When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Hah, this chapter made me laugh. Oh Twilight, you dun goofed.
Man, I really do like the interplay between the wives and spike. Can't wait to see where you are going with this.
Now, girls....I-I know what it looks like, but....
GET HER!!!!!!!
****outside the library****
Works every time, hahahaha Now, where's Discord when I need him??
should be :will not be able to do, unless the context says otherwise. Just a little thing I noticed right off the bat.
Another good chapter Hope things get better for Spike an his wives.
2180026 Celestia was referring to the "no longer sending back things" aspect, one she (Twilight) did not know about.
Oh twilight you dun goofed, BAD
heh.
Good...Good..My override program is working. Keep this up, if you will. I'd hate to have to....replace you.
(Also, that . Twi, you dumbass.)
Twilight, you done goofed royally.
HA i knew that spell would've bit Twilight back in the flank!
Twilight forgot that this is Spike were talking about. Smart, sarcastic, and would not hesitate to screw someone over for messing with him.
SHE DUN GOOFED!!!
They say that the Devil is in the details, and I should say that my devil resides in the finer points as to why Celestia is mad and the way she both gains and expresses her anger. This devil is one that confuses me, it questions my thoughts to wonder why it was expressed as such, rather than my own liking. But it was only a small devil, that only resided between Spike's writing and Celestia's leaving, and forgetting the devil was ever there, it was still the beauty of a angelic dance that was revenge towards an anger most ill-founded
if you don't mind the mythological references I used in expressing my opinion that is
2180991 All will devilishly be revealed... eventually.
First off to say; Twilight... You done goofed!!
Okay on to the review.
The tension in this collapsed square relationship, the four walls of a square fall into one point with minimal to no interaction between each wall, is on a crash course with utter decimation. Two out of the four are okay if not dissatisfied with the predicament, while the other two can't seem to come to terms with who they are with, Maria expects Spike to be a strong powerful dragon, while Asalah, saw the jab in there, cannot come to terms, or more precisely cannot imagine, that a husband would show weakness, to have compassion, tolerance, I have to admit as I write this my anger comes to a boil. Two that are fine and two... Two that want to change the person they are married too. GAH!!
Cool calm collected...
Now as for the mane 6 and Celestia, I can see why Celestia is so thoroughly angry at Twilight for actually doing that, invading, altering, defiling another persons body so pompously but tossing her at the mercy of the 5 ponies that are the most angriest at her... That part had me dying!! It was hilarious! Can of sad Celestia didn't reach the end of Spike's letter, or did she but remained composed when she did. Hands up for those that think Celestia is being a little bit of a grandma here.
So did spoke decide to stop sending stuff because of the spell twilight out on him? Or does the spell make him unable to send stuff? Or is he just in a bad mood with people?
2182139 Bad mood. Yep: definitely a bad mood.
2182351 ok, though why is he not sending stuff to the others, when it is only twilight he should be mad at out of them?
he he massive rod . . .I am a child.
2184699 At least: I never fully disclosed the true length.
2183690 Twilight could get along fine ( mostly) without the things he'd send their way. All of her friends, on the other hand, are becoming rather dependent on it. Besides, they could punish her better than he could, given the distance between them.
2184862 true, though, why then, did dash trek for Ryan to get celestia?
2188939 ....what?
2188992 wait, your right, didn't read that correctly, my bad lol.
Wonderful transition chapter.
While I did laugh at the last scene, to me the real charm of this chapter lies on the awesome development you gave Spike and his wives. Specially Maria.
I also love a story where Celestia actually DOES soemthing.
great filler and excellent beginning character development also try to ease of the pure comedy gold my brain is getting pissed off at how amusing it was for the mane 5 to beat the shit out of foreverasparkle ( gasp could there possibly some after journey marital issues (( if you try to marry any of the mane six to spike ESPECIALLY RARITY i will immiedietly unlike unfavorite go to your house and pee on your computer)). what you could do is make a hilarious japan like filler chapter wher every one things spike was ass tagging twilight as a welcome home present but then gets cleared up.
Me along with the Mane six: ATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! *we charge her and pile up on top of her*
Me after the scuffle: That was cool! Uuuuhuhuhuhuhuh! Uhuhuhuhuh
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Now to tweak a very famous movie line, " Run, Twilight, Run!"
Well played Tia. Well played.
Yes! Revenge chapter to the fullest!
You have now satiated my thirst. Good on you sir. :)
But one thing really irks me.... How they react to the fourth engagement. First off, Spike really wasn't at fault. He was drunk, he flew in a window and even had the grace to sleep in another bed and not destroy anything. I know it said he thought they were pillows, but hidden minds make you do things differently and think something else is up. Also, they fell asleep! They could have stopped him in some way, or at least stayed up. And even if they couldn't, they can't blame him for a custom he never heard of, that sounds like it came from up somepony's flank! Lastly I really hate how they reversed his whole epic rescue to nothing more that his greed. Oh that pissed me off.
*sigh* I know it may sound weird but I over analyze stories I read and make it like they are real and have more emotions and thoughts that what are written. That's why I seemed bothered. Although, I do like the story and the plot buildup. I have more to read, and from reading what I have so far, I can say I will have an influx of emotions when reading this.
But I honestly look forward to it all nonetheless... :)
3481760 I was thinking the exact same things. They blame Spike for his marriage to Asalah? From what it seems, Spike hasn't had much to do with alcohol and therefore doesn't know what wine does to dragons.
we thank thee author for the punishment twilight is about to receive ah-men
4004706 Ah-men Brotha
Well, Twilight is dead.
Also, aww, Chryssie wants a baby!
Cya
Raziel-chan
trollestia I salute you!
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L.O.L
L.O.L
L.O.L
Twilight.... You fucked up.
Why does it seem like everyone's acting like Spike's drunken accident is a good reason for them to do whatever they want and act like it's completely justified? They have a right to be upset at Spike, but unlike him they're choosing to behave this way. Spike never chose to do all that, and two wrongs don't make a right. Do they really think that Spike's the kind of person who feels no shame at all?
In other notes, this is the kind of Celestia I like, the kind who sees when others are being dicks and makes sure to let them know it if she can.
7689981 welcome to married life. Did it for 11, almost 12 years lol. Women do what they want.
Why are spikes wives mad at him? It’s their fault in the 1st Place. Trixie obviously knew that wine had an effect on him yet she didn’t stop him from drinking the wine, and the fact that Spike drank the wine means he obviously didn’t know that wine had an effect on him, not to mention they didn’t sedate him in any way. They could’ve used their feminine wiles to lore him into a room and play the game “sex”! It makes no sense.