When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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TRACKED.
Not a bad start. Are the characters anthro or plain human?
1900756 Anthro.
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Kk. Wondering if the Trixie and Queen Chrysalis means they'll be 2 of his harem or not. Also not gonna be easy to get a minimum of 3 wives. Have to look long and hard for females that mind sharing the same male. And Spike's reaction to having to have multiple wives? If I was in his spot i'd be thinking 'hell yeah' :-P What red-blooded male wouldn't want a harem?
1900856 Well, in his case, I wouldn't mind either. Only to him, he's not the most experienced guy in the world... yet.
We'll see where you go with this. Just be sure to include character development and maaaaaaaybe a story to go along with it.
The charaters indeed are a bit different for the show, but that's understandable because of the set up you made. Now THAT'S what boters me. I mean, come on man! Even for Harem or Hentai standars this is waaay to forced and a bit stupid... Yet somehow very interesting. Wich is a very good thing.
And I'm really impressed, with all places you said you will send Spike. And even if I asume that you would make a chapter for each place you mentioned, I fell compelled to ask: Do you plan to ever finish this story?
In any caseas as silly as it may be at first, the premise does sounds interesting and like to se Chrysalis become a part of Spikes harem.
1901151 If anything, it will be in order from least to greatest: sex, development, historical exploration. I'm a historian myself, so be prepared for a bit of in-depth historical perspectives. Then again, I might just include a bunch of all of the above.
1901245 Of course I plan to explore every place, and yes, this story will be finished... eventually.
The human tag is not needed. Only if there is a human character(s), or if you are using humanized ponies. Anthro is not human.
By the way, there is a groupe for anthro stories. It is called Anthropomorphics. You should check it out.
1901422 Thank you for the notice: fixed. My bad.
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Don't feel bad. It is actually a very commen mistake for some reason.
So will you add your story to the group?
1901489 In time. Right now, I'd like to get a few more chapters out before I do so. Give it some life, you know?
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Okay then.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
Damn this sounds long. Lezdothis
Hmm. This has...potential. All the more reason to be interested.
Tracking and watching you like a hawk, my friend.
And if this turns out to be a total train-wreck, at least I'll have a head's up when it does go face first.Well, this looks interesting... I read! Allons-y!
Spike+harem+wide adventure=awesome story
Sure everyone's like "Yeah harem!" the problem I see is being forced! No one likes being forced and lied to for what ever reason! Know I'm all for this fanfic, but come on! I would have expected Spike to be a bit more mad...
P.S. I mean no offence to the author.
Interesting... tracked. I need to read rest soon the idea is just great.
Spike harem is a GO!
dude epic start
So it's kind of like Where the hell is Matt but with spike.
I like it so far!
Spike goes on a life changing journey around the world. And while he on this adventure he gets all the bitches!
I like it so far!
Spike goes on a life changing journey around the world. And while he on this adventure he gets all the bitches!
2502333 oh god.... THE CLOPPERS... THEIR CUMMMING *takes off heavily tinted swag glasses* mother of god.
Chairmare Wao...
As a chinese...
I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF
Dude this is going to be a long story and a great one
Heh! Bulgarians used to have a Khanate when Bulgaria was first forged. I should know, I'm Bulgarian and I've studied my native history!
*enough not neough
What, no pun?
How about austailia
I know this is late. But how many bits do you want to bet that at least one of his brides is non pony?
3864480 Thank you for pointing that out. Have some mustache.
3864494 He won't be visiting Australia in-depth, but rest assured, I might find a pun name, unlike Austria. Couldn't think of a good one for that.
3864533 I'm not a betting man, since I know what will happen.
My arms randomly flailed around as I read this.
Thumbs up.
IT IS STILL INCOMPLETE?!
-this is going to be one hell of a story-
Also I'm very new to this, so could anyone help me with my avatatar please? Any help will be greatly appreciated.
So.. many.. equine related puuns...
Nah, I'm not hating on it, just that's the first time I've seen so many so close together.
Adventure, YAAY!!
Spike as Ibn Battuta.
Neat premise.
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If Dragon homeland: Oatscaleia
If not Dragon homeland: Oatstralia
i’m reading this in school... now i’m jealous
So far I find it's an amazing start, I'm loving the OOC spike and can't wait to read more :D
An interesting premise. I checked out the tvtropes page and it sounds like this is exactly the kind of story I like to read with a lot of elements I've been looking for on this site but have yet to come across to any significant degree. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Hmm, interesting start. A bit heavy on exposition, but I guess it can't be avoided.
I half expected Spike to faint at the end.
Cya
Raziel-chan
This is the first harem fic I'm reading, so I hope it's good.
Well, I put this off for a while. Blame the rest of Fimfiction. It's pretty large.
A good start, introducing the Spike we'll be with, but not on his journey yet.
Plus, it has a tropes page, therefore it must be worth reading. Right?
That's a fuck-ton of information being given really quickly. I may need to give this a reread at some point.
The y in you should be capitalized
I think you mean "befriend"
I think you mean "befriend" here too.
problem, not porblem.
If it's a thing in many places, and the skewing is prevalent throughout Equestria, then why is Spike so confused and bashful? Also, when is this set? Considering that Rarity was mentioned, I assume that a bunch of events in the show's cannon are considered to have occurred. Given what's mentioned, I assume it's most of Season 3, but it began before it ended so Twilight was not crowned. So, I'm unsure, but he's been relentlessly perusing Rarity from the start to this point, probably gave her at least one kiss on the cheek or received one from her, and yet he seems to be completely and utterly flustered at the idea of any woman wanting to have/having a romantic and/or sexual relationship with him. He also seems pretty accepting of the idea that he'll have to abandon Twilight, who he worked as an assistant for, and he'll have to give up on trying for Rarity, in spite of his infatuation with her.
Da fuck