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SilentAuthor
10 years of this and I am going straight to Hell
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Ahh HELL YEAH New story!!!
Is it ironic that as I read the C.S.Lewis part the ENTIRE collection of his books fell on my head from my book shelf above me?
Looks like this is a sign I have to read them
Yeah the good ol' morning wood.
you lucky old sun
I thought this was just going to be another generic Twilight x OC ship fic. I'm glad I was wrong. This story even got a few chuckles from me, especially the Yoda reference and considering the series has made Star Wars references before, it makes sense and didn't feel out of place. What else is there to say? I twas well written, the pacing was great, it was legitimately funny, it was charming and it held my interest. I imagine this fic will be a simple, fun, romantic comedy. I hope you please keep this tone.
It's weird that i went into this with low expectations and at the end not only did I give it a 5, but I also tracking this and want MOAR.
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Peace Out.
Well, I'm definitively tracking
-Glassed
D'oh, noticed a few things I missed. 3 apostrophes to be exact.
Missed one in a "cant" and one on each side of "The Magician's Nephew."
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That's alright, easy mistakes can be fixed easily. Thanks again for editing it and proofreading though.
Tracking ! Love this type of story, Not too 'clop', not too devoid of that type of content... go with the flow. Keep up the good work !
lol awesome
Sorry everyone i wasn't happy with how Ch 2 came out so i am deleting it and re uploading tomorrow.
Seems like I caught the prevoius ch2 right before you deleted......I personally loved it
lol. just lol... twi falls asleep next to "me" [although i personally would rather be a pegasus, second person fics captivate me] and "I" wake up with... just lol
Ok, I have not started the story yet, but if this story turns out to be what I always wanted then I am going to text scream as loud as the computer lets me and then I will use The Royal Canterlot Voice.
150310 Eeyup! Great series.
Alrighty then! It 'promises' light-clop later, so I'll track despite that. Not a big fan of it, but I can always read around it, so to speak, so... XD
bad case of morning wood ay? only way to solve that
Thats the problem with being a stallion. Ya never know where your walking on 4 legs or 5.
I really liked Moon Phased, and im liking this one
You sir are an amazing writer! I love this story as I love all 2nd person fics. 5 stars for you!
PS MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
151929 ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAA
I'm reading another Fan Fiction where I'm with Rainbow Dash. Now I'm with Twilight Sparkle. I'm such a slut!
i won't mind how long it is. it is really good. well really i hope it is longer than shorter but it is up to you
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Why does this story have to end. Its so sad.
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A better question is why are you complaining when the expected length has been doubled?
Be appreciative.
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true I didn't think of it that way... It does sound good!
Okay that one was way better. Glad to see that you're going to make a longer story!
Well what did Twilight send? *wink* *wink*
More?! /fillyTwilight
I can't complain about that, sugarcube!
This was a bit better. Certainly not so rushed.
I can understand that you wanted to keep it 3 chapters, but yeah, I don't think that's gonna work.
I'll continue reading
-Glassed
Definitely better than the first version! Twilight is such a nice teacher, so cute
Har har! The chapters have been doubled!
yay.
Story is great! Can't wait to see the 3rd chapter up later today. ;)
The-the length had been doubled?! HUZZAH! 8D
Seriously! Awesome! There's no such thing as a story that's too long! I mean, just look at FoE! It's longer than the Lord of the Rings trilogy, and a lot of us wanted it to keep going! Don't apologize for making it longer! That (in an ideal world) will only make things even better! 8D
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
All this time and no one has commented about the last few lines?
I mean come on, that's bucking hilarious!
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I thought so.
And thanks to everyone liking this story! Definitely gonna be a longer one!
i am pulling double shifts today so no update til about 12 AM mountain time.
and in other news...
THEY CALLED DERPY BY HER FAN NAME!!!
can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens thanks for writing this
and DERPY IS AWESOME.
Well I didn't see the first version of this, but this one was certainly good. A couple spelling and punctuation errors, but nothing major.
Keep it up!
But yeah, I didn't see the first version either, but this one seems brilliant! I love the training, watching as Quill grows in skill. It's pretty legit.
needs to be LONGER... i could see this ending up being a 23 chapter story like family mares... NEED MOAR!!!
also you really thought you could do this story in 3 chapters?
So Quill seems to have a certain liking for the "plot" of the story,
AKA
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I don't know about this one, seems a little rushed.
Just remember to take your time. (and watch those commas)
Wow, can't wait for what's next
keep it up!!! *on a side note, there's some misspellings nothing big though*
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Poking? Oh dear...
-Glassed
I enjoyed it SilentAuthor, but one thing to be careful of - just watch out for the 'your/you're' trap!
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This is Delicious!
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"You're poking me Quill."
oh goodness.
"Your poking me Quill"