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When Lyra was a filly, she had an imaginary friend like so many other fillies her age. Lyra's friend wasn't a pony though, but a strange bipedal creature from a land called Earth.

Like other fillies, she eventually outgrows her friend and moves on with her life: making real friends and learning music.

Unlike other fillies however, Lyra's friend returns one day with stories of wars and magic in his lands that had kept him from visiting. Many fantasies of these strange humans return to Lyra when she learns that her friend might not be so imaginary. What will she do with this knowledge?

And how with all the other ponies who can't see this creature react to the changes in Lyra?


This story is inspired by this song: One of Us by Aviators and Lectro Dub Edit: Updated the link to the Aviators actual Youtube page.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 25 )

1771801 Thanks :) Trying to do something somewhat original with this story. I know it doesn't look as much right now, but stick with it :)

Definitely something different and by all indications it will be something good,

I enjoy this.

It amuses me.

Continue.

1786712 I have every intention to. Unlike my other stories which have a few key points I want to hit and the rest is just sort of winging it, this story I know exactly where it is headed and mostly how to get there. I have a couple weeks off for the holiday after this week as well, and should get some stuff uploaded even faster once that happens.

Thanks for sticking with it, and I'm glad you are enjoying the tale thus far. :twilightsmile:

As a side note, I am currently looking for an artist to create some cover art for this story. Clearly whoever does this will be told the future of the story so a fitting piece of work can be created. If you are an artist and interested in this, please send me an IM. :twilightsmile:

1839820 Odd, it used to have it. Site update must have dropped it somehow. When I get back home to a computer that is easier to use, I'll update that again. Thanks for bringing it to my attention :twilightsmile:

This is where the real cross-road starts, the thin line that you will have to balance if you hope to keep this from falling into junk. So ya, no presser!:pinkiehappy: Keep up the good work!

Oh my goodness! This is such a wonderful story :pinkiehappy:

Please please please continue it! I wanna find out what happens next!

The best part I liked was the lore on the human side of things. You know that would make an amazing fantasy novel if you went through with it. The concepts you envisioned were amazing and sent my imagination working.

3368532 I'm glad you are enjoying it thus far. The story has been on a temporary hiatus due to real life getting in the way (I type this from a hotel room as is, work has me flying all over the place). I'm actually about to work some more on the chapters now, but it will be a bit before an update is available :)

As for the human lore, it was something I came up with a long time ago (well before MLP, around the time Final Fantasy VII was new) that I had developed slightly, along with a mix of things I have read or through of since then :)

3391064

I'm just really glad to hear that this story is still alive and kicking, asleep maybe, but still kicking!:rainbowlaugh:

You have no idea how many great stories I've read that had their authors just give up on them :fluttercry:

Hope your schedule clears up and that you do well on your job so you can keep writing!

3391344 Understandable. I've seen many stories die off as well. As for this one, I'm sticking with it. We just launched our product at work, so next week I shall have time to work on this when not setting up for my Zeldathon stream on my twitch channel (incoming plug: twitch.tv/mylittlegamers or www.mylittlegamers.com) :)

4022158 Hey hey.

I have every intention to continue this story, but right now I'm working on my other story, Of Loyalty and Chaos. Once the next chapter or two of that is up, I'll bounce back over to this. :twilightsmile:

And how with all the other ponies who can't see this creature react to the changes in Lyra?

Oh, I'm sure that Pinkie can see him. Even if she won't admit it.

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