Luna has been losing her mind for a full year. Ever since she had been imprisoned in the Equestria Mental Asylum for the Psychologically deranged. That is, until one night. When Equestria is need for the end of a long battle. When tyranny must be over thrown. When the elements of harmony are not strong enough. When Harmony is Disharmony. Old enemies become new allies in the beginning of a war set into motion millions of years before. Now, every pony must strive to freedom. To hope. To Glory.
READERS!!- I probably shoulda made this more clear earlier, but I'm doing this now: I'm still writing, but I'm also trying to brutally edit this story. I need to fix the "tense" changes throughout it, and the usual grammar. I'm not gonna say when to expect a new chapter, cause I probably won't have it done by then. Just how it works. Just bear with me for another two week or more!!
Ahem, mispelled words in description, too many things given away in said description.
I will read, and if i see potential, offer myself as a pre-reader and other such things to help you improve.
2227248 HOW, HOW DID YOU BEAT ME?
This is interesting to me in many ways. I shall watch for where the romance tag applies and see where the plot goes. Plus there is a Chyrsalis tag with her being a good pony, a very big attention catcher for me. One additional plus is the dragon. Dragons are cool. Continue onward my good author so that I can know your story better.
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ahem, yes, wasn't exactly sure what to put there. And grammar is something I suck at, so no surprise there. Someday, I'll fix that. Thank you for your comment! I'll fix that.
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I KNEW SOMEONE WOULD DO THAT IF I DIDN'T!
222729 I posted before you.
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I barely started reading it when I reached the quote from Cave Johnson. All I can say, is YES. I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR PUTTING THAT IN!!!!!
Couple errors. Not very noticeable. I shall keep reading.
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And I thought the fandom moved past the point where people raped canon so that Celestia from a kind, motherly ruler into the bastion of everything they don't like while promoting their pony-waifu who'd never leave them into the perfect pony princess that fights the oppressive power that doesn't exist.
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That made little sense bro. I think. I like Celestia, and she probably wont end up as tyrannical as she seems right now, but she is still the antagonist. Sorry.
THREE DAYS GRACE!!! AWESOME
YAY! New Chapter!! ALL HAIL THE LUNAR REPUBLIC!
Well jeez, I was wondering whether this story would update again. Still, nice to know that it is.
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THERE WILL BE BILLIONS MORE!
God, I am horrible about reading updates when they come out. It was a nice update. Now then, I have so many questions and the only way for them to be answered is if you continue onward my good author and write fanfiction (pretty pretty please with a Luna shaped cake).
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I soooooo wanna drop everything and write the next chapter, buh other stories must be updated first unfortunately. TILL NEXT TIME!
Pretty cool bro, pretty coolO.o
Usually I cannot stand anti Celestia fics, but I guess since it is not celestia directly in the story it has not earned my disgust... yet.
Dying from anticipation
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Celestia= good pony!
And that would be a spoiler.
*cries* 36 views! THEEEE PAAAAAAIN!
I liked the story, and you should keep writing it.
The thing to make the pic smaller, go on tinypic.com and upload the pic there. There should be a feature that says to resize the pic to your liking, and that should work. Then use the url and replace your pic here
HUUURRRRRRYYYYYYY UPPPPPP BLOOOOOOODDDDD WITH THE NNNNEEEWWWW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!
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Lol, I should get it up by tomorrow Wolferz. SOOOOOON!
Is it discord?
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would'nt you like to know.
3077779 Yea thats why I asked.
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You'll find oooooout!
That last part was SO creepy... in a good way. keep going and good luck
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SOMEDAY I'll finish this. SOMEDAY! I promise.