In the long-forgotten past, the solar princess welcomed a black unicorn into Canterlot Castle. He was an artist who quickly found a place in the hearts of all who met him. His name, likened to the colour of his coat, was Midnight.
Nearly a millennium later, the discovery of an unusual book leads Twilight to Canterlot. And directly into a whirlwind of events where the secrets of the past are finally brought to light...even as all is eclipsed in madness...
Woah this is awesome. Tracked
Ooo like the first chapter, this is one to track.
go on...
Now things are getting good.
AAAH LunaMac, my one weakness! Take my stars, take all my stars.
You've managed to make a multithreaded story where I'm looking forward to all the parts and dreading none.
I need more! More I tell you! More!
Description alone worth 5 stars.
This is *clutches heart* AWESOME
FAINTASTIC story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work!
So, no loan for BM?
I find it hilarious that Big Mac has to concoct an elaborate ruse just to leave the farm for perfectly legitimate business.
Of course, when his baby sister goes missing at the same time, it's not QUITE as funny.
I mean, it's still a little funny, though.
So this Equestria is apparently so devoid of business institutions that you need to see the reigning sovereign just to get a loan. What a pain.
Eeyup. You follow that secret passage. Maybe there's treasure!
Welp, I'm guessing this isn't getting an update any time soon. Too bad, things were just starting to get exciting.
And poor Big Mac, man! Jumped into the middle of a royal assassination, watches Twilight race out of the throne room in tears, and all he can do is stand there awkwardly with a knife in his chest. Lame.