I hang out in the Cool Kids Club to feel good about myself
This story is a sequel to Collision Course
It was the day after the dream that the rain started. An unrelenting, unforgiving rain. Just like...
Some tragedies cannot be averted.
That does not mean they cannot be remedied.
But first we must return to our reality.
First we must wake up.
Sequel to Collision Course, and the next step of the Enervation Sequence.
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And here it is, at long last! We start on the journey to find out what those last two sentences at the end of Collision Course meant!
Only took you three months to get started.
Oi. Shaddup. I'll write as fast as I write! Which isn't fast at all.
But I do want to write this story faster than I wrote Collision Course. No idea if that'll happen or not, but, well, a pony can hope, right?
Hoping you will all enjoy where this journey is going to be going,
Journcy Out.
(For now~~~)
Is Twilight channeling Martin Luther King Jr.?
Other than that...interesting start. I will definitely look to see how this will turn out. Although I'm a bit sad that 'Flutterhulk' didn't appear
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Yeah, got that vibe myself when I read through Collision Course and this last night XD
Sorry for the bump!
I accidentally hit the Unpublish button. But there will be real content up for this story soon!
And here we go! Off to Canterlot with the Mane Six!
What will they find there?
Also! News! This story is now edited by the wonderful Web of Hope, so if you start to see an increase in quality, it's probably his fault.
Y'know, I wanted this story to actually be relatively long, but my inexplicably abbreviated writing style continues to thwart me...
Any thoughts in general?
~Journcy Out
Hi kids! don't give me too much credit, not even I am crazy enough to come up with this madness.
Guess we'll see where she goes from here, huh?
this here, is a stray vowel. oops
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This is like the third time I've gotten rid of that blasted "a." It just keeps getting remade in various copypastas and whatnot! -.-
Thanks. Also, your edits for this were much appreciated. ^^
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This is the 'A' that never ends
It just goes on and on, my friends!
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The Song That Never Ends!
It has found its way here...
So I'm a tiny bit bummed that there is literally one non-you, non-me comment on this story.
And here we are propagating the issue.
Hi! I finished another chapter! Clearly!
Hmm, I wonder what Celestia's gonna have the Mane Six do about the rain...
(Using canon geography is fun! :D)
Well, until next time!
And I have to say thanks again to Web of Hope for prereading for me some more!
~Journcy Out
Yo homie not bad
FO shizzle
Well...shit's about to go down. Or rain. One of those at least.
I'm really interested how it will work out. Will it not just be a dream but something like a look into the future? Who knows? xD
Annnnnnnd here we have it! Weird time stuff, studying and more studying!
And I wonder what Twi's realizing...
Unfortunately not edited by Web of Hope; he's away at the moment and I wanted to maintain my one-chapter-a-month minimum. Still, I did my best!
I hope you all remain interested and intrigued by where we're going... Things are about to start happening!
Thanks for reading!
Journcy Out.
(so proud of that from-the-book passage btw)
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Sorry guys :/ will be back for next chapter.
But, since I'm out of the loop, I feel no compunction against throwing theories around...
Ponies are about to start dying.
Let's see...I don't think the elements really can stop TIME itself. I think they more or less slowed everything down to such a crawl that it looks like that. And because all of them are basically freaking out (who wouldn't in such a situation?), they simply don't notice.
I think that the overlapping dimensions is going to be really dangerous for all ponies involved. And who knows how happy Dischord will be if everything gets destroyed but him? Nothing to say chaos on?
I think that's enough gibberish to last for some comment, don't you?
In the words of Web of Hope, who is back on editing for this story:
Sorry that this wasn't up by the end of August. But now we get two September chapters! So that's good. Okay, not really, but bleh.
We're nearing the end... Not many chapters left! I hope you're all excited for the big reveal!
I hope there'll be a big reveal!
Optimistic regarding larger-than-normal-uncoverings,
Journcy Out!
*cackles maniacally*
This, my good friends, was the penultimate chapter (edited as always by the ever-handsome Web of Hope (don't judge me I just read Obs's new blog post))! And I hope to bring you the next one within a week's time or so, as my birthday is coming up and I plan to make like a hobbit!
So, tell me, if you would--do you get it yet?
For now,
Journcy Out.
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I get it, and am sad.
BabOOOOOOM! Many long months later, we're finally here! The end of Alluvion!
And as I hope you could tell, there's very much still one more story to go in this absurdly mopey journey. (Which is called the Enervation Sequence now.)
I hope you'll bear with me for another story. The next one is gonna have a lot more Adventure, I think.
In any case, I'll update this story with an Epilogue when the next story is posted (such a rebel ikr), which I hope to be the normal end-of-month. However, I'm also considering writing ahead for this story, but then I need to outline the whole thing, and cover art has to happen, and, and, and...
So, yeah. I hope the first chapter will be out in October, but, well, you never know.
Thanks for reading everyone, and I hope you're looking forward to the final step of the Enervation Sequence! I know I am!
Not for the last time,
Journcy Out.
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TRI LO GEEEEEEEE!!!!!!