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Eakin


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Posting porn at half past midnight. You really have lost control of your life.

...says the poster who just read it.

“Start. Commence. You and me, sex. Go.”

Literally perfect.

Ok. This was actually good.

Not bad at all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Comment posted by journcy deleted Jul 3rd, 2013

Needs more Twilight. Otherwise, I was totally right.

...Yep, that was pretty hot.

Luna works in mysterious ways.

Okay, maybe not that mysterious. Fairly blunt and direct, even.

Comment posted by Kuraimizu deleted Jul 3rd, 2013

lol i hate when you get so creative that a sudden idea throws you off of you current project
....says the game maker whos suddenly making a PMV

Well of course Luna would be interested. She is Princess of the Night and all activities done during that time.

Sex, raves, etcs.

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That made me lose it. This was fucking hilarious. I don't really do clops, but it was Eakin, and oh god my sides.

now THAT was hot.
good on ya mate.

Added to High Quality Mature Fiction. You don't need my help, but by god I'm gonna pimp your story anyway.

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Thanks! I always appreciate good pimping.

Wow, I refreshed this and discovered that it got added to like eight groups in ten minutes. I didn't realize how quickly dedicated cloppers pounced on things that they like.

2815311 That would also be me. When I say pimp you out, I mean add you to every relevant group I am a part of. :rainbowlaugh:

Make it a series!

Eakin is just better than everyone at everything.

GG everypony, Eakin wins. Regroup next week.

I kept thinking that it was Simon from the Yogscast as Honeydew... :twilightoops:

Luna always cares for her ponies, even in private situations.

“Uh, would you believe that I was talking about a sled?”

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Uh... the hell did i just read?

Nevermind, time for some gaogaigar.

Only later did they realize that they keys to the hoofcuffs were missing.

Forty-five minutes and a very embarrassing visit from the local locksmith later, they made themselves a nice breakfast and planned the rest of their day.

She didn't believe it, but years later, when she was old and gray and Honeydew had passed on to greener pastures, she learned...

It was his sled.

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All pornography is improved by Citizen Kane references. Fact.

Comment posted by zero588 deleted Jul 3rd, 2013

This could be made into a series, using different ponies and different problems.

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Studies have confirmed that playing the word rosebud from Kane over any moaning will indeed improve most pornography.

Very well-written, very romantic, and very hot. Those three things make a winning combination, and I would love to see some more from this couple. They're quite cute and very real, and an excellent example of how OCs should be written.

Is the other fetish formicophilia?

Yeesh, poor Honeydew and Blossom. That must have been a horrible 5 years. :twilightoops:

Luna: Porn Master. :heart:

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Not gonna Google it not gonna Google it...

*Googles it*

WHY DID I GOOGLE IT?

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Thank you. I was confident in the first two but not nearly as much in the third,

OCs shouldn't be that hard. Just imagine people living out their lives with just as many challenges or successes as any of us confront any day. Maybe I'm weird since I don't find that difficult.

2820133 Agreed, good OCs are actually rather simple to write if you have at least an inkling of sense. Keep them realistic and you're golden.

And seriously, I would love to see more stories of these two.

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It may contradict what I just said, but I wrote these two with one very specific flaw in relation to one another, and they each overcame it over the course of their arc in this story. I like that you believed enough in these two to want them to persist further, but I honestly don't know anything more about them than you do.

2820741 And there's half the fun. Just start writing them! Explore their characteristics as they interact and overcome this hurdle, and these characters you've created may just surprise you. Maybe they'll go somewhere, maybe they won't. Even if this is the only story they have to tell, I still enjoyed meeting them, as it were.

2819991

One philia that gets the tick of approval...

2820133

OCs shouldn't be that hard.

Well, Honeydew certainly wasn't at the start of this story.

2823136 exactly who I was thinking of

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Agreed.

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Well, Honeydew certainly wasn't at the start of this story.

That was an absolutely horrible pun, and you're awesome for posting it.

some of the things they suggest doing with cayenne and motor oil don’t even sound like they should be legal!

Not a single mention of weather vanes? I am disappoint.

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