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Quantum Solace


I'm gonna do some Leauge related now...

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Luna has been losing her mind for a full year. Ever since she had been imprisoned in the Equestria Mental Asylum for the Psychologically deranged. That is, until one night. When Equestria is need for the end of a long battle. When tyranny must be over thrown. When the elements of harmony are not strong enough. When Harmony is Disharmony. Old enemies become new allies in the beginning of a war set into motion millions of years before. Now, every pony must strive to freedom. To hope. To Glory.

READERS!!- I probably shoulda made this more clear earlier, but I'm doing this now: I'm still writing, but I'm also trying to brutally edit this story. I need to fix the "tense" changes throughout it, and the usual grammar. I'm not gonna say when to expect a new chapter, cause I probably won't have it done by then. Just how it works. Just bear with me for another two week or more!!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 37 )
Oni

Ahem, mispelled words in description, too many things given away in said description.

I will read, and if i see potential, offer myself as a pre-reader and other such things to help you improve.

Oni

2227248 HOW, HOW DID YOU BEAT ME?

This is interesting to me in many ways. I shall watch for where the romance tag applies and see where the plot goes. Plus there is a Chyrsalis tag with her being a good pony, a very big attention catcher for me. One additional plus is the dragon. Dragons are cool. Continue onward my good author so that I can know your story better.

2227251

:twilightblush: ahem, yes, wasn't exactly sure what to put there. And grammar is something I suck at, so no surprise there. Someday, I'll fix that. Thank you for your comment! I'll fix that.

2227248

I KNEW SOMEONE WOULD DO THAT IF I DIDN'T!

I barely started reading it when I reached the quote from Cave Johnson. All I can say, is YES. :pinkiehappy: I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR PUTTING THAT IN!!!!! :heart::heart::heart:
Couple errors. Not very noticeable. I shall keep reading.

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And I thought the fandom moved past the point where people raped canon so that Celestia from a kind, motherly ruler into the bastion of everything they don't like while promoting their pony-waifu who'd never leave them into the perfect pony princess that fights the oppressive power that doesn't exist.

2229456
That made little sense bro. I think. I like Celestia, and she probably wont end up as tyrannical as she seems right now, but she is still the antagonist. Sorry.

THREE DAYS GRACE!!! AWESOME:yay::yay::yay:

YAY! New Chapter!! ALL HAIL THE LUNAR REPUBLIC!

Well jeez, I was wondering whether this story would update again. Still, nice to know that it is.

2381224

THERE WILL BE BILLIONS MORE!

God, I am horrible about reading updates when they come out. It was a nice update. Now then, I have so many questions and the only way for them to be answered is if you continue onward my good author and write fanfiction (pretty pretty please with a Luna shaped cake).

2396820

I soooooo wanna drop everything and write the next chapter, buh other stories must be updated first unfortunately. TILL NEXT TIME!

Pretty cool bro, pretty coolO.o

Usually I cannot stand anti Celestia fics, but I guess since it is not celestia directly in the story it has not earned my disgust... yet.

Dying from anticipation

2695709

Celestia= good pony!

And that would be a spoiler.

*cries* 36 views! THEEEE PAAAAAAIN! :raritycry:

I liked the story, and you should keep writing it. :pinkiecrazy:

The thing to make the pic smaller, go on tinypic.com and upload the pic there. There should be a feature that says to resize the pic to your liking, and that should work. Then use the url and replace your pic here

HUUURRRRRRYYYYYYY UPPPPPP BLOOOOOOODDDDD WITH THE NNNNEEEWWWW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!! :twilightangry2:

2822760

Lol, I should get it up by tomorrow Wolferz. SOOOOOON! :twistnerd:

3075164

would'nt you like to know. :rainbowwild:

That last part was SO creepy... in a good way. keep going and good luck:raritywink:

"Good." she said, "Because last time, someone gave me lemons, and you know what I said? I said ‘When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back. GET MAD! I DON'T WANT YOUR DAMN LEMONS! WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH THESE?! DEMAND TO SEE LIFE'S MANAGER! Make life RUE the day it thought it could give PRINCESS LUNA LEMONS! DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM?! I'M THE PONY WHO'S GONNA BURN YOUR HOUSE DOWN! WITH THE LEMONS! I'm gonna-’”

Made me LOL.

yuuuuurs the eeeending

“We could get the new Xbox!”
“And pre-order Halo 5!”
“And get all the hot mare’s we want!”
“All da mares!”

LOL WUT

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5384097
oh my god. I just figured out that reference.
GG, man. GG.

6176435
SOMEDAY I'll finish this. SOMEDAY! I promise.

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