Please, DONT READ this if you haven't read Divergent (The first book) or The Hunger Games trilogy! Thanks C:
Told form Tris's POV, may switch to Katniss. I'll let you know. Anyways, when Katniss Everdeen, Peeta Mellark,Tris Prior, and Tobias Eaton- Call him Four - get sent from their worlds to Equestria, they meet a purple talking pony who desperately needs help. She says that Equestria is in grave danger, something called Discord and Queen Chryasalis has united or whatnot. Tris and Four are not going to let this go down without a fight, and meet some strange characters along the way. But ultimately, Tris's quest is just to get home. The portal back to their place? The defeat of Discord and Queen Chrysalis.
Bases for cover all found on DeviantArt. Ponybasesrus, asdfflove, and drugzrbad. I don't own MLP, The Hunger Games, or Divergent. Thanks :D
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I cannot even.
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You cannot escape the Regidar. No matter how much you run.
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I can see it now
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Case in point.
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You need to slow down a little, since you're pacing is way fast. Also, you should give at least a hint of foreshadowing toward why exactly Tris and Four, and Peeta and Katniss are there, since it seems really weird so far that all Twilight does is give the brochure. You should also get an editor if you can (I would do that, actually).
Also...THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You are literally the only Divergent crossover on this mother-bucking site!
You're supposed to press enter and create a new paragraph every time a different person talks. Also, the line where Twilight says that she read "their books" could use a bit of clearing up, since at first glance it sounds like she read books that were in the world of Hunger Games, not literally The Hunger Games. Sorry if that line was confusing...
Can you add this story to the Divergent fan group on this site? There aren't any stories in it and it's kinda sad.
I really like this. You just need to slow down a bit, be a bit more descriptive...oh, and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.