I'm sorry, Princess Celestia. I have failed you as a student, and I have failed you as a friend.
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inb4 Regidar!
Now to the reading.
"Oh, Celestia. What have I don't to deserve this?"
First line doesn't make sense.
Did you mean done?
Don't = Do not.
Done = (eg.) I have done this. Someone have done something.
I think this is fine without the alternate ending.
1820943 I don't do this anymore. You can stop now.
1821101
OK
1821107 Not just because of you, but people like you, got me banned on Saturday. knighty's forbidden me from doing what I used to.
1821115
D:
1821115 wait, so you are not allowed to post on people's stories any more?
Also so that the author doesn't get annoyed with us talking just about regidar: surly celestia wouldve seen this coming and not allowed her to leave or at least warned her friends about this or put some kind of spell on twilight. It's just I expect celestia to be a bit more carefull
1821148>>1821151 Pretty much. I mean, I still can, but even this comment chain is riding it pretty close. Knowing knighty, he's probably stalking me, just waiting for me to slip up so he can ban me.
1820958
Typos bro typos, calm thyself.
1821164
Don't worry, knighty probably won't, like, IP ban anyo
1821194 Yeah, probab
(USER WAS BANNED FOR THIS POST)
1821203
Oh n
(CUT THIS BULLSH*T OUT GUYS)
1821215
1820958 Thank you for catching that. My IPad likes to spell check stuff for me, and a lot of the time it gets it wrong.
Short sweet and to the point, love it
1822568 Thank you!
1821163 Well, I was thinking that since Twilight's been having those spell discharge things that I mentioned, that Celestia doesn't really know how to handle her. After all, it's the first time since Celestia had them that the elements were held by mortal ponies.
1822042
I know the feeling.