Lyra believes she is human and always tries to play her harp.
BonBon is a mature pony who love to cook and make sweets. Her favorite sweet to make are BonBons.
In a relationship their are always ups and downs.
These are just some of theirs.
Lyra believes she is human and always tries to play her harp.
BonBon is a mature pony who love to cook and make sweets. Her favorite sweet to make are BonBons.
In a relationship their are always ups and downs.
These are just some of theirs.
Interesting, but there are typos:
“But I’m Hungry and tired!”
Hungry should not be capitalized
I looked up and it was starting to pore
Pore should be pour
Dinner also ends up unnecessarily capitalized.
Always annoys me that I can point out typos and clunkiness in oher's works but can't sfind it in my own.
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LEEDLE LEEDLE LEEDLE LEE
1809621 huh?
1809732 patrick does it in "shanghied" its a spongebob episode
I awoke to the smell of waffles. 8:00 am. I would begin teaching how to play the Lyr in an hour.
Lyre
1817588 good I was worried I was wrong
2578358 yes, really.
I love this story, it's perfect.
By the way: licorice tea is best tea
2579899 hm, I guess I need to try it
2584555 ya sorry bout that. I didn't have any good ideas