When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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For some reason drunk spike sounds like one of the funniest things ever, or any drunk dragon to be honest... Spike you dun goofed...
Okay, so a zebra has joined the harem, what will the marriage look like since it was... somewhat unintentional.
My mouth hurts from all the smiling. Spike has a lot of explaining to do and if his wives don't kill him Twilight will. And is this the last we see of drunk Spike?
i bet he planned this somehow.
2164720 Oh, I'll see what I can come up with...
2164737 Spike's smart, but he's not that smart.
Let's see... That's one marriage that was planned out beforehand, one that just kinda happened while traveling and was preformed by a king, one due to the mare in question being pregnant already and now we have this one because he fell asleep in the wrong bed.
I'm curious to see how many odd ways he can be dragged into marriage.
A strangely unsatisfactory chapter... I really don't know why, but so far this is the chapter I've enjoyed the least. Yet I can't find anything wrogn with the chapter. Ok, it was a bit rushed, and the last scene was cliché as hell. But overall it is a descent chapter.
Remember when I asked you if you think to ever finish this story?
I fucking called it.
Well shit was I off. I was thinking the wine was filled with some sort of mass date-rape drug or something.
Apparently not. Still, good chapter. Keep 'em coming
Spike is a happy drunk.
Spike, you went and done goofed.
All I can say to this is........... (Hey dragons can puke too.)
How come Spike never get's invited to the slumber parties?
hmmmm I feel that the mares falling unconscious was a bit forced and vaguely unnecessary. I mean if he had gotten out I think it would have been dramatically more pontent if they had said something like he escaped.... god help us all...
2643897 I know its completely pointless to bring this up now but if you ever feel like revising the story or something this would be a good change.
Spike: O.o I got lured into getting married again!............... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
He looked to be of a jovial sort, like Santa Paws, the polar bear that delivered presents to all the good colts and fillies at the end of the year on a sleigh pulled by flying walruses.
Ahahahahahaha! What?
Pirates of the Carribian reference?
the pony name puns are getting a bit hard to do arn't they
Oh boy, The Staircase of Sin begins, let's see how long it takes for me to lose interest.
Spike was wearing a turbine? How'd he manage that?
I think you mean turban
4109056 as was Al Adin
Honestly, some of your goofs are hilarious! Still laughing at Spike wearing a turbine!
I full on burst out laughing
Heh. Well, so much for his next wife being Jasmane, despite the blatant Aladdin references. So while I didn't guess the next wife's name right, I did call that he'd be getting married to someone. Ha!
That escalated quickly.
Yay, new wife and now his harem had harem clothes too!
Cya
Raziel-chan
Oh, Spike. You poor, incredibly lucky bastard.
And this is why most of our marriages require both parties entering the relationship to do so voluntarily and while in full possession of their faculties to be considered official.
Those are some of the better typos I've seen. How do you "partially rap"? Do you give Eminem the hiccups? On that note, how exactly does one wear a turbine?
I know bloody well what you meant, I'm just being a dick.
Well that happened
Impressive ponification on real world names, locations, etc.
But there isn't much of a story. Maybe its there in later chapters, but after 15 chapters I don't think its unreasonable to assume everything after is just going to be a series of remixed "meet girl, woo girl, marry girl, repeat".
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Yeah, the earlier chapters are fairly lackluster compared to later ones. They are more of the establishing ones, but I do, eventually, intend to go back to them and spruce them up a bit. Better dialogue, more descriptions, maybe a new scene or two within the chapter, more pronounced characterizations, etc, all to make it better.
Ah Sunset's catchphrase, It's been a while since I last herd It...Still fun to hear It
Did you get inspired by this?:
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The writing feels oddly similar to that of The Hobbit, but that's just me