Chapter 1 (Revised)
Raiden walked through the rubble of the airport where he had killed senator Armstrong. As he was walking, he saw a flash of light. He drew his High Frequency blade and slowly walked over to it. As soon as he saw what made the flash, he started running. It was the wolf. He ran over to it, and kneeled next to it.
"Wolf," he said.
The broken down K-9000 lifted his head. "Raiden. My pain inhibitors have shattered."
"Are you alright?" Raiden asked, looking over his damage.
"Scanning... I've suffered severe body and internal damage. Conclusion: I am not alright."
Raiden pulled up his inventory and pulled out some repair nanopaste.
"Wolf. Here. This should get up up and running."
Raiden handed Wolf the nanopaste , who accepted it. Wolf's systems slowly repaired to a functional status.
"Raiden. This will suffice." he said.
"Then get up," Raiden said, "We aren't finished y-"
Before he could finish, the Metal gear exploded, sending Raiden and wolf flying.
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Twilight looked over the potion she just received from Zecora. Before she got very far, something in the distance made a loud boom.
"What in Celestia's name was that?!" She screamed. She looked towards the sound. "Oh no..." She rushed towards the source.
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Raiden and Wolf hit the ground. Hard. Raiden gives a groan as he sits up.
"Wolf... What just happened?" He asked.
Wolf got to his paws. "I believe the metal gear exploded. What happened after...I cannot say."
Raiden got to his feet and looked around.
"Yeah...last time I checked there wasn't a forest for...who knows how many miles."
Wolf activated his augmentative mode and looked around.
"This place does not show up in my data base."
"What? How can that be? Your data base contains the names of all cities in the world."
Wolf nodded.
"Yes. It does. So something is terribly wrong."
Raiden deadpanned."You think?"
"This is not our world." Wolf looked around, scanning the area.
"That's a hilarious joke." Raiden said. "You're internal processor must be damaged."
"I am not joking."
".... Ok then where the hell are we?" Raiden asked, still not quite buying it.
Something rustled nearby, to which both Raiden and Wolf took defensive positions.
Raiden calls out, "Who's there?!"
Twilight steps out, staring in awe.
Raiden looked on, equally shocked. "...Wolf, you weren't kidding."
"I told you."
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Twilight stared on in shocked at the strange...creature stood before her. She kept her composure though.
"I am Princess Twilight Sparkle. I don't suppose you could tell me who and...um, what you two are?"
Raiden raised an eyebrow. "Princess huh? Well, my name is Raiden. I'm a cyborg. This here is my pet dog."
"I am designated as K-9000."
"He likes bones", Raiden said, slowly returning to his usual nonchalant attitude.
Twilight nodded slowly. "I see...Well, it's a pleasure to make your acquaintance. Why don't we take this to a more suitable location and talk a bit more?"
Raiden nodded. "I think that'd be a good idea. You seem harmless enough."
Twilight gave a little smile. "Wonderful. If you would please follow me." She walks off into the forest, Raiden and Wolf close behind her.
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Raiden looked into his cup with a strange smelling liquid in it. "You uh...mind telling me whats in this?"
Twilight looked at him, a little confused. "It's uh...just some tea leaves and water."
Raiden sniffed the liquid again. "Doesn't smell like any tea I've had..." He sips it anyway. "....But it's pretty good."
Twilight opened up her note pad, holding it in magic. Raiden doesn't really question it and simple hovering isn't too strange to see. "So, let's begin with a few questions."
Raiden nodded. "Ask away."
He quickly regretted those two words.
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"Are you finally done?" Raiden asked, thoroughly sick of all the questions.
Twilight mulled over her two completely filled notepad. "Hm... Yes. I think I'm finished."
"Thank goodness. I don't suppose you have an area I can sit and rest in do you?"
Twilight nodded. "Of course. I have a spare bedroom you can use for the time being."
Raiden gets up and nods. "Lead the way."
Wolf and Twilight both get to their appropriate walking body parts and the three of them head upstairs. Twilight leads them to the spare bedroom she mentioned and opened the door. "Here you are." She said with a smile.
Raiden and Wolf entered the room.
"Wow. Thanks Twilight. This'll be perfect. We appreciate it." Raiden smiled in thanks.
Twilight smiled back. "It's no trouble. Make yourselves at home."
The two take a seat on the bed with Raiden giving a soft sigh.
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Twilight handed Spike the letter she wrote for Celestia. Spike burned it away and watched as the ashes fly to Canterlot.
"She should be here tomorrow Twilight. Let's hope she actually waits until then." Spike added with a chuckle. "You exhausted him with all your questions~"
Twilight giggled softly with her little brother. "Yes I know. But you know how I get when I see something new."
"Yeah I know."
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I already have a MGR fic in the works... and I am still going to publish it. This won't stop me...
The chapter is fine, by the way.
Interesting...
Nice to see you get more descriptive but your pacing is too fast for my tastes, overall: pretty good.
Noooooooooo! you got my hopes up!! I wanted Snake not the grey fox clone
FUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH!!
Needs way more description. Raiden runs through the forest? Show how he runs, what he dodges and shit.
Also, I'll admit to not having beat Armstrong yet, but last I checked Raiden's HF blade gets broken and he ends up using Sam's Muramusa instead.
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Yeah. I know what you mean by more description. My editor, Lord of Nothing, didnt get a chance to edit it yet. Sorry.
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Shoulda waited to publish then?
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I was planning to. Didn't think it would get submitted so quickly.
I'm hesitant to read this after seeing the same amount of dislikes as likes, and from some of the comments. But it's MGR. It was a good game, if really short and not worth the $60, so I'll give it a read.
2267160Please notify me when you do then. Actually, I'll just follow you. Easier that way.
I loved Metal Gear Rising I was just let down that they only talked about Snake in the codic chats, maybe Snake could join Raiden in this fic? It would be nice to see those two working together again.
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I'll think about it. Thanks for the idea.
2302695 No prob, be almost like the only real time they fought back to back on MGS 2, just this time Raiden is more kickass then back on the big shell.
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Well, I actually have beaten MGS 2.....once. I was never able to beat it again.
2302716 MGS 2 is a good game, cause back them, in most Sneaking games, you got busted 9 out of 10 you won't make it out of the fight, but in MGS 2 and the above, you got busted, you had a 50/50 of being able to fight back with out getting killed.
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I know. In the newer ones, sneaking isn't as easy, but still doable.
2302733 Yeah in MGS 4 most of the time it was like fuck sneaking, cause of you being able to pick up and unlock guns.
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I know. But I intend to have Raiden sneak a lot more in this story than in MGR.
2302750 I see really I've been thinking about doing a MGR fic, but I've got the new Tomb Raider game a few days ago, and well yeah, not sure if I'm going to do an MGR or the new Tomb Raider game.
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Well, it's up t you my friend. BTW, thanks for the fave.
2302767 No prob, I'm an MGS fan, and I think MGR is a nice change from the guns in the game and at fucking last the MGS games have a jump button.
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Hehehe. No kidding. It really helped.
2302803 Yeah took the makers of the game qutie a few years to put one in. But really now it seems like that no one in the MGS world, can jump unless they have robot legs lol.
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Well, game informer only gave it a 7.75 saying that the level design was dull.......WHAT!?!?!?
2302828 Meh, the those guys must be blind to give it that rating.
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Well, they gave a Lego game a higher rating.....that really pissed me off.
2302846 You are shitting me! Who does those guys hire, little kids to do the rating for them?
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I don't know......People are blind these days. While I understand why they gve it around an 8, musty because the blocking was difficult, why give.....Lego undercover or whatever a 9.5!?!?!?
2302868 That I do not know.
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Well, nothing we can do. The next chapter will be out either next week, or the week after. I'm working on finishing MLC first.
2302886 Can't wait for the next chater of this fic.
Great so far, good luck with the next chapter.
Pretty rush, but its alright.
Khhh.... Give me about a half of hour to compile a review of this.
I won't be lying, it won't be pretty but it will be honest and unbiased(Or atleast I will try to do so.) Please understand that I only want to see this story bloom into something worthy of Feature Box
Lore... their is none.
1. Blade wolf has no need for pain receptors, he is an 'AI'.
2. Raiden's HF blade was broken by Armstrong so he still has the HF Muramasa blade at this point.
3. Raiden's cyborg body is the custom cyborg body, not the standard cyborg body.
4. Metal Gear what? What type of Metal Gear are we talking about here? Metal Gear Rex, Ray, Excelsus?
5. Also how did the Gear get to Equestria in the first place and where did it come from?
6. Story was way to fast and I feel like their should be about 80% more writing to this. Allot of the story seemed to be skipped over and almost none of the events or happenings were explained at all.
Sorry if I sound like a jerk, I just wanted to point some things out.
awww, canceled? I was just getting ready to read it too!
Ah well ,shit happens. pass the syrup. I'll still read and fave, but dissapointment will ensue when I finish reading
EDIT: that was good, if a bit fast. Hmm, mind if I take this and expand it? It might take me a while, but This would make for a good outline.
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If you're curious, I'm working on a Metal Gear Rising fic. I'm going to release Chapter 8 soon.