The Doctor, in a strange accident has found himself a pony in Equestria. But from there things only get stranger, with Equestria's past as his future the Doctor finds himself in a relationship with Luna, trying (unsuccessfully) to stop Pinkie from creating Paradoxes, and trying to survive the onslaught of monsters from Equestria, aliens following him through the Void, and Princess Celestia herself! Will the Doctor survive? Will he unravel the mystery of his future involvement in Equestria's past? And will Pinkie ever learn that the laws of physics exist for a reason? Find out in 'Vortexes are Magic'
-Cover art by me (Not my best work, but I'm proud)
Chapters (22)
*Curl non-existent moustache*
hmmmm.... Intresting...
I must agree, that is pretty standard fare for the Doctor.
I look forward to more.
Ohh, and I must add, there were multiple grammatical errors throughout. Not enough to detract from the story, though they did cause me to trip over them as I read. A quick once over would do some good.
1518524 Thanks for commenting, I'm glad that someone likes my stories, as for the errors, I don't exactly have a pre-reader or editor to check for things like that, and the time I have on the website I spend most of writing, or reading other people's work, not going over stuff I already wrote. I fix any errors that I see, but it's probable I missed a lot. Anyway, thanks for reading
, I'll be making this story for a long time.
I'm very sure a lobotomy refers to the removal of part of the frontal lobe of the brain, responsible for controlling emotional decisions. Or something like that. I'm very sure it has nothing to do with wings, so it doesn't seem to fit here.
Otherwise, wonderful story. I like you characterization of Chrysalis *or however you spell her name* Enjoying the read, and as always
MOAR!!
What the hell!?!? Dislikes?!?! IMPOSIBRU!!!
Rose... *Le sheds manly tear*
GERONIMO!!!
1519171 fixed, I think. Thanks for the bit about Chrysalis, I read in a different fanfiction, I think it was 'a change in heart', that the Changelings had holes in their legs and wings because they didn't get enough love and were beginning to fade away, so I put emphasis that the Changelings are healthy right now.
1519659 why is it everyone with that picture is 'user does not exist' when I click on it?
1521027 He is no one.
GERONIMO!!!
DISLIKES!?!? IMPOSSIBRU!!! THIS STORY HAS SWAG!!!
GERONIMO!!!
I want this to be there so that no one gets confused, but in the end I'll have to keep deleting it, editing it, and reposting it every time I finish a story arc. Is there any way to change the order of chapters?
1552416 I'm afraid not
GERONIMO!!!
All I have to say is make sure that the ponies keep up their hate of the other tribes. If any of them see the Doctor with his wings with Pinkie, bad things will happen...
Also, I'm curious as to what you intend to have happen. The story is pretty well defined from the episode...
ANYways... Loving this story still, hope to see more.
If the doctor can regenerate himself new limbs... will we end up with alicorn doctor? Apparently, his regeneration allows him to do so. Celestia will not be happy.
1558088 the inspiration... it burns!
Oh shit... Romance? DOCTOR TO DANNY-BOY DOCTOR TO DANNY BOY. GIVE HIS COMMUNICATION'S ARRAY HELL!!!
ALONZY ALONZO!!!
Woah. This is really good. You wrote them perfectly. Their personalities are perfect.
And that's how I caused a future paradox!
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
Again, wonderful story. Keeping my attention till the last minute.
Would like to say, this could use a quick once over. There were multiple issues, mainly with quote marks and capitilization, but nothing that detracted from the story. Just saying it could use a quick review.
1590769 *Doctor* That's not how you do that!
Doctor...... get the f
k out!
*Doctor* Well, I never.
1591750... Dafuq was that?
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
1594005 Wait, if you're there then 'Who' was that?
1594053...You just asked a time-traveling space alien how he's in two places at once.
TIME TRAVEL.
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
1594079
But wouldn't that create a para- wait, you didn't see yourself.
1594101 And that's how equistria was made!!!
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
1594287*tips hat*
1594703 LIKE A MOTHER BUCKING SIR.
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
1594704 We should do this more often.
1594718 Who says we can't? we can chat on our account pages at anytime if we wanted to!
...if you know what I mean
ALONZY ALONSO!!!
So the Doctor was Private Pansy. Not Fluttershy's ancestor, but him.
1599624 Or he COULD be Fluttershy's ancestor.
*salutes and pulls lever* ALLONS-Y!!!!! *dissappears*
1599994 That's minorly messed up.
1599994 1600048 Pax, I don't think it was ever stated that they were the ancestors of the mane six, and no, he's definitely not Fluttershy's ancestor, sorry Bronygamer
1600324 Eh, it was a guess, but it would be awesome if he was though.
THIS IS 100% TRUE.
ANDIAMO!!!
I must say, I'm kinda disappointed. The angles are by far my favorite Dr. Who villain, and I don't feel that you did them justice. Also, the crack is obviously from season 5. It feels like you're running out of ideas. There's a world of possibilities to pull from in this world to use as villains for the Doctor. Don't fall back to tried and true ones, give the Doctor something new to face.
I did enjoy the chapter however. Looking forward to your next update.
The angels are actually the best rated Doctor Who monster(even though I like the Vashta Nerada). However, you should give them a bit more than being just statues. we should have a scene where they attack in masses from the manor. Or something like that one episode whereeeee, Amy and Rory, died....
awesome. You could have used a new villain. Or you could... OH SHIT
YOU COULD COMBINE TWO VILLAINS THAT GOT COMBINED IN THE TIME VORTEX!!!
Like a Weeping Angel and a silence(Ive forgotten why I shouldn't blink.) ; Or an Empty Child and a Sicarak AND an Atraxi!!!
1620859 I'm no good at writing scary stories, and frankly, I wrote the first bit with the crusaders and the Angel and decided to make it a side story, so, sorry if the Angel's didn't get enough screen time or weren't scary enough. And the crack is supposed to be from season five, but what you should be paying attention to is the things on the other side. I'm not going to rip off episodes of Doctor Who any more than I did with this and the first story arc, don't worry.
1621109 Like I said, I don't plan on bringing that many Doctor Who enemies into the series, actually, just two more- free moustaches if you can guess which two... but no millions of Angels, four locked in Tartarus and one on the run are scary enough.
1622050 Darn it he knows! But not exactly... two more enemies from the Doctor Who world, both of them in pony form, does that count as combining?
1622203
1. Yes it does.
2. My guesses are...
a) Cyberman and Dalek
b) Living Plastic and Empty Child
c) Cacti and The Master
AND
d) The Mighty Jaggrefest and The Clockwork Bot's
If I got one (enemy) right, tell me which, if I got both the enemies, But they weren't paired, tell me which, but PM me it
ANDIAMO!!!
1622329 Cacti? Like the prickly plant? Or is it an enemy from an episode I haven't seen?
Oh yes;
(They weren't paired though)
1631764 They're from "The End Of TIme"
ANDIAMO!!!
1633828 You mean the Vinvocci? They were good guys though. Well, they were manipulating the guy who wanted immortality into building their uberhospital for them... but they were good guys, and no, they won't be appearing.
1635207 Hey, don't say won't, say won't in the next part. Don't knock it till you try it.
ANDIAMO!!!
Hmmm. Well appealingly the doctor went back to a time when stars never existed, and I bet that in this section of the story line, is when we find out why Celestia hates The Doctor.
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Yes, yes it does.
ANDIAMO!!!
When are the stars?
1657864 patience is a virtue.
1660238 Understood. IMPATIENT TEMPORAL SHIFT!