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GjallarFox


You now face godlike judgement. May it extend eternally.

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This is a compilation of short stories originally written in verse, and rewritten into prose because I got bored. Poetry is how I started writing, so I thought it only right that I should share my prowess in verse. This volume is dedicated to the deaths of the Mane 6.

Warning: Content in this volume WILL be very dark, where other volumes will be light and bright and happy. I have given fair warning. Reader descretion is advised.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 23 )

Honestly, I enjoyed that. I don't know what the hay is wrong with people :/

One tiny criticsm -- I would have changed one line to "find you and kill you" instead of "find and kill you". It just sounds a tiny bit darker to me.

Excellent poem, excellent story :rainbowdetermined2:

AJ is next. :pinkiecrazy:

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:pinkiecrazy:
You're more like me than I thought. I like you.

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People can be such buttwrenches... It makes me wonder.

<3 DarqFox

I absolutely loved this, the end when it appears she's reciting the poem as an oath brought a tear to my eye.

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Mission accomplished. :twilightsmile: I only have Flutters and Pinkie left before Twi's grande finale.

<3 DarqFox

why you gotta go and make me cry? :fluttercry:
excellent writing, it's one of those 'I love reading it because it makes me sad' stories, can't wait for the last one

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:yay: Mission accomplished. I made somepony cry. Now I have to write that tear-jerker of an ending, which I know EXACTLY what I'm doing with. That'll come out sometime by the end of the month. Maybe.

<3 DarqFox

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No, it can't be maybe, I don't like the waiting game... although the end of the month isn't too far away...
I curse you waiting game :ajbemused:

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I have spring break this next week, so there's that. I'll see what I can do. I'm a bit stressed out.
I can promise within 10 days.

<3 DarqFox

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You don't have to stress yourself out to get it done, just work on it when you can, I can deal with waiting. :twilightsmile:

Fucking FlutterSparkle...
You should have revisited the others more.

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I believe the term is: TwiShy.
The reason I made that last chapter was because Flutters and Twilight were the last alive. Flutters didn't die from the poison. Twilight didn't slice her throat open. But this volume would not be complete without those two dying. After all. This volume is dedicated to the deaths of the mane 6, including the immortal Twilight Sparkle.

Don't hate on the TwiShy, brah. :3

<3 DarqFox

D'awwwww, That caught me completely by surprise, :heart: TwiShy!

Lars approves, Lars really approves.

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Vol. 2 is awaiting approval. Stalk me to see it as soon as it hits the wall.

<3 DarqFox

2397275 Thou hast officially earned my stalk, and the stalk of all of the others that appreciate poetry such as this, this sir is a masterpiece!:moustache:

I'm conflicted.
I don't know if i should cry of sadness or happiness.
Sadness due to the death of the 6
Or happiness due to how well it was written and executed.
Yet only the last chapter got a tear out of me while i was reading it.
I honestly don't know how i should feel, but i like the poems and the story's well done sir.
~Tobben

This was an amazing piece right here.

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