Wow... I'm writing my own Luna fic, but I am going to have to do much better to compete with this... oh, and yes, I do have a thing for the "most beautiful creature in all of Equestria", as your guardsman put so very well.

I keep reading this over and over... it's seriously THAT good.

Ima read this SO HARD, It'll destroy the internet more than SOPA and PIPA would.

This was just simply...Amazing 5 Stars and Im Defeinitly Looking forward to more of your fics in the future

I am so happy I could internet at these comments!
You all rock woohoo! I will be working on a fic for the following characters next: Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and even Zecora, and Zecora will be the hardest...
Again thank you all!

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LOL SOPA is a joke that even the Great and Powerful Trixie does not find amusing
Thank you for liking it!

I already had a thing for Luna, but this was indeed a great story!

It is well worth reading.

i now have a new thing for luna compound these ponies they drive me to like luna

but anyways this was epic now he shadow guard more pay and more time being close to her

I...just made...front page!?
I think i need to lie down...

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Ha, do that, you've earned it.

"You should have a pretty good idea of what this contains"

I EXPECT LUNA'S DICK

IF I DO NOT GET IT I WILL BE EXTREMELY ANGRY

A few capitalisation and punctuation issues that you might want to look at, but a very nice story and one that only solidifies my thing for Luna.

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Um...lol?

Hey, it would have put an interesting spin on the sex scene.

At first I was like 20 ratings all 5 stars pffft... nothing is that good...
I take back what I said

Y U DO DIS 2 ME. I didn't have a pony fetish before butterscotchsundae and Crowley, and now YOU. YOU PEOPLE ARE TEARING ME APART.

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AUTHOR

YOU WILL NOW ANSWER FOR NOT PROVIDING LUNA DICK

IN YOUR DEFENSE I FUCKING LOST IT AT THIS LINE: "Perhaps after she tortured you for fantasizing about royalty she would be gracious and just let you die."

A very well written fic.
The only thing keeping me from giving this 5 stars is punctuation. Namely, commas. There were many comma errors throught this fic. There were also a couple sentences without capitalization. (I'd suggest getting a pre-reader if you don't already have one)
Otherwise, great job! I look forward to reading more of your work.
EDIT: Wow, I didn't even mention that I'd volunteer for said pre-reader position. Well, the offer is there if you'd like.

I could see them grow old together! Oh....wait, nevermind.

Anyways, I loved it! Thanks, for the smile, and in return I gave you my attention and respect.

Luna is best ship, period.

Bloody loved it, though the problem with commas was annoying. Would love to see another one from you.

I read this at work and its the best clopfic ever written.

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No, Crowley and Butterscotch write best fics, I am a shadow compared to them. but thank you anyway it means a lot to hear positive feedback.

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NYE!

They authors mentioned write pony porn, you wrote an excellent romance fic with clop elements my friend.

BRACE YOURSELVES
PIPA IS COMING

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Gay clopfics are not cool. ESPECIALLY THOSE INVOLVING DASH AND AJ
not cool

This was amazingly done. I loved every single second of it. The romantic guard was awesome and I loved the ending hope to see more awesome stuff from you

>>device heretic But wouldn't a romance scene with Twilight and Gilda atop the ruins of Manehattan be so much better?

Okay... I don't like clopfics... but this one made the front page so I'm gonna read the story anyways. Here goes...

EDIT: Finished. Not bad, honestly. I was hoping for a bit more storyline, but with only about 3000 words, it probably wouldn't be that in depth. Plus, it was actual romance, not just pony porn/rape. I give you 4 stars out of five. Keep in mind this is from someone who doesn't like clopfics OR shippings.

Yay, I was one of the first to read something popular! Now I feel special!

Luna is mai waifu, but I still approve of this "Guardsman" getting a taste, that is, until I reach Equestria.

Come on Fluttershy!

Please, before the idiots in the U.S pass SOPA!

This is a great companion piece to 'Under the Moonlight' by Liquid_Rainbows... It's about the same story, but I don't know if I can say I like either one better. They're both wonderful.

141364 Your avatar makes that comment about 300x creepier.

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You crave it

Don't deny it Sithis you love it

Hm... Me gusta. I always found Luna cute, with how she desperately struggles to fit in. D'awww...

141850 Not sure if want.

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141882 ............I NEED AN ADULT!!!

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It's cute how you think anyone can save you now

Bucking amazing is all I can say good sir keep writing

141918 Raptor Jesus?! Chuck Norris?! SANTA CHRIST?!

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you gon' get loved tenderly
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You know that actually means a lot to me. I know many bronies dont like clop-fics and I have been writing romance for about 2 years.
However.
Luna is so deep, she has so much room to become a great character to the series as well as the fictional world, so I couldn't resist.
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it if at least a little.

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device heretic LOOK A DISTRACTION!
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*hushed voice* Quickly Sithis, while its confused.

Hey guys. Do you realize when and if the SOPA is passed (it probably won't) Then there will be no more PORN OR PONIES OR EVEN WORSE PONY PORN THEY WILL FOREVER STOP EJEACULATIONS FROM PORN ON OUR COMPUTER SCREENS AND THE PLEASURES OF LOVE AND TOLERANCE FROM PWNIES GO TO "SAY NO TO SOPA.com" RIGHT NOW WE NEED A OUR PORN AND PONEEEEES

141597 It was a reference to a fanfic called "Luna's Magic Wand" which is based on the idea that luna has a spell to grow a dick. And it that were how it worked, then whats to say the author couldnt have made the guard a mare?

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I am in love with this picture.

Also, I love this story! It was like reading an actual romance piece instead of random clop. Very well done! 5 stars from me.

142014 Thanks! *flees for cover*