When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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I have a question. How many more wives are there gonna be, because if there's a lot more I'm afraid there won't be a lot of character development or some will be forgotten.
... I'm waiting for rumors of the only dragon who told everyone his name at a strip club to spread to the king and queen... such things do not assure confidence.
2617616 dude don't underestimate him dude never lets any one stay in the spot light to long and each gets a turn rember Trixe she had a come back and so did Crissy and Maria recently and besides I am waiting for the dragon, griffin and draneques wives so have faith in our friend
Dude cant waite for the other wives please tell me he gets a sexy wolf girl, griffin and draeques wives please
Loved it all, especially the sweet little moment at last
SHOW THOSE MARES WHOS DA BOSS! BACK TO THE KITCHEN!
I feel bad for that joke.
Seems to have provided me my explanation of this chapter in the first few sentences.
"What is this? What is my life"
Love you even more for the reference.
But now on a more serious note, this chapter felt a tad rushed and more sided on the fan servicing. Well, in all honesty it was brilliant and your detailing of the scenario was both comical and... informative. Still, dev time could have been given to make it feel less stressed. I would like to restate however that I loved it, so it's about as important as it is unimportant...?
Still anxious for your supposed additions to... well, his life. There's always hope for more and with the context clues and longing you've made clear to us, additions may be a little closer to home than Spike's world-traveling self may be aware of...
2619073 See? This is what I absolutely love among beloved reviews: informative and detailed criticisms, praises and helpful hints. This helps me write better, and while I appreciate all reviews, whether good, bad or neutral, telling me to go faster does not help with the writing process. This, on the other hand, does indeed.
Here, you've earned this:
I'd give more, but then I'd be all out.
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If it's informative and detailed criticism you seek, you'll find it both rare and all the more appreciative. As for praise and helpful hints, I can give that too, but only enough to make sure your spirits are high after a lengthy and disheartening review of a failed chapter... which I have yet to see!
I'll take your mustaches, but leave you with some as tip. You deserve it and I sincerely hope you do well with it and see us through another lovely chapter. With my greatest hopes and regards...
- SW
2619375 This chapter was magnificent & comical.
The story of the king's friendship and the kingdom.
Right in the feels.
Hey I'm grump! And I'm not so grump... ahaha
Ok....so getting the image of a stallion version of chip and dale out of my head. In see your going with a Romeo and Juliet type of thing with Mehmed and Sheba, not bad.
While still good, I assume the next chapter will actually be more about Mehmed and Sheba growing relationship.
Take your time and keep up the good work!
No need to rush a chapter, the time you put in each the better they will turn out.
2643903 Maybe should ask all the others who have read my story if they want it all changed. Their opinions matter too.
My reaction to this chapter
3592049 ......DAFUQ
The "Stud Shack" scene...
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I mean, damn.
... Why didn't Spike just walk away from that? He wasn't even supposed to be there and wasn't he trying to keep an eye on Mehmed?
I know this is 2 years after release of chapter but
Yeah, sure Spike. You would totally bring down the law and not get your ass kicked.
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I think you missed part of the dialogue. Besides they'd all be to shocked by their Sex God of a Husband. Actually turning his second tail into a weapon to do anything.
Most of them Being Trixie and Chrysalis would probably ask Spike to do the same thing to them. While Asalah is left drooling at the sheer dominance that such an action would display.