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First, because I can
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Second?
And yes, I'm (half) stalking you.
Also, Y U NO UPDATE YESTERDAY?
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And now that I've finally read the thing...
Y U NO STOP CLIFFHANGERS?!
FUCK YOU CLIFFHANGERS!! Well said!
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FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH-
dude you beat me to it!
*shudders*
That pony... was fucking creepy...
PUT METALL IN THE STORY AND LET ME CUT HER UP LIKE A FUCKING PIG!
mmmmmmm. poooooooooork...
Come one, come all! Come listen to me and a friend fail at reading chapters of this story! Channel name is WeReadFriendship.
(Part 2 has a clip we saved at the end that is basically the explanation of everything that goes wrong when recording with me)
283182 and you have just made it onto my "cliffhangers-hurt-like-a-mofo" list
283223 pun intended
Wonder what happened to break this time around...
283226 Indeed, I was wondering that myself
that bitch is scary! i didnt expect a cannibal pony
Great now Lance is a vampony now
DAMN.....never thought D would go anywhere without me......
to find me and D's relationship, Read Burritoburgers Stargazer story, ill, edit the name on later
Fuck you cliffhangers!
see we all agree cliffhangers suck and nut job forest pony strange lol though I have a character just like this but found he could eat gems instead of meat
that reminds i was at tensese this one tiime i was in the car and went past a orphange it said homes for children but the letters fell off and said
[HOES FOR CHILDREN]
why must you read my mind break noooo
It sounds like you need a bodyguard from this little... "Predicement". Luckily, I'm your guy *hands copy of profile bio* as you can see, I've been good and evil, thus knowing all thereis to fighting, fair and unfair, clean an dirty, vegetarian and whatever the fuck she just did.
And if you don't accept *gives bottle of A1* Then die delicious.
283182 I CALL FUCKING HACKS! eat this CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS DAOVAHKIIN! FUS RO DAH! because I can mister hacks
Don't die again.
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No promises
283182 May you wield the mighty Sword of First long, and may you keep it from the clutches of evil. *glances at pic* eugh....
283291 you sadistic saint!
That crazay beeeetch gonna have a taste of bananas... ON THE MOOOOOOOOOON BEEEEEEYYEEEEETCH
"Shudder" t-that ain't right, if i saw a pony like that i would do 2 things. 1. Play the romantic so i can distract her, with a kiss (WHAT? if you are face with a women whose trying kill you, it pays to get on her good side, i mean she may be a cannibal, but hey she IS a mare, that and i'm not gonna hit a girl). 2 Wait till she lower her Guard, then tackle her and use as much magic as i can to grab any thing that can be used as a rope, tie her up, then carry her to the nearest Nut House.
-WW
When I read about the cannibal pony's bio, I never thought he'd do it.
Well fuck me sideways and call me biscuit he surprised me on this.
Welp, it's ER for Lance. To have kickass's OC think of my OC as a brother, now THAT is epic.
*brohug*
*Squee* scene with my twins!!!! YEESSS! YEESSS!
Holy Sh!t
Whoa! dude that's creepy
and I also have this to say... what the heck was that thing, is that a cannibal pony, I didn't freaking know that they exist, you created a freaking monster that will probable gives me nightmares for a while, and also I freaking hate cliffhangers, but besides that, I like this chapter and I can't wait for more.
FUCK. YES.
Best chapter because Fawn was adopted.
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Well, I liked the OC XD
Also, of course he thinks of Frederic as a brother. They've been through a lot. And Frederic did save his life during Cody's rage.
HOORAH, BADASS VINE TO THE RESCUE!
Anyway, CANNIBAL ponies? I'm scared...
HOORAH, BADASS VINE TO THE RESCUE!
Anyway, CANNIBAL ponies? I'm scared...
To the readers: When an author asks you to submit an OC, realize that he/she will only insert charaters that are 1. bucking creepy or 2. are super overpowered. We saw number two a few times, namely Ominus and Killjoy. Now number one is here. May Celestia have mercy on your sanity.
283466 and again during Richard's attack
ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER?!?! *whacks you over the head with a frying pan (also i know who he cannibal pony is) LINK (look at her blog)
Wow..Savage?
Okay... that's me going after Vinetion off my list... But I'm still coming for you Seth...
I love you cliff hangers.
283466 Well I cannot in all honesty follow this story anymore. Its not the massive plot holes or the grammar errors that some people have addressed that you ignored or the blatant disregard for the actual shows logic. Its just starting to bore me with its repetitive dialogue and sporadic plot. I thought that maybe now that there is a female in the story it would get better even if its a pegasus that can use plant magic, (ugh when people make their OC's do they even try to make them true to the show you have to make your character better than everyone else just so they can seem special) but it hasn't. nothing in this story is making me interested anymore. I have to strain myself to focus so i can read it. It just kept going downhill fast with nothing in its way. Don't get me wrong your not a bad writer your just too lazy to revise your own story (Ive seen a lot of writers who get other people to proofread their stories). but when you have conflicts that arise and get resolved too easily it your story suffers ( its hard to follow a plot when things are jumping around constantly). Another issue is your fans seem to get into arguments A LOT over trivial things and they dont seem to be helping you better your work. I see little to no constructive criticism and that's sad. Maybe the reason behind your massive fan club is because you keep putting peoples OC's into the story and people absolutely love it when their characters get put in but your not getting much help. I started getting disinterested after chapter 35 Broken bones and love but i kept reading for the sake of finishing it and Ive read way longer stories than this. Sorry but i just cant anymore I do hope you get better I may even come back and check to see but for now I think ill pass. You can do better
Dude.... Why.... Why couldnt you leave the d'aww with Fawn alone!! jk jk bro always good reading frOm ya
No.....Lance don't you dare die on us!
YAY VINE TO THE RESCUE!!!!!!
And yet another poem made by your's truly
FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK DRAGONFORCE
fuck you all-DDF
283795>>283618>>283469 yes im awesome. all of you admitted it! NOW BOW DOWN TO YOUR QUEEN FOOLS!
Oh and @kickass
You're trying to please too many people at the same time
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Don't you mean
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*sunglasses*
FOALS!
283831 Sucks to be them.
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Oh god!
Aha!
She was perfect! I love it when she does that.
"what part should I try next" NOT MY DICK! " too late" CHOMP!
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccckkkkkker!!!!!!!!
283933 Yeah but D still got her ass kicked, and I guess you was right about what was planed for D. That's one point to you.
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Check my Blog for information about her.
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1.bp.blogspot.com/_ynB9MwZffp8/SdEaNEPFC6I/AAAAAAAAAM0/EoIcSkc7FL4/s320/Astoundingly+Astounded.jpg jesus that's horrofying