When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Another good chapter to this story. I'm still wondering whether the harem is gonna be strictly ponies or if it will include a few other races as well. Either is fine but variety is the spice of life.
I place my vote on Maria.
As for the harem, I'm somehow inclined to agree with a variety in it, since Spike is already a Drake and have been in a pony centered land.
Great!! This was enthusiastically written, or at least it felt that way to me, and the prospect of the wedding very nice. I wonder how Twilight and the others will react to Spike getting married? Well you know this early into the journey anyways.
I'm liking this more and more by the chapter.
Now we need a artist to draw for the author.
Oh shit, Spike. You've opened the worms now!
2015270 That would be nice: my own artistic skills peaked when i was using them the most, back in middle school. Now, though... ugh.
I saw Trixie mentioned in the dream. I can't help but hope to see her as part of the harem, and if I'm correct, Trixie's going to be the third wife, irregardless of her royal status.
There is nice development with Spike's story, but I feel like he's going rather fast with Maria; there doesn't seem to have been much development.
Couldn't stop smiling through the whole thing can't wait ill the next chap
2018571 That is the way nobility was in times like these. Many marriages were those of convenience or politicking, not love. Seriously, many girls were married off at thirteen or fourteen: Maria's lucky her father had the balls to wait for a suitable groom who she would also love.
No offence taken.
I know I'm late and I' sorry. And I'm even more sorry to say this but so far Maria has been a very predictable and boring character. It's a cliche I've seen a million times. Even though this may be the first time I find it on a FiM magic fanfic... Anyway so far there's nothing I like about her, much less the idea to deal with her the rest of the story.
Speaking of which, remember that the bigger the cast the harder it gets to work out a good story. And I don't know why but every time I read the name "Del Rivoso" it cracks me up.
dude your chater devlpent with oc dude can ask you one thing will you be a beta for me please
Clop or not, this story is just awesome! Need to keep reading on.
I've been benign to get back into this amassing story for a long time. You really know how to right sexy, and you understand the true meaning of love too boot. I wish I had the patience too put as much detail in my my own stories.
I have to admit, Spike's character is well balanced in this fic! He is very gentle, subtle and understanding and yet he doesn't lack that brash male impulsiveness needed to throw a little passion into his relationships! It is trully a job well done, dude!
Hah! Mariage already on the way! It looks like someone beat you to the punch Queeny!
Interesting fact about my self, Charlemagne was my ancestor
Im curious as to why he hasn't asked about his relationship with Meia
You know how u said this was gonna be fun...well you lied
Jk Jk great story loving it so far but needs more clop and also what about chrysalis she needs spike to
Just... just take my watch... You filthy monster.
3628324 Well, he knows Spike is to gather more than 1 wife so maybe he assumes that she is a possible candidate.
When you walk away,
You don't hear me say,
Please, oh baby, don't go.
Simple and Clean
Is the way that your making me feel,
Tonight.
It's hard to let it go.
Hold me,
Whatever lies beyond this morning,
Is a little later on.
Regardless of warnings,
The future doesn't scare me at all,
Nothing's like before.
Sorry. This popped into my mind the minute I saw those words, so I had to post it.
2018925 its a good story so far but this marriage thing seems a little too rush. I mean, from their time together she might have fallen for him, but i don't think a reasonable person would just up and marry someone after only three days and leave their family and friends. Such rash decisions only happen in Vegas after getting really wasted.
But since this story is supposed to be more romantically and pure minded written i can pass it off as being a super romantic and exiting development. just hope it doesn't turn sour in the end
Gah, waiting for Chryssie to give in is killing me!
Cya
Raziel-chan
Seeing the Authors note made me roll my eyes honestly speaking. I wish your clop filed chapters had markings where it begins and ends so us readers who wish to skip over it could easily do so.
6884622 I have to agree with you. I read for the plot not the clop.
Err, is there any particular reason a plant that can do that is in a place where people hang out? Is it some kind of weird practice to promote lust or something?
I was going to comment on how you were marrying him off too quickly and impulsively...then I remembered that that kind of thing was par for the course in Europe until...well, fairly recently, and is still the norm in some cultures.
Also, a good polish (edit) would really make this story shine.
Okay how does he know that Spike wasn't raised as a royal, or that he needs to make a harem? Also that colon needs to be a semicolon.
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The way Spike talks and acts is respectable without being arrogant, it shows he was taught etiquette but wasn't pampered or spoiled like most nobles, and as for the harem thing, many cultures (past and present) have had royals or leaders that had such practices to ensure a strong lineage