One night, while the Elements of Harmony are feeling a bit...discorded, the evil embodiment of chaos himself finds a gap in the elements' power just large enough for him to send in his best plan against Equestria ever. Six new ponies, armed with 6 new elements are out to get the Elements of Harmony. Can Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Fluttershy stop these ponies? Or will they overthrow the balance of harmony in Equestria and free Discord from his stony prison?
This is my second fic, so constructive criticism is welcome.
Chapters (7)
First.
Well-written thus far, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Very nice!
Save for the mistake here and there, you've got a pretty nice story.
Just wanted to tell you your story is nothing like what im doing. Some similar traits but other than that, nothing major.
Youve got my like
Looking forward to chaos. Countdown begins now. Countdown ends when the shit hits the fan.
I've only noticed the Elements of Chaos talk about how they look like the mane six with inverted colours. Why haven't the mane six realised? There's an idea.
You got my idea!
1382265 yes, yes I did. I had been considering when to do that, and I decided that I would do it in this chapter since you pointed it out.
thank you, by the way.
Mmhm, I'm liking this story so far. I await the conclusioning of the wait that I have... NOW begun!
Amazing story!