Join Celestia from days of a filly to when she rules equestria and beyond. As she lives her days and adventures with mysterious stallion known only as the Doctor. Struggling to understand him and his ways falling for him later on in life.
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Interesting... do go on
Still good. Needs some touch up with the punctuation, but still good
Needs more commas, but other than that, I'm just going to keep reading.
This is a brilliant idea! (Although you do need to watch for punctuation as previously pointed out, the flow is adequate but could use some improvement) Judging by your "name" and your author's note you're clearly a Doctor Who fan, also you're concern over whether you captured the First Doctor well enough. I'd almost forgotten how dissimilar his personalities could be from 1-11, I look forward to the adventures you will present to us. But so far, you have done the Doctors quite a bit of justice I imagine you must be either reading or watching old episodes of Doctor Who or some such as research material. Either way, good luck, I'm going to follow the hell out of this.
Love It!
Nice, but I think you need to use some more commas at points
WONDERFUL STORY, I CAN SEE THE GROWTH OF THE CHARACTERS WITH EACH PASSING CHAPTER AND AM EAGER TO SEE HOW THEY GROW IN RELATION TO CANON
Throwing this out there dark evil thoughts probably the Valeyard which should appear when the next re-generation occurs in doctor who.
WHAT THE HELL? NO COMMENTS YET??? WELL IN THAT CASE CONGRATS ON THE CHAPTER AND...ozfeed.com.au/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/firstpost.jpg
PHILOSOPHICAL... AND NOT ENTIRELY NOT TRUE...
The All New Tenchi-Muyo!
I loved that manga.
BLINDED BY THE LIGHT! REVVED UP LIKE AN ENGINE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!
I MUST SAY... THIS HAS BEEN ENTERTAINING TO READ...
RUIN, SUCH A FOOL...
IF ONLY HE TRANSFERS THE KNOWLEDGE GAINED FROM THE DOCTOR INTO A PALANTIER CRYSTAL GLOBE, HE WOULD NOT HAVE GONE
THE WAY OF THE VEGETABLE...
THOUGH HAVING AN ENTIRE KINGDOM LINKED TO YOUR WILL MAY SEEM INGENIOUS, ELIMINATING ONE OF THE NEED OF GUARDS AND POTENTIAL ASSASSINS, IT WAS A FOOLISH ENDEAVOR AND HIS ARROGANCE WAS ULTIMATELY HIS DOWNFALL...
welcome the space hobo
Midnight twinkle?
Is it perhaps pony in a box?
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"It stands for Time and Relative Dimension and Space," it's in space. In. Like the only I in TARDIS.
was the cabbit Ryo-ohki's ancestor?
This fic is amazing i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Take all the time you need. Your stories are pretty awesome
Man, I'm glad to have found this gem while randomly searching the site. Seeing Celestia and Luna grow under the care of the Doctor is a real treat to read. Hope this story continues its fantastic narrative of the Royal Sisters past and their future.
Please continue this story, it's now one of my favorite doctor whooves stories
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Nice work on this chapter.