's not the main issue here.
This story is begging for an editor. I would offer myself but I have so very little time on my hands as it is. There are so much poor grammar, and so many mistakes and errors it's impossible to ignore and be immersed in the story, which as I say, is rather good.
Hope this helps!
Yea. I admit i rushed...I will do an update and continue from their. Thx for all the help my friend and remember peace starts from within.
hahaha "Red Pony" XD
Oh look another one of those 'seventh Element of Harmony' fics,
how original