• Member Since 16th Mar, 2012
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Ganondox


I'm a human who lives on the planet Earth.

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Pinkie Pie is known for her perpetually cheerful demeanor, but is that really how she feels inside? Deep inside, something is eating at her, only surfacing when she takes some time to think.

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After seeing the picture again while listening to https://soundcloud.com/makkon/some-time-to-think I decided to give Take These Broken Wings a rest and try a one-shot. Let's see how this goes. Yes, everything in it is purposely vague.

*sobs* This was beautifully done. Fuck them haters. I loved this story with every fiber of my being. You, my friend, are a talented writer. Thank you, you legit made my day with this. I mean it. Ain't just saying it. You've written other things, haven't you? No matter. This is just awesome, ok? Frickin' awesome... *cries* Tears of shock. Instant fave.

:raritydespair: DON'T.... CRY!!! :pinkiesad2:

Retarded story is retarded.

0/5 Pinkie Smiles for you.

You should know better then to write this passé self indulgent two-dimensional dribble.

"A literal whole in her"

*hole

:fluttercry: I....I don't.... :fluttercry:

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Yes, I have written other stories: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=19670

Good:
Learn to Fly
Heavy Metal Fluttershy

Dumb:
My Little Cupcakeshie
The Power of True Love

Shocking:
Doomflower

Too Dumb for Fimfiction:
Mayonaise

I hope you find something to enjoy!

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Thank for your brilliant review! You should work for the New York Times!

That being said, eh, maybe. This was the story which I finished in the least amount of time after coming up with the idea. I didn't put as much time into actually writing Cupcakeshie (and Mayonaise as well, if that even counts as a story), but other than that and maybe The Power of True Love this is the story I've spent the least time on. I did try to experiment with this one.

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Thank you for catching that! It has been fixed.

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Well that doesn't quite sound artsy enough.

This was reasonable, as in, it was a believable thought process. From me, on this sort of subject, that's saying a lot. Well done. :duck:

This was a very sad story.:pinkiesad2:
Good job

One thing you messed up on I saw. You called the twins Pound Cake and Cup Cake. Cup Cake is their mom. The other twins name is Pumpkin Cake.

Comment posted by Rainbow Dashey deleted Dec 11th, 2012

I liked it, asides from a few mistakes and some of the word choices; it reminded me of my own self. :fluttershyouch:
So take my feels, and a like + fav to go with it. :twilightsmile:

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Fixed, thanks for pointing that out. It gets hard to keep track of all of their names. I also fixed the description because it used to be redundant.

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And here I was thinking I just wrote something somewhat sad, but also somewhat stupid and random. I guess I did project quite a bit of my own thought process here. I'm glad that I created something that people can actually connect with on a personal level.

Ganondox, bravo, good sir. You gave me the feeliest of feels. :raritycry:
With your permission, could I please write an unofficial sequel? I would of course give you credit as the original author. If you don't want me to, that's cool.
Thanks you, and cheers! :moustache:

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Go ahead, I'm extremely flattered to here that you think something I made is good enough to make a fan work based off of it. :pinkiesmile:

Lol I clicked that link at the end, Party your life away. it was so SAAAAAAAAD!!! :raritydespair: By the way, how do you link? I've been trying for ages!:rainbowderp: Please tell me! By the way, I felt so sad for Pinkie! Rainbow Dash could've been responsible for a death! Could you please make and alternate chapter where she doesn't survive? PLEASE! :pinkiesad2:

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How did I link? Um, I dunno, for some reason the youtube there is broken. (use url= in the front tag, url in the closing tage, and enclose the text to display between the tags.)

Alt ending? Hm, maybe later, I'm a bit busy now, if you want me to churn something out now I assure you it's gonna suck.

2755703 Thank you, anyway! :twilightsmile: I appreciate it!

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Oh here you go, just for fun.

Alturnit Endun

Penkee tok da niff and pushed it in2 h3r chess. It went in reel deep. then she wa liek "o mah god, i look att all that blud' cuz she lok don an der lotsa red blud tha wa red she wud a bin sad but was cundt be ssad cuz she was ded tha weas veri saad and all the poni fiends crid all nite lone

teh nd

2760384 lol
Needs a proof read! :trollestia: XD

Sequel plz:pinkiehappy:

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You can go write it.

4025836 okie doki loki!

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Of course it won't be official or anything, I'm just saying I have no interest in writing in a sequel, at least at the moment.

:rainbowderp: That was....


Dark. :fluttershyouch:

But very well written! Good job!

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