When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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That cliffhanger....damn! Please don't let the next update take too long!
One little thing. Trixie's cannon last name is Lulamoon.
Week I guess there is another way to create an awkward morning
2411577 *I point at Mr101 while I'm looking at the author.* What he said.
oh come on damn cliffhangers
Maybe I missed something, but I think Trixie's maiden name was Lulamoon
2411748 I second this motion
THIS CHAPTER IS SO MANY LEVELS OF AWESOMENESS!
The Princesses of The Sun, Moon and Love conversation, Rarity punching the wall, 'how to please your man' lesson's from Meia, the wife's finally going on a shopping spree and the best part of this for me, Chrysalis coming out.
Also, I love how you describe our beautiful Queen. Cause bad or not, she's still damn hot!
The next chapter is going to be Soooo GOOD!
Lets see what is Spike's reaction after he has his freak out moment.
2411748 This is an alternate universe.
2411875 ^^^^^^^^
2411881 Same as above.
dun. Dun. DUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!
Eh, saw this coming (heh heh) from a mile away.
Princess Cadence: "Someone may want to answer that phone."
Princess Luna: "Why?"
Princess Cadence: " Because I BUCKING CALLED IT!"
I love DBZ Abridged.
one of two thing will happen 1. shit hit the fan and the nightemare becomes a reality or 2 the more likely shit hits the fan and Spike and Crissy have great make up sex and fighte off Cadens
Poor chrysie..
Also, i laughed at Rarity!
Well here I am at the end of this chapter, bout five seconds away from finding and ending you mate, and thinking "damn cliffhanger!!". Normally you would be dead by now but there was so much in this that earns your pardon. Rarity for punching the wall, funny as hell, Meia for creating this juicy and rather pleasant piece of drama, and finally for the conversation between the three princesses. You have been spared gracefully, now update, update like the wind!!
Oh god finally
Here's to hoping for a happy end
Spikes gonna run and try not to love her but after some soul finding walk through the desert backed by 'Dust in the Wind' he'll find even thou she was evil he still loves her.
I have a feeling I know just about exactly what's going to happen, though I have been wrong plenty of times and I can't wait to see if I'll chalk another win for me or for this amazing story!
Shit = Real.
At least it wasn't "A Crying Game" scenario and for that Spike should consider himself lucky. Chrysalis has a lot to account for if, this is gonna work, but Spike could figure that she'd have no ulterior motives, if she told the truth, "this" far away from Canterlot.
Oh god I can see the mane six Shining and the princess face right now, All shock and surprise in disbelief.
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dis gon b gud
ok can honestly say I did not see that coming. Great idea, adds so much to the plot now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh, god. Scream incoming!
She finally reveal herself to Spike. I can't wait for the next chapter.
2413441 Amen brother amen.
Damn it.
It took me just 2 days to read all the way to here and now you have a cliffhanger here. I'm following you
At least you seem to have a rather steady update schedule. Can't wait for more. This has been one of the most enjoyable stories I have ever read and considering I used to devour 400-500 page books in a single day it might actually mean something. THAT MEANS GET TO IT . I NEED TO SATE THIS ADDICTION YOU HAVE GIVEN ME!!!!!
As a small side note. To me the clop, while well written, is actually more of an extra as your story is more than just good enough to stand on its own without it. On second thought. You have done a fantastic job in using even those scenes as means for character development.
Damn. I just can't stay angry at you for the cliffhanger when I know that the coming chapters are going to be well worth the wait.
Definitely have me wondering if Spike and the girls will accept Chrysalis or not now that she's revealed herself to Spike.
"Oi BLU! She finally did it!"
"You mean?!"
"Yes, she revealed who she truly was."
"Its about bloody time she did! Did spike take it well?"
"Well about that"
"Cliffhanger eh? Well if you excuse me while I go shoot someone"
"Stop trying to kill the authors again, we can't handle another lawsuit without serving community service, again."
Holy crap she reveled herself! How will Spike take it? Please let him still love her and not hate her.
*Reads the part about Rarity punching her bathroom wall.* Best lol I've had today xD
okay first off rarity punching the wall is just hilarious. 2nd i think cadence was way too spot on for Meia really being Chrysalis
Off in Ponyville, Rarity suddenly punched a hole in her bathroom wall for no reason.
Hahahaha!
Oh and major surprise at end. Candace called it XD
2412129 Your face when they start saying Lulamoon is Trixie's canon name
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I believe you meant to say 'a world-wide tour.
3579556 the name of the image killed me: haunter used mean look....
I love Rarity's reaction.
Oh god, I hope it all goes well!
Cya
Raziel-chan
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He's gonna go ballistic.
Okay, either Cadance is really paranoid or really clever. 'Cause predicting that Meia was Chrysalis just from her story (and possibly her cover name) is really clever, and suspecting that any random mare Spike met would be her is really paranoid.
Wrong series Luna...but nice reference
Ohh I'd sleep with an open eye from now on Cadance
Do I spy with my little eye some foreshadowing perhaps?
Well you seee funny story