The main character is feeling homesick, but doesn't want to leave Luna behind, so, with some help from the Mane 6, he tries to figure out a way to be able to travel between dimensions.
Rated Teen for some gore-filled scenes and a reference to sex and bondage, though there is no actual major description to either. NO CLOPFIC HERE! DIS CLEAN!
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Because the first one wasn't enough.
Whats good about a Non Weapon?
Love weapons...............weapons....
1712339 If you've read further into the story, you'd understand what it means: a weapon against fate that you use to mend ties rather than damage bonds.
is better so far.
yeah, no.
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1741605 Lol, love your hate, and that gif is fucking hilarious! Please! Read what I've got up of the next story and criticize some more!
dude this story is friging awsome man
i absolutly love it
1782834 Wow, you are like the first person to comment in a positive way on here without being the least bit condesending or going like, "you need to fix this," or, "you need to change that" on this story
Don't know what to expect...
so then
Time to head in
CHHHHAARRGGEEE
Did you REALLY have to explain what P means?
My review: Poorly
It has potential, but lacks any great writing flair, it seems rushed , too short, WAY too much unneeded violence and profanity, as well as having no build up nor any explanation, for, practically anything.
Sorry, but it is rubbish. My opinion.
1844800 And I thank you for your criticizm
1845890
Anytime
But a weapon that is not a weapon do you mean something that can be used to "attack" the borders between realities?
Say for instance, a TARDIS?
2148425 Perhaps...
LOL, why does this story suddenly have even more views than the third part?