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You do know that because Alicorns are rare, and that the only two are royalty, they should have probably had more of a reaction to him?Plus, I don't get it at all.
He's just a pegasus right now. I plan for him to become an alicorn later. but he's just a pegasus. didn't you read that part?
this is pretty good
continue
Because you track my story,and the fact that this will probably be good, I'm tracking! Good luck!
Although... it is very mistake prone. Want a proofreader?
is this gonna turnout to be another romance ficjavascript:smilie('');
this is nice
Waiwah
get away but make it close make where you end up with flutter only
"Unfortunately it seemed waking a Twilight is like waking a Snorlax..except I had no flute."
"I dodged as she tried to use Headbutt. Then she tried Double Slap. It was super effective."
Epic Pokémon reference!
pretty good so far. /tracked
141971 what this guy said
140789I could use one. If you could do that i'd be very appreciative
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Sure just PM when you need me.
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Thanks..I think I'll writeup something tomorrow maybe Saturday.
Ya mean 'Raperlot'?
Maybe...Everyone knows how the mare to stallion ratio in Equestria is. To think some wish this on themselves
Forced as in fus-ro-da forced of you had to do it forced
*flips a coin* hmmm looks like this coin wants to see phoenix get raped.
if you could would you make it a choose your own adventure were you put a mini chapter for both endings but they lead to the same place
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I just might do that...It sounds hard though...
appledash definitly
I CHOOSE WHATS BEHIND DOOR NUMBER 2!...in other words i mean "Have they been saved by FancyPants and some surviving stallions"
At least someone doesn't the crew get raped..or close to it.
I say they get keep there genitiles, and are rescued by fancypants and crew
i say number 2 happens than have number 1 come and dash their hopes against the wall
149346 Oh you're just cruel. Actually not bad...
Damn, I like your style!
148604 well divide and conquer don't put AS much effort into each one
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riiiight. I just sploofed an Idea!
Number 2! Number 2! Number 2!
why is the entire text in italics?
Why do you bronies want to see Phoenix get raped? Because so do I!
ehh. Stallions? either way let spike be mentally scarred.
ehh. Stallions? either way let spike be mentally scarred. 149909 as in let him never want to go outside for the rest of his life for fear of women. Something pleasant like that
Oooh ooh. Or you could do #1 and have it be Pinkie, and like make her into that bondage and punishment crap, and have Pheonix trick her into using the bondage on herself! Like an erotic Cupcake!
good poke reference man! are you a trainer too?
on the poll thing, if its about mating season, i would want him to get away but get caught by Rainbowdash or Fluttershy. Go Pegasus!
1, nuff said.
149597 maybe light fire (was it fire?) had problems controlling himself?
I WAS MENTIONED :
(i was one of the two he mentioned)
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Cause that's how White fire talks in Phoenix's head. Killjoy already had this format<[{ so I went that route
why did you change the artwork it says you changed it to show phoenix as a Pegasus but he already was (I think you just added dark flare)
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Nope I did both...Well the other pony is...You'll see when you read pt3 of the Great Rape
Woah.
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I know riiight. Had to stop and soak in what I wrote after I finished writing.
for a while i was confused with the underlining with the telepathic coversation but now i understand it
I imagine White Fire a a gray pegasus with a blue and black mane. Am I correct?
Know what? yep cause I honestly forgot to describe Dark Flare and White until this chapter so since Dark was takin over I figure now's as good a time as any. The only difference with white is that his hair looks different I'll show in the next chapter's comments
153957 ya i did before seeing youre reply derp time
HERPA DERPA DERP
also I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I AM CONTRIBUTING TO ONE OF MY FAVORITE FIMFICS