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AWSOME STORY !
Thank you. I made a cover picture for the story.
Also, how am I doing with this story?
Dash, I'm disappointed in you...
Haha, I like the story, I'm horrible with reviews but I think its good, a tad bit fast but whatever. Great story so far.
OH NO SHE DIDN'T!
Wait, what
lol you took the title Ciroton planed on using for his next fic after he finishes for want of a dawn. I think his work is only on deviantART though.
42743 I think you're doing pretty good with this story, I think Dash is simply HILARIOUS XD. Can't wait to see how this turns out, keep up the good work! :D
hahahaha still lovin it dude
Wait dash is a rapist ... When I die I'm not going to this universe/dimension
WAIT!!!! how can he be a brony and not know Dr. whooves? .or better yet ask him a simple question with a simple answer that only The Docter would know?( I.E. does the name john smith ring any bells?)
uh... wow! people are saying that rainbow dash is lesbian (SHE IS NOT YOU MORONS) but this is worse!!!
Not rape if ya want it
2k words... in 3 hours?
Really?
55515Agreed, ya can't rape the willing
Well shit. You sure are original at pony creation. A halfbreed with dragon eyes? Quite original!
Fine I'll be captin obvous (or obvhoves ), might I state that this is completly out of character for Rainbow Dash. SHE'S THE F-ING ELEMENT OF LOYALTY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD; and it seems like she's activly hurt twilight! One of her best friends! Unless this is diferent from the shows continunity (you sem to be hinting at that anyway so I'm not mad at you) you realy exagerating her overzelousness. This is still a good story.
P.S. magic be gone? Really? Next your going to be saying that the clouds are made of unobtainioum.
ANT-MAGIC POTION! ALL THE MAGIC OF AN ANT IN ONE SIMPLE BOTTLE!
you make Rainbow Dash sound like a horrible pony
I like it
3.5 stars. It's a very good story, and would be 5, but there are too many errors grammar and punctuation and all that jazz. It takes away from the story. I hope it gets better, because I don't wanna read 30+ chapters of errorful...errors.
*readed the story*
**feeling a burning sensation on my forehead**
damn if i keep reading this...
***palm-face***
tupid!! ofcourse i keep reading it!!!
****AAAAAHHHH!!!! MY FREAKING FOREHEAD!!!****
dash is a rapist!!! sorry new readers but spoiler alert! **** is a rapist! I read ahead or a fast reader sometimes!
"She slowly made her way to me" This is terrifieng D:
i can't believe I've waited so long to read this. i guess i hopes there would be a clear finish that i could read the whole thing through. big mistake, this is awesome.
First of all, frankly, your grammar and spelling at most points in this story... Sucks. Its a bit funny to read and a few mistakes wont stop me from reading a fic. Id like to congratulate you for at least trying to write. Remember to do a spell check or get a pre-reader soon. It will really improve the story, trust me.
the bit with the start of the party made me cringe a little , why? i dont know
oh rainbow why you always have to take it to far
i cam see it playing out in my head, accadentally hit's giro, he turns human explanation ensues (i have not read ahead, if i am right, this is just a hunch i had at this moment)
oh wait thats a stallion LMAO
I had to stop reading and put this
it said: Ant-Magic potion, son I am disappont
SHEET!Rainbow is sooooo jealous!
Meh...I would have let Rainbow Dash rape me.
This is a bit of a nitpick, but two thousand pages in three hours? An average print page has 250 word on it. If we assume a large amount of space given over to diagrams, say 500 pages total, that leaves us with a word count of 375 000 words. Average reading speed is between 150-250 words per minute. I read at about 350 WPM, so let's use my reading speed. (375000/350)/60=17,8571 hours. The world champion at speed reading clocks in at a bit more than 1000 WPM. That's still 6.25 hours. Dude.
Sorry, but that really bugged me for some reason, didn't mean to bitch.
I'm also wondering, where is Spike? I guess that is explained in later chapters.
Yeah, the story is good enough as it is.
nice try though.
my reactions to the cupcakes,
first
cupcakes?
then,
why does she want him so bad...
finnally, before he ate it, wait.... DON'T EAT THAT GODDAMN CUPCAKE!
Rainbow Dash U JELLY!
What... What the fuck am I reading?
Ju...
Just what the fuck?
Lets get raped by Twilight instead of Rainbow Dash! Sir, what kind of drugs were you on while writing this?
2900354 All the wrong ones.
Yes! Ant Magic is best magic!
This is looking like a really bad clop-fic now...
Hmmm....i see why some say it moving to fast.....
3120167
FTFY
This is so bad it's good. It's like "Attack Of The Killer Tomatoes!". Jesus Christ people. Anyway, let's continue.
Jesus Christ.
Shit's about to go down with twilight vs dash...
I think
This guy has all of the social grace of a brick who's been locked in a cave for the past century
5320264 static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Tactical_cb4375_213920.jpg here, seems like ya need it. We got plenty of those at To Love the Moon, So don't worry about me or anyone else running out of tactical facepalms.
Shit has hit fan folks
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"interesting" indeed img.memecdn.com/dat-ass_o_413970.jpg
*screams into pillow*
Oh no, it's started.