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The first I saw of this was on the front page of the crossovers section. At the time it was relatively new, as there was only a couple of views on it. No comments, and no warning, I dove in.
And I was not disappointed. What you have is a very interesting and pretty well written story. I would like to see where it goes. You get a like and a favorite. Keep it up!
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I was fully ready for some bad crossover fic, you surprised me, please keep going and don't abandon a good fic.
Awesome~!
Well...... that was awesome.
Guys and gals, i have to say i became a effeminate man when i saw you accepted it with open arms not twelve hours after posting. this blows my mind. i love you all
Graet crossover, i am looking foward to the next chapter.
this is awesome
keep up the good work!
Not bad. I'm keeping an eye on this.
look at this picture it is badass
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1918295 I thought about that, but couldnt find the pic that size. i may change it now thanks brony
I love this.
really good story. I like the way you're taking it.
1918687 your name is an alcoholic drink. did you know that?
sorry. thats all i could think until i put it there. and as i fight my pizza pocket and its deliciously searing hot cheeze, i realize that i too am like that.
i want him to explain why he has the power of the thu´um
1920338 That will be touched on during the battle for the border. dont worry
1920843 yay
I approve of this amazing crossover. Go on...
For once it is achieved you shall have the piece that you desire.”
I hope that's a play on words. WELL done if it is.
This story is madness.
1927692 yes actually. I was hoping somepony would get it.
awesome chapter!!!! i look forward to more
I do not understand. Kerik used the dragon language to create an alicorn? But it is not combined with the canon of elder scrolls. Dovakhin can not produce such a transformation with t`uum. He is only a man. Unless the author suggest that Akatosh gave him such a force.
1932815 this is Equestria, a land wrought and flowing with magic. things happen here like they do in alagaisia of the eragon books, without explaination. perhaps the thu'um is amplified by this natural state of magical enhancement? i can tell you Kerik was unable to perform a lightning spell like he did in the last chapter, so... *insinuation*
Well that was unexpected. I wonder what the others will think of him.
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WHAT?! T`uum strengthen by local magic? No explanation of this?
Sorry, but this man has just created a demigod only through the efforts of his vocal cords? What kind of power t`uum gives him? As I understand , alicorn`s blessing can only be given by the gods. So... hes a god.
What then prevents him to climb a high mountain , and say something like: "Let all the enemies of the pony die, Discord, turned to stone, and I finally go to rest ." That's all.
P.S. Dude, you just bury the story. I so wanted it to continue...
love it! keep up the good work
1932815 it´s MAGIC!!! he aint gotta explain s**t
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Any important event, object, character ... which seriously affect the factual basis of the story must be necessarily described and justified. Otherwise, the plot of the story will be gaps. This will devalue the story.
1933181 way to ruin the joke
1933074 I understand why it would confuse you. you have to understand the Metaphysics behind some things to understand that a lot of phenomena have no explaination, even divine intervention or manipulation is not at play. as i said, and as in the author note, the words were just a blessing and a prayer. i would suppose that what passes for an equestrian god/goddess showed pity on the child, and using the power of kerik's thu'um to fuel the healing it worked. the alicorn gift was just an unseen consequence. i will not fully explain this until the end of the story, or maybe even the sequel i have planned out already. so patience is a virtue. this fic will bring more questions than answers, and the explainations will come in the sequel. please wait. it will be good.
1933181 also, i see you have a lack of S's and other pints of grammar. just a statement, because im a grammar nazi
probably the sickest birth of an alicorn ever. and nice job with the use of the th'um bud. also nice job with making the dragonborn into a good guy. nice job all around hoss. ill be waiting and reading my good sir.
To be put simply the voice is godlike
Lol tops my alicorn ocs oragin i just peged mine as a cusoin to tia and lulu lol.
Hello. I first caught this over on FF.net and am more than happy to see it here. Favorited and liked. If I am not mistaken, I believe that I see the beginnings of a romance with Luna. I hope so. Luna is best pony. And goodness knows that she needs someone to love and who will love her back. I hope that I am not wrong. Please, keep up the great work. I look forward to more of the same. I was impressed with all three chapters thus far and look forward to more. Have a .
1950394 Thank you for the it is much apreciated, and you could be right. i toyed with the idea, but never considered it. i have alternate personality disorder, so i only half write this. normaly i wake up and find some of the chapter written, needing serious grammatical corrations and spelling checks, but sound and continuous with the remainder f the story. than the others for the possible turn of events
1950544 Well, I would suggest, keyword, SUGGEST it. I like Luna a lot. It also sounds like it may be happening already. I hope so but will have to wait to find out. Keep up the great work. See you next chapter.
wow nicely done
I'm a part of the Chess Game of The Gods group, a large crossover group whose main theme is humans being sent by various beings to Equestria in new bodies to participate in some kind of game with rules that are never clearly defined.
Each story has their own explanation as to how their main character winds up in Equestria, one of the more notable stories actually having Discord himself punting the poor bastard across the multiverse, but having Tiber Septim throwing someone from Sovngarde to Equestria tops them all if you ask me.
Well done sir. Well done.
you know their is the thu'um translator you should use that for dragon words, for example the thing you just wrote, it was mostly saying fear, life, night and guide.
There are quite a few spelling mistakes, why hasn't this been addressed yet?
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Cause ive been away for a while. rewoking will be taking place slowly while I write further chapters.
Please look forward to it!