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10 years of this and I am going straight to Hell
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Hmm
Not bad. This is good stuff.
Not bad! The balance of humor is excellent here (though it could use a bit of polish from an editor).
8.7/10 Would read/recommend.
Its got promise.....
will add to read to later and wait.
Good grammar, no spelling errors that Nitpicker!me will nag me to point out... a nice hook... all in all:
I look forward to this story's continuation, if you deem it so.
you my god sir are going to hell. A funny hell full of bad puns.
9207598
Buddy if you think this is well written I got news for you...
Yeah I get super anal and nervous when I get baked and I've only written this while baked out of my mind thanks for the nice note man totes made me happy
9207523
Oh just wait. it's time to point out all the terrible writing faults by DOING NOTHING BUT BAD WRITING FAULTS.
How dare you insinuate that I, a millennial, would not know what Fraggle fucking Rock is!
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Anywho, still digging the story!
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I'm right there with you dude. Writing while baked gives me a better chapter 95% of the time.
This was actually... better than I thought it would be! The time skip joke was hilarious, and I'm a sucker for human x celly smart-mouthing.
Keeping an eye on this one.
I got it ;w;
It's actually Are you smarter than a FIFTH grader? But I'll let that slide because I have been hit with nostalgia.
Like I was with Percy and the Calliope.
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Funny enough the joke was that Kalam got it wrong in the first place proving he is NOT smarter than a fourth grader. Or fifth.
I think this feedback is a hint that you should write a longer story.
9209466
That's what I thought
Needs editing for spelling and grammar, but it's a good story so far. I'll be watching for more.
9209473
Way ahead of you my dude.
HERESY!!!
Edit:
DOUBLE HERESY!!!
You got a weird throat noise, hard nasal inhale, and an eye roll out of me. Good job
+420 respect
9210610
My mom said that when I was born
oh yeah.........i like this.
Very creative and on the nose, your characterization oozes personality. Now contrast this lighthearted literature with deep dwelling dramatics with a splash of sensual scenery and we may have a winner.
Actually, they smell nice, and always shit in the same spot (when they are in the stable).
I am... Intrigued.
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It can be hard to balance that, though. It can be hard enough to write either with this much proficiency, but when you try to blend two styles together, it often becomes jarring, or feels unnecessary. While a well balanced story is all well and good, an unbalanced one is not.
I just hope our fair writer can keep up with his current level of quality— asking him to jump up two pegs in one go is kinda unfair. And not only to him, but us, and the story as well.
Thanks now all I can think of is this little gem.
As someone who was a military brat overseas the only reason the only reason I know of them is friends who go nostalgic over it.
Fucking 10/10 dude👍
9207523
This was lit up in bloody neon and it still flew right over my head. I only heard it wizzing by.
Excellent! Keep up the good work.
Heh heh heh. Bad writing. Oh brudah.