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Master-Chief


I hadz 2 use n0rmal 3nglish. Fimiction dos n0t noe wat strugl3s I goes thr0ugh :(((((

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Bravo company. Made up of some of Equestria's stupidest muther buckers the royal guard has ever seen. Lead by First Lieutenant Thunder Hoof; who has a fetish for a certain white regal alicorn. Second in command Staff sergeant Rolling Rock; who was placed in Bad company for looking at classified scrolls. Corporal Spricketts; who beat the crap out of Shining Armor. And the newest member of Bravo Company, Golden Blade; for many acts of stashing large amounts of un-authourized weapons the Royal guard considers illegal.

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If you dislike this story please tell me why, I promise not to hold anything against you.:pinkiehappy:

2131279 It's spelt 'Guard'. Might want to correct that, a mispelt title gives the wrong impression.

Also, there are one or two spelling mistakes here. Just give it a quick proofread and you should be all set.

Aw heck yeah, I loved the first BFBC. I always felt that the second one got watered down to fit the whole "super serious first person shooter" genre to the point that the characters weren't even the characters anymore.

Ramblings aside, you have a nifty little product here. Good work.

Comment posted by Master-Chief deleted Feb 16th, 2013

Hmm. Slow down a bit. You gonna give backstory of how the character got put in BC or are they gonna be all 'Im here your here lets shoot someone mission over' . I also think negatively with how the changlings got so easily the same gear so soon. :rainbowhuh:

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Its not that they got the same gear soon, its just that it just so happened they got it at the same time. But alright I'll try and slow down a bit, didnt realize I was going so fast.:pinkiehappy:

2132973 I actually should be thanking you for the laughs!
But, you're welcome anyway.

Other than the occasional grammar and spelling errors, this is a good story.

Changing my vote on this story and putting it in my tracking bookshelf now. The bad spelling and poor editing is what changed my mind. I'm sorry, but you get another dislike now. :applejackunsure:

I dislike this because...

1. Bad Company Crossovers should have HUMANS
2. "bucker" is not a real swear
3. bad spelling and editing

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