When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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I get the distinct feeling Spike will have more wives waiting for him when he gets back...Go Spike!
Can't wait to see spikes reaction when he finds out about chrysalis
And the plot thickens... nah! Oh how the great evil has fallen, for Spike that is.
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I'm gonna say that Spike's gonna run into a Gryphon as well as a female dragon in the future. Hay, based on what I've seen so far, I would just about wager a few bits that Spike's next wife is gonna be a Gryphon, and withing the next 3 chapters....think about it, they are in ponified Egypt, where the Sphinx is located, would that be the perfect place to find one? Also, a ponified version of a Sphinx in my headcannon would actually be a Gryphon (head of a eagle, body of an lion).
Count on it.
Edit: I think we established that Spike is an omnivore--meaning he will eat ANYTHING!! Definitely will see some sort of meat eater, just see my previous before the edit.
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I'm really touched, I don't know what to say.
Just keep doing what you're doing, man!!! The trip of his lifetime continues as Spike and his now pregnant wives travel Neighgyt....and then, onto Marerescadgar!!!
Just how is Chyrsalis going to explain to Spike ,
How and why she gave birth to a changeling hybrid?
: Dafuq?!
Meia: It's a family curse. *proceeds to cry*
: I didn't know. I still love you regardless.
Meia: Thank you.
Can I see your true form? We won't judge you.
Meia: Uh....
2216625 !LoL!
2216303 I totally agree with you. When Spike gets back to Equestria seems he'll be adding not only the Mane 6 but both princesses as well to his harem. As for being as they are in a pony version of Egypt, he'll probably add a gryphoness to his harem within the next few chapters. He still needs to add both an earth pony and a pegasus mare as well as a dragoness to his harem before he completes his trip.
Spike is so incredibly mary-sue in this. Kings, Queens and mares from every land are charmed by him and his personality. He can rip through any being like paper-mache with his draconic uber-powers and goddesses masturbate to his life. But oh, his powers are dangerous, and he carries an incredible burden not to hurt anyone...
This is starting to remind me of Twilight, for gods sake
2216366 of course the plots thicken 3 of the wives are pregnant each eating for 2+ it has to go somewhere
has to return with more than 1 wife oh boy indeed
I think out all the characters, I feel the most sympathy for is Chrysalis/Meia because she somehow she became the main female protagonist and out of Spike's wives she has the most character development with the whole evil plan to take over Equestria though the use of a naive young dragon on a pilgrimage, but as he continues to save her ass from death and opens up to her, she abandons her quest for world domination and now her only fear is that of rejection.
"Hey, I just realized that Chrysalis' story is that of every male protagonist from moves like: Avatar, Last of the Mohicans, Dances with Wolves, Pocahontas, Ferngully, The Last Samurai, Gun Ho, Total Recall, etc, A character from an opposing force infiltrates a group that he/she was sent to destroy, but falls in love with one its people or forms this unbreakable bond with her their new friends and sees the error of their ways."
I'm hoping that Spike's forgiving nature acts as a patch on the ship.
Character Development Chart:
Chrysalis/Meia 65-70%
Maria 55%
Trixie 45%
Asalah 20%
2217243 That is why I will not be getting Spike a new wife any time soon. I need to more fully develop the characters. Sometimes I feel like people only read this for the clop. I hope for others to read it for all it has to offer, not just the sex.
2216981 That is why the beginning of this journey is so relatively calm. More will come of this, I assure you. Also, calm down: Spike can't and won't do everything, and almost EVERY main character in a story is a Mary-Sue. Look at Luke Skywalker, Aragorn, Kratos, Bilbo Baggins, Master Chief, Ezio, etc... Nothing insurmountable EVER happens to them and they always win in the end. You'll have to label EVERY main character EVER as a Mary Sue if you are going to hold at least some credibility in your statement. So,
Don't EVER compare me to Twilight again, please.
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Let me stop you right there.
I may not know much about Mary Sue characters. But Spike is far from that. Every thing he acts is like any regular person trying to be nice. He wasn't some boom flucking amazing guy he had great friends, and princesses literally mold him into a dragon everyone could get used to, as for his dragon über power what are those exactly enhanced strength? Speed? Well hell blame a dragon for being fit for an occasion. He fears his power in full control while at the same time a slave to them. And Twilight really? Please regal me with Edwards sunny disposition, please inform me of Bella's lovable nature, oh where they are on a quest for something other then personal gain?
2217353 Okay, the Twilight bit was too much, I apologize.
I agree with main characters ''always'' being mary-sue in a sense, but it comes down to matters of degree and preference. Also, look at George R.R Martin for example. He has lots of main characters that DONT overcome all obstacles in their path. Sometimes with tragic results. That makes his writing interesting to read, cause you don't know what is actually going to happen. Bad ends might come to people you don't want to. This story is just too... easy for my tastes. People are too good, things go too smoothly. It's too perfect. But hey, you write what you want and let me feel how I feel about it, and we can all get along. Deal?
2218075 Agreed Besides, some later chapters will become rather... darker, even when compared to the baron's.
2218067 I went too far, sorry
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It's okay, I was out of line too. You are allowed to feel the way you want but... I hate Twilight with a passion. That pushed me over the edge... Sorry.
2218736 Hey, we're all human
arch.413chan.net/rarity-has-came-%28n1304321717655%29.jpg Brilliant
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Yeah and we also have that person that scolds us for doing something bad.
Nice chapter! Also great punishment for Twi
More Clop please!
*Signs* silly Sally... Don't you know the longer you wait, the harder it will be to tell him, and how much more it will hurt?
Yes you've been doing a wonderfull job indeed. I might even say that your skills have also been getting better over time. But if I'm completely honest, I felt Celestia and Luna's conversation... What's the word I'm looking for?... Pretentious. I may be overreacting, but I really have a feeelinf that you're making this more complicated than it should.
In all honesty, yes, yes you are indeed. Or maybe not a tyrant. More like a manipulative and facist liar.
I'm sorry, but a lie is still a lie.
damn freacking lunaughty and molestia about to be summoned I would hate to go to the grand "clopping" gala while there in rape mode.
Ok I know what the princesses' special time is but what? Are they masterbating to his life or what? I don't get it :/
Welp... 3 down, 1 to go!
I noticed Luna didn't talk about him sending some gifts their way again.... Is that saved fora surprise, or not really important?
2868141 The letter... Contained stuff about sex... So... You know...
Okay, Chrissi, do you not think he'll figure it out when you give birth to a changeling? Seriously? But a dragon-changeling hybrid would be pretty cool... Yo Randy-Dandy-Oh! Use this idea!
Hey, don't you talk shit about the kindles, I love mine. Hell, that thing is organized to shitville.
I PRAISE THEE WHO RECCOMMENDED THE REMOVAL OF SUCH EXCESSIVE & ARDUOUS PUNS.
This wonderful I enjoy the one shot sex stories but finding a sex story with a legitimate story behind it and good writing is a blessing
Spike is one help of a Baker, to put buns in so many ovens.
Can't wait for Chryssie to reveal herself.
Cya
Raziel-chan
What a surprise. It turns out that good feels good. Give someone a chance to experience it and they may never want to lose it.
So Celestia's master plan seems to involve herself, Luna, and the Main Six to becomes Spike's wives? *voice pitch gets higher with each question* Maybe? Hmmm? Is that something that's gonna happen? You gonna make Spike have a bunch of wives? Is that your plan? Although I could be way off on that. I have been wrong before. Just making assumptions. Good luck Spike!
Right...cause that is worrying
Wow...so many wingboners at once pluse the other girls reactions...great job Spike