This is so improbable that I don't even

169625
It's more like a TRIBUTE to Cupcakes. I know the author... somewhat. I've spoken to him verbally a couple times.

That was pretty good. Best cupcake related story yet.

Hmm now that I've finished reading time to put my thoughts

First off it was pretty decent i loved how each chapter was short (i don't have that big of an attention span when it comes to reading) it made it easy for me to not get distracted.

Pretty much the only thing i found distracting was that Rarity didn't react more when she found out her horn was gone (you gotta think, her horn was her life, without her magic she cant do her job)

Also i probably missed it but what happened to Applebloom after 'chapter 20 - A Bad Apple' she was gone, there was no mention of the guards or anypony taking her.

other than those 2 little snafus i thought it was a good read. i think 9.5 out of 10

P.S. i love how the title for chapter 22 goes perfectly with the last 2 paragraphs

172829
Applebloom was taken home afterwards. I wasn't said but it probably should have been in there.

173111
oh well okay then, one mystery solved, i shall read and possibly solve others tomorrow

177080
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qTTzMqlRTHeHIarZZhwQhADc-1aff9fkHKWx-kn0wMk/edit?hl=en_US&pli=1

Highlight this link > Right Click > Go To...

177107
Thank you!

193993>>191632
The Bubbles being referred to is NOT Derpy but a pony from an earlier generation of MLP:
i934.photobucket.com/albums/ad183/elven_kitten/Animation/My%20Little%20Pony/MLP%201984/Bubbles.jpg
But in the recent series, she would look like this:
fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/036/c/6/g1_mlp_bubbles_g4_pony_style_by_omg_chibi-d38vvvl.png

194111Interesting, but thanks to you I can't sleep tonight...
images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/19500000/son-of-a-bitch-dean-winchester-19583111-500-220.gif

307486
I submitted this before the 1000-word minimum requirement rule was established.

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!

385471
Not as sick as... Well... You know...

398361It's just scary as fuck and yes it's reference's...but i couldn't help making this one.

172829
Agreed, I also give it a similar rating (except I go out of 5 for fanfics) 4.5 of 5. I gave the orginal Cupcakes a 3.5 of 5.
One added complaint, NO DEAD RARITY.
Also whose eye was that.

402759
It was the eye of the pony she killed in Pinkamena 2. Read it to understand this further. Pinkamena 2 goes back in time a little to when Pinkie was taken away.

458015but none of the chapters do, now you need 1000 words on your first chapter to publish the story

458035 listen u get shapters and put them all together and u look at the words thing and there u have 1000 words...

458047? I mean, the first chapter you post has to be 1000 words otherwise you can't post it.

458060 IM SAYING ALL THE CHAPTERS HAVE WORDS SO WHEN U PUT THEM TOGETHER THEY ALL ARE 1000 grrrr nevermind *sigh* maybe i should turn u into cupcakes

458060 458081
Listen, you two. When I published the first chapter, it was before the 1,000-word-minimum rule was in place. But now, stories must have 1,000 words total before it can pass moderation. So Tunderbolt is right in this matter. As long as there's 1,000 words or more when you publish the story, you're fine. Doesn't have to be in just the first chapter. Hope this clears the confusion.

458060 hahaha told ya told ya

This looks interesting, even though I despise Cupcakes with a burning passion. I'll mark it to read later, this could be an interesting spin on Cupcakes. As mindless as Cupcakes is, they're are good spins on Cupcakes and this could be in that catagory. Anyway I'm just rambling now, mark to read later.

Loved it! Please send more!

489314
Then wait till you read the next 3

For a "Cupcakes" related story, that was pretty intense!
Going to read Part 2 soon! Hope you don't disappoint...

489314
Whelds? JK You have my respect.

488904
Whatever, DUKE NUKEM WILL PROTECT ME. How, he is a badass.

And... Relating to my last comment, this is the best part of #1.

Sanity level: ...

Let me taste you....
I grow tired of my own flesh....
So this is what it feels like....

I seeeeeee you!

Bonjour!~

Hide and seek hide and seeeek...
Come out- you'll like what I have planned.

Come here!
I want you.

[chewing noises] mm um mmmm

I wonder what Pinkamena's favourite scalpel blade is?
Mine is number ten.
It wakes the best ( figures out a way to describe it ) Incisions
It suprisingly effective to cut through the liver.
And the kidney
Anywho the No. 10 cuts through flesh like a knife through warm butter.
Ahh the way the blade cuts through the sinews
It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside

I might have got a bit carried away...
Such a nice blade...

1158090
This is something I fixed in my recent fics. For the most part, the chapters are 1,000 words or more. Where Two Worlds Collide will have 3,000+ word chapters and Heroes Of The Wasteland will have about the same amount. Luna's Night Out had 1,000+ word chapters whenever she visited a city or town.

PS: I read ALL the comments readers leave me.

aww i was kinda hoping Dash dies oh well good story anyway

well, you made sure to leave it open to a sequel properly so i shall move onto the next. over all not a bad story for an early work

1217781
This was my first-ever MLP fic. I have written others for other shows like Kids Next Door, movies Iike Child's Play. You can click here to visit my online story archive site to see the others I worked on. Most aren't finished. The most complete set are the Apocalypse stories. So, to sum up, I've been doing this fic-writing thing for a while.

This is almost as good as the X series

1318190
She's more violent in "The X Series".

you can say that

i like this. but there weren't enough jokes. there were alot of funny jokes in cupcakes.

1460919
My Pinkamena is darker. Especially the X version.

Just so no one ends up waiting for Pinkamena666 so they could see what happens next. Keep in mind the [Extended] if he/she hasn't posted the next one and just read the regular one he is already up to number 7

2418441
Umm... Never crossed my mind but... I do like PPG, so... yay

Ok this ending reminded me a lot of the ending of Final Destination 2....they think its all over and they are safe and the BOOM! barbecue grill blows up killing someone and we are back to square one

2810466
That's actually accurate since I'm comparing it to things people use in our world.

I like the story of course I do there pinkamena in this bitch

194111 I Love how MLP went from Squealing little girls to guys in their twenties brutally dismembering every possible character in their fanfics.

911635 Speaking of getting carried away, I just wanted to- HELLO OUT THERE, WE'RE ON THE AIR, IT'S HOCKEY NIGHT TONIGHT! TENSION GROWS, THE WHISTLE BLOWS AND THE PUCK GOES DOWN THE ICE!

after reading this again i realized how much the ending is like the end of The Silence of the Lambs

Pinkamena says...
"WHO'S NEXT?!"