But I was wondering about the massaging part, you didn't really mention what her back really feels like even though she's covered in fur and the only comparison about it is that the fur is softer in the front. ^^;
This reminds me of when I said goodbye to Rose Tyler. She was a woman *Sniff* That i absolutely loved to be around. She was smart and funny and everything I always saw in companions. She told me she was going to stay with me forever. Then, she was almost sucked into the void, but her father saved her. I didnt even get a proper farewell.
Anyways, good story. The feels are unbearable. Oh, i cried
2894297 When I edited this chapter, at first, I could feel that it would hurt the reader severely just from how Reaper had set everything up... But I wanted more... I wanted to make sure it could be as painful as possible, but believable.
For all the chapters I've read so far, I've come to the impression that you've taken all of Trixie's and the human protagonist's lines straight from an Anime series! That's just my opinion but I've watched enough anime to deduce that Trixie is saying every cliche line a Tsundere would say and the human is her awkward, short tempered yet slightly perverted guy. Textbook anime romance, copy and paste! At least I think so... Not that I'm complaining or anything
4204106 Except for the final chapter in the story, of course... but yeah, this chapter... we were looking to give the reader a severe case of "The Feels". Then have them attack... like so:
Every time I read this chapter, I have to go to your profile, and read that deleted scene of Trixie arriving at her caravan. You really should put it in the main story.
4862614 Whoops! Forgot that this was a comment in a specific chapter! I better respond in the chapter, so you receive the response as well.
The deleted scene was something I brainstormed over Skype with Reaper, during/after the story's creation. It was basically me typing out everything that happened from Trixie's perspective, after the events of the penultimate chapter. Since this story is from the protagonist's perspective, it didn't fit in with the story. As a result, Reaper posted it straight onto his blog.
That said, the chapter was removed from the blog after the NSFW-purge on FIMfiction, as were several blog posts by Reaper regarding stories. It's a significant shame.
IF... IF it was re-posted somehow (since we still DO have the original brainstorming session on Skype), it'd have to be revamped in one of two ways: Either the chapter would be its own story, or it'd have to be in second-person, but from TRIXIE'S perspective, and stated as such.
the fuck!?
Is that guy freaking stupid as hell? Seriously there is very few things that I think are stupider than what he just did.
On to the final chapter. I felt myself die a little inside saying that...
2813914 What, getting thrown into a black void of death?
2813919 It gets better don't worry. Your liver will grow back.
1.Go into feetle position
2. try not to cry
3.cry
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! WHYYYYYYYYYY! TOO MANY FEELS!
Wow…just wow…
I think I need a moment.
You sir have just unknowingly given me an amazing birthday present...I need a moment.
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i may have teared up alittle even thou i knew it hasn't finished.
Oh man
Need next chapter read.
Good byes are always sad don't you know?
But I was wondering about the massaging part, you didn't really mention what her back really feels like even though she's covered in fur and the only comparison about it is that the fur is softer in the front. ^^;
simply fantastic
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...I see what you did there.
Gosh after reading this I really want to read your final chapter right now, but I have project I need to get done first. Dam it why now.
Ha, tickle torture for Trixie!!!! And after making her horny
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Heart.exe has stoped working.
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Tissue please!
I cried all my tears in MLD, but I wanted to cry, but where's the fun in that?
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GO GO GADGET!
I think I know what just happened...
Let's see in the next chapter.
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2816116 We went over that scene with a fine-toothed comb to make it HUUUURT!!!
2814184 Happy Birthday!
2814225 Originally we were gonna upload Chapter 6, wait a few hours, THEN upload Chapter 7, but Reaper decided against it at the last minute.
2815640 *hands a tissue box over*
Some of your comments WERE replied to, buuuuut we replied to them on the main page by accident.
I havent cried this much since the end of Godzilla
2817235 He IS the Reaper... he was just seeking to reap your sorrow.
Mission: Accomplished.
I've said it before, and I'll say it again-JUST BUCK ALREADY!!!!
2814065 Never hide your liquid pride!
Angel of Death-
Noooooo! Don't you dare leave The Great and Powerful Trixie!!!
Dammit
that was one of the sadist goodbyes I have read in a long time.
This reminds me of when I said goodbye to Rose Tyler. She was a woman *Sniff* That i absolutely loved to be around. She was smart and funny and everything I always saw in companions. She told me she was going to stay with me forever. Then, she was almost sucked into the void, but her father saved her. I didnt even get a proper farewell.
Anyways, good story. The feels are unbearable. Oh, i cried
True that.
Only downside to this being 2nd person but no options: I'd totally use a reference at the end.
Mostly because I'm listening to the musical right now it would likely be this:
or the classic-
Never Ending Story.
Though I think Trixie would hate if I made that reference.
There we go with the Zero no Tsukaima again in my brain... I literally had the following thought run through my mind:
Damnit Saito, just feed her already, she's cute!
Ain't no brakes on the feels train... Choo, Choo... motherbucker... *Sobs*
Wonderfully written and very fun to read.
The feels.
This chapter hit me...
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2894297 When I edited this chapter, at first, I could feel that it would hurt the reader severely just from how Reaper had set everything up... But I wanted more... I wanted to make sure it could be as painful as possible, but believable.
So basically, I was looking for this: media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3l3x86st71qi38f1.gif
I can only hope that I succeeded.
For all the chapters I've read so far, I've come to the impression that you've taken all of Trixie's and the human protagonist's lines straight from an Anime series! That's just my opinion but I've watched enough anime to deduce that Trixie is saying every cliche line a Tsundere would say and the human is her awkward, short tempered yet slightly perverted guy. Textbook anime romance, copy and paste! At least I think so... Not that I'm complaining or anything
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I noticed that immediately but at least it's well-executed. Again, not a bad thing, just something quite noticeable.
These lines seems taken straight from a anime. Also, why does he/i have to leave?
End of chapter + say something by little big world = me legit crying for ten minutes
This better be a f ing dream
Man.... 3rd time reading this story and I still break down.
I think... No scrach that, IS my favorit story.
I loved it all so much and the end make me so sad T-T T-T
4204106 Except for the final chapter in the story, of course... but yeah, this chapter... we were looking to give the reader a severe case of "The Feels". Then have them attack... like so:
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Every time I read this chapter, I have to go to your profile, and read that deleted scene of Trixie arriving at her caravan. You really should put it in the main story.
Aww, now I can't find it... *cries*
4862614 Whoops! Forgot that this was a comment in a specific chapter! I better respond in the chapter, so you receive the response as well.
The deleted scene was something I brainstormed over Skype with Reaper, during/after the story's creation. It was basically me typing out everything that happened from Trixie's perspective, after the events of the penultimate chapter. Since this story is from the protagonist's perspective, it didn't fit in with the story. As a result, Reaper posted it straight onto his blog.
That said, the chapter was removed from the blog after the NSFW-purge on FIMfiction, as were several blog posts by Reaper regarding stories. It's a significant shame.
IF... IF it was re-posted somehow (since we still DO have the original brainstorming session on Skype), it'd have to be revamped in one of two ways: Either the chapter would be its own story, or it'd have to be in second-person, but from TRIXIE'S perspective, and stated as such.
FUCK FUCK!!!! fuck ME...my heart keep ache! THE FEELS TOO STRONG!!!
FUCK!KK!K$!I$!$K NOOOO FAFUAFAJS TOOOO MUCH FEELS!!!
Wait.......Trixie has more than one horn?!