Awesome story man ! short but great !

Good ending, cheers mate

YES!!! A TRUE SATISFYING AND AMAZING END I really loved this story, especially the awkward clumsiness yet poetic mind of the guardsman. Definitely one of my favourite fics ever and I can't wait to see what else you write.

Another Great Job
You have become my favorite fic writer and i hope to see more from you :3
P.S Im looking forward to your next one :P

Thank you all so much for enjoying this story. I have never expierienced such a good series of reviews on ANYTHING I have ever written. It brings a tear to this irish mans heart. Next story up within the weekend, so keep an eye out.

Nice

I refer you to my last comment... And I also add that this story is amazingly good and yay

D'awww thanks man! Your story is great, and I promise to read "Study Aid"!

Excellent my dear author, simply exquisite.

a better end i could not imagine happening. i know what has happened to the poet guard, what you alluded to. of course i won't spoil it, some people read the comments first, afterall... why ruin the fun?

Isn't it princess?

“I love you Luna, my perfect princes of the night.”

Lol good read but you could do another with Luna having a kid with him. In some fics after Luna was sent to the moon, Celestia got lonely and had a family which leads to Prince Bluedick-opps I mean Prince Blueblood. So...just an idea you could do. Also...a clopfic with a pregnant Luna...some people may like that. Lmao just saying.

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You are very clever woman. i didn't expect anyone to catch on so quick.

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A epilogue epilogue? sounds interesting. I appreciate the idea you suggested, but I am not comfortable writing a straight up clop-fic or a scene involving a pregnant Luna, i specialize in romance with light clop elements. I appreciate the gesture, and am very happy you liked the story, and you are right it is princess, damn auto-correct.

What you have created here, can only be described as pure beauty.
I have no doubt in my mind that your next story will be as wonderful as this was.

This.... This is simply wonderful!

Jolly good show!

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In other news I got the chapter done! time to drink...

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I loved both storys but I don't like the epilogue epilogue idea and neither does applejack

ok i have to admit the story itself was not the best but the ending was actually very good!

i give the story a 7-10 for the great ending and the good story to back it up.

Just, beautiful...

Absolutely Amazing, Honestly.
I remember Reading the first chapter before I had an account, and now stumbling upon this story again and realizing that it had a new chapter
I loved all of it
I will certainly look at your other works
Keep on writing man

I love the fact that my Nightmare Date story is right here as the first 'liked the following' link... And this story on the other page as well

[ We need a Luna / Moon emoticon! ]

Luna!! This was great, Luna deserves some love! Very sweet stuff and a cool epilogue.

just.... wonderful bud... wonderful luna love fics can't get better then this my friend... they just can't

Keep her happy guardsman, keep her happy.

Truly amazing. I promise to read study aid. This is one of the best things I've ever read.

I have only one complain: this story is too short.
Also big thanks for not turning Luna into "Do-not-call-me-princess-I-want-to-be-treated-as-ordinary-pony-for-no-reasonable-reason" pony.

Amazing story man
Very well written :)

Now that I think about it, Luna has had sex with a guardsman twice before even learning his name.

but why use luna's oh you face? lol....

but why use luna's oh you face? lol....

That's it, my hopes have been crushed, I can never write anything as sensually romantic as this.

This is unusual amongst clopfics in that there's very little focus on the physical action, instead it's all about emotions and mood, and I absolutely love that. I can only hope to emulate it in my own writing..

6890965 Well I totally think you can do the thing! If you ever need a proofreader or some help send me a message. I'd be happy to help any way I can.

7778829 ...I re-read this story (well, parts of it) recently, and I thought, "...does it say he was online recently? I thought he was gone forever!" Like, I'm pretty damn sure you were gone for a loooong time.

...So perhaps Study Aid may yet be continued? Or are you just stopping in to see if people still love your stories? They do, by the way!

7779467 Still out in the field on Study Aid but I hope the inspiration strikes to continue it